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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
interesting dear...
loved prologue ..
continue soon.
waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Congrats on the new SS...

loved the prologue...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Fabulous and awesome.šŸ‘
Waiting for continuation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~~ dil ki bateein~~



Chapter 1:

"I Love you Maan" ...she touched the page on which the words were written,closed her eyes for a few seconds and soon opened them looked at the diary and closed the book hardly and almost threw it in the locker angrily and closed it.

Here in the maan's room:

He saw her going out of the room n he closed his eyes for hurting her. He saw the hurt in her eyes for his behaviour. He hate to see her hurt that because of him. But he cant do anything he has to be like this only. He forgot how to smile long back. Now he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA not the happy n fun loving MAAN. Yes once he was very happy but life always is not a flower bed. Life is full of ups n downs. We have to face the fact. Now maan singh khurana is doing the same. He is facing the reality in that process he became like this.

He opened his eyes which r filled with anger n pain. But all can see the anger in his eyes but not pain. No one understands his pain. All r afraid of his anger. But there should be someone to understand his pain. He is waiting for that shoulder but all are afraid of his anger or for the sake of his money n name.

In the locker room:

geet closed the locker n sat on the bench angrily.

Y maan y u r so rude? What happened to u? Kya se kya ban gaye ho aap. Aap kabhi bhi itne rude nahi the. Aisa kya hogaya ki aap aise behave kar rahe ho. Aap mera maan nahi ho mera maan nahi. Kya aap pehle jaise nahi bann sakte. I cant see u like this maan. Aap kitne acche the always smile on ur face n always wants others to be happy. Now soo rude n arrogant n not caring for others. R u the same maan which I saw in the school. wo.. maan tho kabhi aisa nahi the. Muje mera maan wapis chahiye. Par muje kaise pata chalega ki uska problem kya hain. She closed her eyes a lone tear rolled on her cheeks. She immediately wiped her tears n composed herself. No geet u should be strong. Kabhi bhi tum uske baare main nahi sochegi. Now he is ur patient n u r a doctor thats it.

Just then her pager beeped an emergency case she should immediately report there. She wore her doctor coat n went to the OT immediately. When she was going out of the locker room she didnt see meera who is standing in the corner listening to geet. She too had tears in her eyes. She wants her friend to be happy but she is depressed day by day. But she is acting as if she is fine.

She is not my geet. She is very sweet n bubbly but now she is very much changed. Babaji plzz meri geet ko uski khushiyan wapas dejiye. Uska maan wapas dijiye. I want my best friend back. Meera silently prayed to babaji that some miacle should happen. But god has his own plans "jo bhi hota hain acche ke liye hi hota hain." meera too resumed her duty. She went n checked all the interns.

In maan's room:

he was feeling drowsy because of the sedacives to reduce his pain. As he met with a major accident. He had a major operation n his right leg is fractured. Its a miracle that he surived from such a big accident. After the operation the hospital head informed about the MSK's accident in the office. Dev n annie always kept low profile because maan dont want them into trouble. So adi immediately went to hospital. On his way to hospital he informed about the accident to dev n annie. Dev is in shimla due to some project work n annie is in london for her project.

When she got a call from adi she cancelled all the meetings n booked immediate flight to delhi but her luck only next day morning flight is available. She is so helpless. Here dev immediately took the flight to delhi n rushed to the hospital.

He went to receptionist

Excuse me. Maan singh khurana is admitted in which room.

Sir he is room no. 306.

thanku. N he rushed to room no 306. he entered in the room n saw his brother lying on the bed. His face is so pale. Due to the pain he is not able to sleep n turning from one side to other. Dev had tears in his eyes n called him

bro.

Maan opened his eyes n saw his brother.

Dev. When did u come?

Just now bro. Yeh kya hogaya bro.

Kuch nahi dev bus a small accident.

Small accident? Aap ka haalat dekho bro. U take rest I will go n talk to doctor n come.

Ok.

dev went out of the room n went to doctor's cabin.

Excuse me doctor.

Yes come in.

geet didi aap?

Hey dev baito. How r u?

I am fine di. Main maan bro ke baare mein poochne ayi hu.

Oh.. he is fine now. But he is very weak n he needs 2 weeks bed rest. Tum usko samjao he is not listening to anyone. He should not stress himself coz bohot bada operation hua hain.

Reports sab kuch normal hain na di.

Ha dev sab kuch normal hain. N he has to stay here atleast for 1 week.

Ok di I will take care. Bye.

Bye.

He again checked his brother who is sleeping now. He decided to go home n freshen up n come back. Dev went to home.

Its time for geet to leave for home. So took all her belongings n was about to go home. She decided to go n check maan once.

Wen she went to his room he was sleeping peacefully. She went n checked his pulse without disturbing his sleep. She gave him the injection. When she was about to leave she turned back n saw his pale face. She couldnt control n kissed his forehead n left from there.

Precap: maan : hey girl.. r u new student.

Girl: ye... yes she said nervously.


so guys here is part 1. hope u liked hit. plzz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

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- jyothi

part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51333589


Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
maaneetmaahi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awesome update dear...

what hapeened to maan??
y he is so rude??...
so many questions dear...

thank u for the update..
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update!!
😃😃
Awww...Geet loves Maan but unable to understand the reason behind his rude behaviour!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awww geet loved maan great
awesome update
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy jyoti awesome update!!!!! luvd it yaar...but y is he so rude??? hmmm pata chal jaayega...
yehh w8ing 4 d Flashbacks...
luvd dev nd meera...dnt wry meera Geet wapas bubbly ban jaayegi...
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...šŸ‘

little confusing...but u ll clear...

hmm to geet maan se pyaar karti hai and past me kuch hua jiski wajah se maan rude ban gaya hai and some secrets...

thanks for the pm...continue soon...

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