Intezar Kab Tak..Angini..updated last part.1&2.pg2

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Intezar kab tak..

Kabir..anmol kab tak..how long you will torture yourself like this?..you are suffering so much… anmol..she is torturing me… why cant she say it and accept that we are made for each other..she has feelings for me..all she can say ..i'm rich and she will be backstabbing the one who has done so much for her..she can't break the trust and the ehsaan …its killing me inside..i will do anything for her…I love her too much kabir…I cant think life without her..I still remember the first time, I saw her at uncle raj place..the one thing I never believed in happened to me..love at first sight..after one month ,I came back home from my business tours and we were invited for dinner..raj uncle and dad are business friends for so many years..we are like family ..thats how kanchan and I became friends too... kanchan dadi is like mine too and I respect her a lot…. after meeting everyone I asked about dadi..

Flashback..

Anmol…where is dadi?..i need to take her blessing..dadi..i'm here anmol ..hearing her voice ,he turned around and completely mesmerized by the beautiful girl standing with dadi…dusky complexion.. beautiful eyes.. innocent face..straight long hair …beautiful… dadi…. kya baat hein you are praising me calling me beautiful..anmol…breaking the eye contact with the beauty standing besides dadi..taking her blessing..of course you are beautiful my dadi and in a low voice someone else too.. dadi..what are you murmuring like that?.anmol..nothing..huh dadi will you not introduce me to ..kanchan..common anmol she is dadi's caretaker not a family member..dadi..kanchan for you she is just a caretaker but for me she is my saviour..her love ..patience..caring has helped me out of a wheelchair to start walking after my accident...dadi..anmol yeh hein ragini..holding her hand in hers.. …she is a God sent angel to me and she has given me a second life..ragini yeh hein anmol sareen…she shyly greeted him and he could not take his eyes off her..dadi…I will go back in my room...you have your dinner and I'm happy to see you back…ab aa gaye ho apne dadi ko milne aana ..anmol..i wont miss doing it dadi keeping his eyes on ragini….

Back..

Kabir watching her going away with dadi suddenly I felt a big void in my heart..i felt her pain too which was so visible on her face when kanchan talked rudely about her..there was something about her that instantly attracted me to her..i was present there with all the other family members but only one beautiful face was in my thought..ragini..before leaving from there, I just wanted to see her once more but in vain..it was very restless night for me and could not concentrate in my work..i had to see her again..my luck dadi herself called me home the next day..i was elated by this call as it was a perfect chance for me to meet ragini again..reaching on time and all smile went straight in dadi's room …it faded as ragini was not present there..i could not ask dadi about her also…10 minutes passed and no sign of her..dadi was observing everything.how lost I was not listening to what she was talking about…finally I blurted it out..where is ragini?..my smile came back…you know why kabir?.

Flashback..

Dadi….i can see you are very concerned about ragini not your dadi..anmol a bit embarrassed ..its not that dadi..i mean she always stay with you…dadi…haan but she is not my slave ..anmol..with a shocked expression, i did not mean that..dadi.. I know but some people here thinks she is one…taking a deep sigh..such a sweet good hearted girl..very brave ..she has gone through very bad phase…she lost her mother in childhood and last year her father died in the accident..he was driving the car with me at the back seat and another car crashed with ours...when I came back home from hospital, first thing I did sent a message for her to meet me..i had a duty towards her anmol..i could not leave her to stay alone with her father no more in this world..she was going to leave mumbai and stay with one of her father's cousin..very mean people and she would not have been happy there..her father was very loyal to me and raj father..i had to do something and stop her from leaving..after lots of convincing ,she accepted to come and stay here..you know my daughter in law she made such a big emotional drama …she wont stay in the house if ragini stays here..my son so busy in his business and don't care wat's happening in his house..reluctantly, I had to send her to the servants quarters to stay..with her love …caring ,I'm able to walk and I'm very grateful to her...it hurts me when my bahu and kanchan talk rudely to her..what saddened me more is kanchan behavior?..i don't know who will change her attitude …that's why I called you here..how rudely she talked about ragini yesterday..anmol to himself..me too dadi..i did not like it at all… you are her friend cant you talk to her..being rich does not mean we don't value other people… anmol..i will try but she is so stturborn..dadi…she listened to you only and I'm sure you can put some sense in her ..a knock at the door…dadi..ragini come in and anmol instantly looked at the door..ragini coming in with a tray..he stood up and walked to her taking the tray from her hands..ragini totally surprised….their eyes contact and anmol said let me…dadi..dont be surprised ragini..he is such a gentleman.. you did meet him anmol..ragini smiled ..jee dadiji..anmol again murmured …beautiful watching ragini smiling...dadi….anmol where are you lost?.. ragini is asking you how much sugar in your tea..anmol a bit embarrassed..sorry..one sugar..giving him his cup ,he kept gazing at her…ragini..aap ki chai…dadi..kya ho raha hein tumhein aaj..anmol..sorry and took his cup and his hand touching hers in the process..a touch that gave both a jolt and a heart beat skip…dadi keeping her cup down..anmol and this diverted his attention from ragini..i think its time you settled down.. shaadi ke bare mein ka kya khayal hein..anmol. his gaze never leaving ragini.acchaa khayal hein..i'm seriously thinking of doing it soon.dadi..thats good news.your mother will be the most happy..she always tells me ,when my anmol will bring my bahu home..ladki kaun hein?..do I know her?..anmol just answered..very well dadi and she is very very beautiful keeping his eyes on ragini..she is the one I was waiting for..dadi..so eager to know more..naam batao..wat's her name?..anmol..her name a sweet melody…ragini looked up at him with a perplexed look and so much conveyed between them at that moment..dadi..yeh kya naam hein?..sweet melody..anmol smiled mere liye hein..its time I take your leave..i cant tell you how much I'm happy today meeting you and his eyes back on ragini..bye dadi and in a soft voice bye ragini..take care of dadi and in his heart of you too as you have become too precious for me...walking to the door, he looked back at ragini and smiled at her…dadi…he confused me with his talks.sweet melody.

Much later, ragini muttering to herself in her room..sweet melody..matlab ragini..this brought a smile on her face..she remembered how anmol hand has touched hers and how beautiful feeling it was in her heart..the first time they met .his eye contact with hers..her heart beat growing faster..sitting on the edge of her bed with a sadness on her face..stop dreaming …he is rich and I'm a caretaker..she picked up her parents photoframe..though dadi gives me a lot of love..i miss you both in my life..bahut tanha hein aap ki beti.. …tears coming down her cheeks..keeping the frame close to her heart.kab tak akheli rahoungi..Anmol in his room..i'm in love sirf ek nazar mein.. unbelievable.. my heart pained when dadi told me about how you lost your parents..i promise ragini ..you wont stay alone in life soon you will have a lifepartner who will be yours forever and ever..

Back from flashback..

Kabir..how you confessed your love to her ?.by your say she was always in the company of dadi..anmol smiled the only way I could meet her was at dadi's place..it became a routine after work…I missed her whole day waiting for the time to be with her...days became weeks and ragini was more comfortable in my company talking and smiling more.. so much unspoken words through our eyelock..i knew she too having feelings for me .. she too will eagerly wait for my arrival..i had to meet her alone and confessed my love…my luck once more kabir and thanks to dadi..

why ragini not accepting anmol's love..the true reason behind it..read climax of story to know more..

will update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW What a Beautiful surprise.🥳🥳🥳

Awesome introduction of my angini.👏👏👏

You made my day my friend.🤗🤗🤗

Will post my comments soon.😃

Going to bed dreaming my angini scene.😍😍

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wow savee amazing os cont soon
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Anmol….dadi asked me a favor that day ..ragini by my side in the car and I could not believe my luck..a perfect time to confess my love..

Flashback..

Dadi..anmol can you do me a favor?..anmol..anything dadi.just ask..dadi..since ragini is here taking care of me ,she has always accompany me everywhere... doctor's appointment ..temple…she rarely goes out alone only if she has something to buy for her.she is so well mannered..will always ask for my permission first?.. so many times ,I have told her to go whenever she wants but wont do it..she is alone no friends .. kanchan never talks to her ..it makes me sad…she deserves some happiness…today I have given her a whole day break..i trust you anmol..take her out from here or else she will stay in her room…neither kanchan nor her mother is at home..if they know, they will create a big fuss about it..anmol..dadi don't worry..i promise, I will make her day memorable..dadi..here she is..ragini smiled on seeing anmol in dadi's room..aap yahan ..sham ko humesha ..dadi..i have called anmol and you going out with him..ragini..mein .kahan..dadi..yeh anmol se poocho..you are free today now go with him..ragini..par dadi aap akeli kaise..aap ko meri zaroorat hogi..m'aam will be angry, if she knows I have leave you alone..dadi..i will be very angry if you don't listen to me..anmol take her out of this room..anmol…please lets go and its dadi's order..

Much later..

Anmol..did you enjoyed your visit at the mall?..ragini all excited ..haan bahut..anmol in his thought I want you to always smile and be happy like this ragini..sirf ek baar haan kaho aur mein tumhein itni sari khushiyan dounga..just say yes and I will shower you with lots of love..ragini's voice brought him back …ghar chalein..anmol.no way there is more surprise for you..lets go and minutes later they were at a restaurant..the manager..sareen sir …your table is reserved as per your wish…just follow me..ragini a bit shy ..jee mein kabhie .anmol..dont be shy ..i'm with you and there is always a first time for everything.. ragini smiled and felt comfortable being in such a lavish place with anmol..his presence always raised her spirit ..anmol saying thank you to the manager..its perfect..once alone ,he looked so lovingly at ragini all smile admiring the decor and beautiful flowers..ragini..its so beautiful..anmol..very beautiful… ragini..lowered her gaze..i meant the and could not utter anything as anmol was close to her..he lifted her chin and made her look into his eyes..a complete silence between them and all they could hear was their heart beat.at last anmol said...ragini I have so much to tell you..i cant keep it anymore.. ragini so softly saying her name..from the first day I met you ,my life has changed..you are always In my thought..he smiled at her..tohra intezar aur… first our lunch ….

Ragini alone thinking what anmol has to confess to her…smiling ,thinking how anmol has been so caring to her..serving her lunch and made her feel at ease with him..anmol..i hope its about me you are thinking and having that beautiful smile which makes your face glow …blushing ,she lowered her eyes…ragini and she looked up at him..waqt aaa gaya hein tumhein apne dil ki baat bataoun..its time I confess to you wat's In my heart..i love you ragini from the bottom of my heart.love at first sight and an undying one.you are the one I have been waiting for to be my lifepartner..i will always love you and be yours forever and ever..cupping her face,i love you too much..in your eyes ,I can see your feelings for me too..am I right ragini?..kuch kaho..sach hein nah..tum bhi mujh se pyar…ragini's tears streaming down her cheeks..anmol ..dont cry.. wiping her tears..ragini moved away but got a hold on her hand..turning around,gazing at anmol..aap apne dil ki baat itni aasani se keha par main kaise kahoun..you confessed your feelings so easily to me but I cant do it.. mujh jaisi ladki sirf sapna dekh sakte hein..i can only dream of such beautiful thing happening to me..the truth is I have to face the reality also..aur sachaai yeh hein aap bahut amir ho..you have your family who may want to find a girl on same level of status as yours.. I don't want to hurt anyone feelings and its better we don't..anmol..you don't want to hurt anyone then why are you hurting me?..did you find a lie in my confession?.was I joking with you?.do you see me as a person who will ditch you?..listen to me ragini..i love you and it will be you only..i'm not going to backstep but will stand by your side .. i will do anything for you ..you see my money ..status as a barrier in our relationship then fine ..i can leave everything and start from scratch with you by my side..ragini..i did not say that..i don't want you to go against your family for me..moving closer to her..then wat's the problem?..gently touching her face..look in my eyes and tell me ..dont you have feelings for me?.. ragini..bahut hein par darr lagta hein.. anmol.why are you scared?...ragini..i have heard so much bitter words towards me..i'm abshagun.unlucky...anmol..these people are fools and blind..you can never be unlucky to anyone..dadi loves you and she said the truth ..you are an angel who has healed her and to be in my life forever..trust me and my love ragini..wiping her tears,now give me a smile…she did so ..anmol breathing a deep sigh..you just kill me everytime with these cute smile..ragini flushed face looked away…whispering close to her ears..aadat dalo..ragini..kya..anmol..yehi..you must get used to all these praises for you from me whole our life together..ragini all smile..anmol..i told you its killing …from now on no more tears or fear in your heart..waise I'm still waiting..ragini gave him a surprising look..anmol..you did not say it..those three words to me..ragini blushing ..anmol..no this wont do though I love it when you blush..i want to hear you say it or we are not leaving from here..how do we say it?.i'm a bit of a ziddi person…ragini..a bit I don't think so..anmol laughing.. my love knows how to tease too..caressing her face with his fingers..i love you so much…ragini..i but stopped hearing anmol cell phone ringing..anmol ..i will call back. ragini..nahin..it can be dadi..she is alone..anmol..dont worry I will answer it..dad. good news..i will come later..abhi but…sure I'm coming…ragini its my father ..its urgent..dropping her at dadi's place….i wanted to spend more time with you…he picked up a bouquet of red roses from the back seat..this for my love ragini…I love you…ragini..thank you…its beautiful… anmol.. yeh sach hein you are beautiful.. ragini.. I meant …anmol..i know you meant for the roses but for me when my ragini is in front of my eyes nothing is more beautiful than her.all shy she got out of the car and before driving off.mein intezar karounga…you know what….ragini nods her head ..watching him going away in his car..i love you too anmol…

Back from flashback..

Its enough now..she will have to accept our love or she will lose me forever..kabir..anmol will you be able to move on with someone else ?...anmol..no ..my love for her is too deep but ragini is testing my patience..its now or never …she will have to answer me or it will be a very painful life for both of us if we separate..

Why ragini taking a backstep?..

Is she sacrificing her love for someone else?..

Do read last part of story.will update soon..

Edited by saveeta24 - 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS Saveeta.👏👏👏

I read both the updates in one go 😃.it was so well written combining both present and past life of anmol.👏

Anmol 's suffering waiting for ragini's confession is so sad to see.😭

WOW I just loved angini's first meet😍 , Saveeta each time you give us such a Beautiful first meet of angini 👍🏼,i cherish these forever.😍

he turned around and completely mesmerized by the beautiful girl standing with dadi…dusky complexion.. beautiful eyes.. innocent face..straight long hair …beautiful… 😍dadi…. kya baat hein you are praising me calling me beautiful..anmol…breaking the eye contact with the beauty standing besides dadi..taking her blessing..of course you are beautiful my dadi and in a low voice someone else too.. 😍❤️😍

Loved those words by dadi about ragini,👍🏼poor ragini lost her parents😭 but glad dadi is there to support her 😊,but kanchan and her mother why they are so mean to ragini.😡

I was all smile how anmol could not wait to meet his ragini 😆and one call from dadi he was there at the dadi's room to meet ragini.😆

And I loved this scene a lot 😍, you know saveeta ,this scene was in my mind through out my night.😍❤️😍

..a knock at the door…dadi..ragini come in and anmol instantly looked at the door..ragini coming in with a tray..he stood up and walked to her taking the tray from her hands..ragini totally surprised….their eyes contact 😍and anmol said let me…dadi..dont be surprised ragini..he is such a gentleman.. you did meet him anmol..ragini smiled ..jee dadiji..anmol again murmured …beautiful watching ragini smiling...dadi….anmol where are you lost?.. ragini is asking you how much sugar in your tea..anmol a bit embarrassed..sorry..one sugar..giving him his cup ,he kept gazing at her…😍ragini..aap ki chai…dadi..kya ho raha hein tumhein aaj..anmol..sorry and took his cup and his hand touching hers in the process..a touch that gave both a jolt and a heart beat skip…😍


SWEET MELODY ,This was so funny 😆, anmol saying it as the name of the girl he wanted to marry 😆. Both dadi and ragini confused 😆but later sweet ragini found out it was her name.😉 The smile and how she recollected those moments with anmol was so beautiful.😍

But poor soul became sad comparing both their status 😭but on the other side anmol so happy to bring her as his lifepartner.😃

Atlast Anmol had the chance to confess his love .😍




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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing finally anmol confessed his love hope ragini confesses as well
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So it was dadi who gave the opportunity for anmol to confess his love for ragini.❤️

So sweet dadi ,telling anmol to take ragini out and give her a well needed break from her routine work. 👍🏼Anmol must have been in cloud nine hearing it.😆

Anmol didn't want to miss any chance😉 ,took ragini to a mall 😍and then even booked a table in a restaurant.😍 Surprised ragini felt a bit shy.😍

This moment so beautiful to visualize ,😍

he looked so lovingly at ragini all smile admiring the decor and beautiful flowers..ragini..its so beautiful..anmol..very beautiful… ragini..lowered her gaze..i meant the and could not utter anything as anmol was close to her..he lifted her chin and made her look into his eyes..a complete silence between them and all they could hear was their heart beat.at last anmol said...ragini I have so much to tell you..i cant keep it anymore.. ragini so softly saying her name..from the first day I met you ,my life has changed..you are always In my thought..he smiled at her..tohra intezar aur… first our lunch ….

Why you are taking so much time anmol ,come on say soon.😆

WOW I was completely in awe visualizing this beautiful confession scene,😍

anmol..i hope its about me you are thinking and having that beautiful smile which makes your face glow …blushing ,she lowered her eyes…ragini and she looked up at him..waqt aaa gaya hein tumhein apne dil ki baat bataoun..its time I confess to you wat's In my heart..i love you ragini from the bottom of my heart.love at first sight and an undying one.you are the one I have been waiting for to be my lifepartner..i will always love you and be yours forever and ever..cupping her face,i love you too much..in your eyes ,I can see your feelings for me too..am I right ragini?..kuch kaho..sach hein nah..tum bhi mujh se pyar…ragini's tears streaming down her cheeks..anmol ..dont cry.. wiping her tears..ragini moved away but got a hold on her hand..turning around,gazing at anmol..aap apne dil ki baat itni aasani se keha par main kaise kahoun..you confessed your feelings so easily to me but I cant do it.. mujh jaisi ladki sirf sapna dekh sakte hein..i can only dream of such beautiful thing happening to me..the truth is I have to face the reality also..aur sachaai yeh hein aap bahut amir ho..you have your family who may want to find a girl on same level of status as yours.. I don't want to hurt anyone feelings and its better we don't..anmol..you don't want to hurt anyone then why are you hurting me?..did you find a lie in my confession?.was I joking with you?.do you see me as a person who will ditch you?..listen to me ragini..i love you and it will be you only..i'm not going to backstep but will stand by your side .. i will do anything for you ..you see my money ..status as a barrier in our relationship then fine ..i can leave everything and start from scratch with you by my side..ragini..i did not say that..i don't want you to go against your family for me..moving closer to her..then wat's the problem?..gently touching her face..look in my eyes and tell me ..dont you have feelings for me?.. ragini..bahut hein par darr lagta hein.. anmol.why are you scared?...ragini..i have heard so much bitter words towards me..i'm abshagun.unlucky...anmol..these people are fools and blind..you can never be unlucky to anyone..dadi loves you and she said the truth ..you are an angel who has healed her and to be in my life forever..trust me and my love ragini..wiping her tears,now give me a smile…she did so ..anmol breathing a deep sigh..you just kill me everytime with these cute smile..ragini flushed face looked away…whispering close to her ears..aadat dalo..ragini..kya..anmol..yehi..you must get used to all these praises for you from me whole our life together..ragini all smile..anmol..i told you its killing …from now on no more tears or fear in your heart..waise I'm still waiting..ragini gave him a surprising look..anmol..you did not say it..those three words to me..ragini blushing ..anmol..no this wont do though I love it when you blush..i want to hear you say it or we are not leaving from here..how do we say it?.i'm a bit of a ziddi person…ragini..a bit I don't think so..anmol laughing.. my love knows how to tease too..caressing her face with his fingers..i love you so much…ragini..

Oh No ,why anmol's dad had to call at that time.

When ragini all happy watching his anmol going😍 and even saying i love you anmol to herself😍 ,then why she can't confess in front of him.😔

What makes ragini to hold back. 😕Waiting for the next update Saveeta.👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW..savee it was fantastic... A surprice new year gift from you. A angini OS..
Continue it soon
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nice surprise saveeta. thanks. looking forward to next part
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Very Nice Saveeta...

I read both the parts and wanted to reply after reading the next one , but i guess my hands were itching so replying 😊

Anmol is really sweet and Ragini ko akhir apni dil ko baat bol dali..

He was mesmerized that she took care of dadi and helped her recover after the fatal accident..where Ragini lost her dear ones..

Ragini feeling that she is abshagun , and denying her love for Anmol, I hope she gets over tthat feeling and tells Anmol how much she loves him 😳

Waiting for the next part continue soon !👏

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