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Hei friends here is the next update of Samne Wali Khidki... sorry for the late... ye mera kabhi na thik health mujhe pareshan karke rakh diya hai uff... mere purane dushman cough n cold lout aya hai😭

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Part 6: Color it like Maan Singh Khurana 

 

In Girl's room

 

Girls entered their own room and turn the light on and shouted as if an earthquake has come only to destroy their place.

 

Pari: arre ye kya ho gaya? Mera Hrithik Roshan Mallika kaise ban gayi?😲

 

Nupur shouted from other room: arre yaha sare floor pe glue pare hue hai

 

Nupur, Gunjan and Tara entered Geet's room where Pinky and Pari was shouting as well. Tara switched on the light of drawing room.

 

Tara: look here.. our drawing room has become a canvas.

 

Nupur bumped on something and there was a small tub of glue.

 

Nupur: now what the hell is this? Glue? In our room? what's happening here? Koun aya tha yahan?

 

Pari: aisa ghatya kaam koun kar sakte hai. Or koi andar aye kahase? and why Geet didn't say anything?πŸ˜•

 

Pinky went to Geet and called her: Geet Geet. She didn't respond. Pinky checked.

 

Pinky: arre she has high fever yaar.

 Everybody became concern.

 

Pari: oh God, she said she has a minor head ache ' ye larki bhi na' khud doctor hai par apna koi khayal nahi' fever hai bata deti to kya hum film ekhne jate.

 

Tara: Pari issi liye to nahi batayi. Uff tu bhi na now call a doc.

 

Pari was going to call doc when their calling bell rang. Tara opened the door and Doctor was there. Everybody was astonished, they didn't even call doctor and he is here, standing in front of them.

 

Doctor checked Geet: don't worry.. its nothing serious' tumme se job hi wet kapre se uske forehead sponge kiya' good job.. ussi wajah se temperature kam ho gaya' I am prescribing medicines par abhi ke liye just give her paracitomal or calpol ' she will be fine by tomorrow.

 

Everybody noticed the bowl of water on the table now. Strange' who will do this? Koi aake inn logoka ghar ko cartoon nework and rhyme book banake Geek ki dekhval karke chala gaya' isn't it odd? From when does their pg has become Hogwards han? They thought.

 

Nupur escorted Doctor. Doc gave a look to the wall and smirked a little. Nupur was embarrassed. She coughed a little.

 

Nupur: Doc waise who called you? I mean how you know Geet is ill.

 

Doc frowned: I thought one of you called me. But yah she was sounding like an elderly woman.

 

Bod went out. Nupur closed the door and turned. Everybody was there.

 

Nupur to everyone: Elderly woman? Kaun ho sakta hai? Dadima? Dadima yaha ayi thi?

 

Gunjan: To kya Dadima ne humare ghar pe ye sab kiya?πŸ˜•

 

Everybody gave a look at her.

 

Next Day

 

Geet wake up. She was feeling good. She tried to remember that she was dreaming something very strange but couldn't remember everything but Maan is sitting there in front of her. She jerked her head thinking fever made her dream this things. The next moment her eyes stacked on the wall .. what's that? Is it her room? when Pari entered.

 

Pari: Good morning Geet' how are you feeling now?

 

Geet: Morning Pari, I am fine now' but  what's this ' kaal kuch hua tha kya?

 

Pari: puch mat.. kal film se loutke ye sab dikhne ko mila' today we ware gonna clear this mess but drawing room ka halat dekhne layak hai' it has become a cartoon network.

 

Geet: what?

 

Pari told her everything what happened after they entered the room. The doctor and the bowl of water everything.

 

Pari left. Geet tried to think. So it was not a dream. Maan was here. He came here to do all this but when he saw her ill he took care of her. She saw him sitting by her side and soothing her with wet cloth. Geet was amazed. A smile crept on the corner of her lips. So he is nt that bad she thought. She read the rhymes. There were lots of ghatiya rhymes on her name but surprisingly they don't make them angry. She laughed reading them. She came out and saw the drawings in the drawing room.

 

Pinky came to her: Geet ab batao iss paintings ka kya karu.

 

Geet: rehne do.. acchi painting hai.  

She left the place leaving everybody in shock.

 

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In Krishna Vihar

 

Everybody had a blast on last night with Vodka except Maan. Nobody understood why Maan is upset after this grand victory but celebrated whole night. And now they are having their hang over. They were sleeping peacefully when somebody knocked the door of Dev and Dev(2)'s room. actually there was a little change in their living arrangements. Earlier Dev, Dev(2) and Samrat used to stay in a room and Adi and Mayan in another but after Maan's 'sudden' entry Dev and Dev(2) started staying in one room, Mayank sifted with Samrat and Adi and Maan in one room. But it is a little different today. As last night was a celebration night so everybody slept in Dev's room after drinking and celebrating. Only Maan was in his room.

 

Mayank somehow managed to wake up and open the door. Dadima was standing there with a little boy. The boy entered the room and poked Dev(2).

 

The kid: Dev uncle please give my colors back .. I need it.. I have to go for my drawing class

 

Mayank was shocked. Oh no they have totally forgotten about this. But its normal after such big achievement forgetting trivial things is natural.😳 But what now what? Maan took those colors for paint Geet's wall so he went to Maan.

 

The Kid: Dev uncle are you listening.

 

Dadima was standing there not knowing what to say. Dev(2) answered in his sleep.

 

Dev(2): yah I am listening but why are you asking me for drawing class? I can't draw. Me to can't even draw an apple.

 

The kid: but my colors.

 

The word color in that kid's voice went straight into his brain and it soaked all the colors from his face. He wakes up in a jerk.🀒

 

Maan was thinking should he call Geet to know how she is now when Mayank entered the room. He told everything. Maan remembered that he has forgotten poster colors there in girl's pg.

 

Maan: Oh no I forgot the colors there ' Mayank ask Dev to manage the kid for some time I am going to buy new colors for him.

 

Mayank: but Maan its Sunday .. all shops are closed.

 

Maan: to kya kare ' I can't go to girl's pg and ask, I forgot the colors while painting your room .. can you return it huh.😑

 

Maan put on his shirt and went out in hurry. Dadima saw him, "beta samhalke jana" ' Maan was out of Krishna Vihar before she could complete. "he Sri Krishna what's in your mind. Iss Krishna Vihar ko to ap Kurukshetra banake rakkha hai ' kya ye aisahi chalta rahega ya phir you have some other plans. Are you planning to reverse the story here' 1st Krukshetra then Brindaban ?? hmm lets see what's in your mind?"πŸ˜‰

 

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Maan was returning home. Mayank was right, he couldn't find any shop open. He was about to enter the house thinking what excuse he will give to that kid, he saw Geet is coming out. Geet smiled to him he smiled back but then thought is it him whom she gave this smile ' he looked at his sides.. no there is none else. 



Geet came to him.


Geet: sorry

 

Maan: huh sorry for what?

 

Geet: I must not do what I did that day' you guys must have feel insulted that day.

 

Maan: Its ok' maine bhi uss din apko kuch zada hi chida dia tha. By the way, what are you doing here? I mean you have fever na? You had such high temperature last night, you should rest now.

 

Geet frowned: aapko kaise pata I had high temperature? Aap ne check kiye the kya?

She smiled.

 

Maan stammered for an instant answer: wo wo Dadima said you have fever. Dadima se hi mujhe pata chala.[He delivered a stupid smile.]πŸ˜ƒ

 

Geet: hmm' I wonder how Dadima came to knowπŸ˜›

 

Maan: hmm me too thinking t ' Dadima ko sab pata chal jata hai strange na? [Maan said again with a stupid grin.] waise how are you feeling now?

 

Geet: I am fine now. Fever nahi hai. Was going to chemist's.

 

Maan: koi fayda nahi ' koi bhi shop open nahi hai' its Sunday na.

 

Geet: no actually I know a chemist personally .. me a doc na. unke ghar jake le ayungi' oh and I have another work to do.

 

Maan: ok may I give you company?😊

 

Geet: Yaah why not.

 

They just took a few steps when a kid's voice stop them. The boy ran to Maan.

 

The Kid: Maan uncle apne mera color le aye. I was teaching Dev uncle and others how to draw. It was so much fun. But color karna nahi sikha paya' they sid you have gone to bring the colors' par ao aye nahi or mera mom ka phone aa gaya. Ap mera poster color le aye.

 

Maan had no answer. He was not thinking what to answer to this kid but was thinking what to say to Geet? What if she understood everything.πŸ˜• He looked at Geet. Geet was looking at him very casually as if there is nothing to be surprise. Maan cleared his throat.

 

Maan to the kid: no dear' today I can't get your color' sorry ..

 

The boy was upset. His face became small. He said "Ok" in a faint voice and started walking away, when Geet stopped him.

 

Geet: Gogol are you talinkg about these colors?

 

Geet bring out some poster colors from her bag. Gogol's face glowed with a big smile. "Yes yes these are mine." He said. Maan was more than shocked.😲 He felt his innerself wants to run away from the place but his legs are betraying him. He looked at Geet.Geet was still talking with the boy bending at his hight .

 

Geet with a smile: wo someone forgot this colors in my house.πŸ˜‰

 

She gave the colors to the kid. "Thank you Geet didi" said the boy. He kissed on her cheek and ran away. Geet turned at him with a smile.

 

Geet: waise you are a good painter. But you must not forget thing here and there ' dekhe tumhare dost ko tumhare wajase aj ek bacche se drawing ki tution leni padhi.πŸ˜›


 

Both laughed together. πŸ˜†


Maan and Geet finised their job and was returning their home. The lmost reached their destination when both of their mobile started ringing. Both excused each other.

 

Maan on phone : Hello' itne din baad yaad aya.. waise congo' what? Par aise why? Ok' kab? Kal? Thik hai I will be there' bye.

 

Geet on phone: Hello' itne din baad yaad aya' waise congo' what? Par aise why?

Ok ' kab? Kal? Arre pehle kehna chahiye than a' aj to Sunday hai koi parlor bhi open nahi hai' ok I will be there ' yah yah I will be on time' won't be late ' bye.

 

Maan: Sorry wo Important call tha.

 

Geet : mera bhi.

 

Maan: waise sorry for last night.

 

Geet: Thanks for last night


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Maan entered the room .. all his friends was tired after a long drawing class from a little boy. Maan found it funny... its some colors that took all the colors of his friends' face but added a different color in his smile... Well black and white ko color karna koi Maan Singh Khurana se sikheπŸ˜‰  

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Precap: Get redy for a Big Fat Wedding n mastiπŸ˜†

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Hei friends I am thinking to write some SS on MAANEET... it will be like Kurbaan Hua ... will have 5 or 6 updates only... Mrityunjai readers knows I have promised some SS but this story is not one of them as it came in mind later but thinking to write it 1st... it will be a MAANEET love story with a back ground of ancient MAHENJODARO... don't worry it wont be boring history but a passionate love story... so MAANEETIANS r u interested in it... let me know ... n here is the banner pic for u 




Edited by sayaneegupta - 12 years ago
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wondaful update relii swt
cnt w8 2 read more plzz update soon x
fanx 4 da pm πŸ˜Š
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i just read all parts...

its really a interesting story...
cont. soon...
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Nice update... And do continue with the new ss...
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awesome part...

N regarding new story mohenjadaroo i will definetly love 2 read ur story .. U r outstanding in writing such historic n love stories...

N plz plz plz update mrutunjai.. I am literally visiting the topic daily for update...
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n dear i love ur writng style.. May it b anything

but after mrutunjai n kurbaan hua i bcom huge fan of ur historic love epics..
Make many more such stories as there r only few people who can write such challenging stuff with out spoiling its essence n makeit out of char...
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sooo love is on the air na... nice update dear... waiting for the next one... 

and yaaa, pls dont even hesitate to write the new ss of maaneet on Mohenjodaro background. I m sure, it will be another great update like, Mrityunjai. Pls go ahead dear... and pls pm me as well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
till part 6
awesome story dear...
OMG i had wonderful time reading this...
in every update i couldnt stop laughing...
damn awesome...
complete entertainment...
cont soon dear and pm me...