Yeh rishtoon kee uljhan-MG#3 Link/pt54 new thread

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Character Sketch

Geet Handa(22 yrs): Adopted daughter of Chaudhary Brij Singh. A very simple in nature girl. Brilliant Mind. Has spent all her life in Village - Hossiarpur but has studied to best colleges of India on merit basis and due to her brilliant record has been selected in one of the best bussiness school and is getting life time scholership for her education. Loves her family with whom she has grown up. Her family has 2 brother; tejji sing and Lucchy singh and a young sister Nandini. They all stay in Village and have studied in Village college of Hoshiyarpur. Tejjy takes care of their land.Geet has plan of working on improvement of her Village. She want to use her education for family and village who has given her immense love. With her charming look...she is the priincess of her Village ppl.

She doesn't know her real family and doesn't wish to ever know them...

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Chaudhary Brij Singh:"Very simple man but the head of the village...he is also head of panchayat"
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Vinod Handa(34 yrs):A very successful Bussiness Man from a very reputed and Bussiness family. he has very well expanded his family Bussines and is now leader in several sector i.e Car manufacturer; Insurance and oil refinary...Handa's are leading in these sectors...

everyone knows he has two sisters Sanjukta and sanjana who are married to reputed family...but he knows smthg more but not everything

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Maan singh Khurana(26 yrs):A very successfull bussiness Man and had just been awarded as youth icon...He has all his education from abroad...A very brilliant man..He has learn his bussiness ways from Vinod who he respect as his elder Brother and call hi Bhai sahab...Vinod has always supported him and he can do anything for Vinod...

He has a brother Viccky who is 20yrs of age and loves sports and a sister Annie...who is 22yrs age and goes to college and enjoy her life

Maan has big group of frnds both girls and boys in his group...all from reputed family...after his hard work in office he party hard once or twice in a month to take a break from his work with his frnds

He loves his urban lifestyle...

He thinks he is hard core bussiness man who never thinks of social work...

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Savitri Devi:Maan's Dadima, with whome he has grown up... he cannot say no to her however he tries to do so sometime... a very very nice women and very sensible

She knows the real weakness and strenght of Maan and his siblings

She is only one who knows how the broken links in Handa family can be joined...

Handa's and Khurana's have been frnds for generations

Story so far...

Geet tops in her class and is going to be awarded, she is super excited about the award as Mr Maan singh khurana is coming to present the award. She is a big Fan of his working style and the book written by him. Maan on the other hand comes to know that the talented girl has refused all offers of job but then thinks it's none of his business. He prefers to select the cream from best collage.

In the awards ceremony Maan is shocked to see the most simple girl coming up to get the reward and Geet is really nervous to see the aura of Maan on stage. But when she comes up and receives the reward Maan can see the surprise of beauty and knowledge within the simplicity. The confidence with which she speaks surprises him. He later on meets her and tries to convince her to take the Job offer. He gives her alluring offer of superb package and the chance to work with him directly. But Geet refuses and Maan is upset about her and that how could anyone reject the offer of job from khurana Group of companies.

Maan in the mean while goes to meet Vinod who seems to be very troubled on some issue but does not reveal the reason to Maan. Maan gets disturbed about it and when he reaches KM takes about it to his Dadima. Dadima gets the hint of Vinod's trouble as he have asked her favor several times but she then decides to bring her old kept promise to reality. To make Geet her Daughter-in-law.

Geet was given to Brij by Savitri Devi and so when she comes back and claim her he can say nothing as he knew this was to happen. He is also a very small person infront of Savitri Devi's hence respects all she says. He was also happy that Dadima wanted Geet to get married to her pota Maan but when Geet hears it she cannot accept it. She cannot bear how anyone could separate her from her family. But to keep Baba's promise and words and for village development she accepts. She gets the deal made that Savitri devi has to take care of the Village in this exchange.

Geet comes to KM but is very nervous that her would be is MSK whom she have refused the job offer. Dadima takes promise from Maan that he has to marry the girl she has selected for him. Maan at last agrees thinking his life is for his Dadima and he can never say no to her. Maan is shocked that it's Geet. Dadima gets them engaged in a very private affair.

Maan talks to geet and comes to know about the deal and gets really upset about it and decides to keep their relation just for name shake but Geet wants a fresh start for her life and hence tries to come closer to Maan and starts troubling him to get closer to him but once goes a little ahead and Maan is very angry at her. She goes to his room to keep sorry note for him and return the marriage deal paper but Maan misunderstands her and in anger misbehaves with her but Geet saves herself and gets upset with Maan for his low act. Maan realizes his mistake and tries to ask sorry but has to really put some effort and this brings them little closer.

Maan realizes that there is something in Geet's life that is troubles her but is hidden from him. He decides to give her time until she gains full trust on him. He tries to keep her happy by all means and also give her a good opportunity in career and chance to work with him. This makes Geet fall for him more and more and some of their encounters also bring a physical attraction for him in Geet's heart but she fears to open up or express her feelings. Whenever Maan tries to come closer to her she wants to come closer to him but gets nervous and goes far away. Maan decides not to force her. He keeps doing things to give her a fairy tale life which every girl from small town imagines of.

Maan comes to one day that Vinod will visit them and talks about Vinod to geet and Geet is excited to hear his name that she will meet such a big personality. While talking to Geet Maan realizes that Geet misses her family and so decides to take her to HP.

While on their way to HP he sees a complete new and real Geet who is a social worker and who had dedicated her life for others before he came into her life. He is very impressed by her and falls more and more for her. But when he reaches home comes to know some background of Geet's life that she is an adopted daughter of Brij and that her real family abandoned her and Dadima brought her to her Baba. She also tell him about her birth mark and the suitcase that may have something from her past family but she is never interested to know what it is, She hates them to core. But while telling the story she realizes that her love for Maan has reached such a limit that in front of his love she doesn't even feel the pain of her most painfull past. She also feels a strong physical attraction towards her.

More to continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 42

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It had been around 5:00am when they fell asleep….

Thin rays of Sun piercing from curtain were falling on Geet's eye…. She woke up and saw the time… It was 8 am…"ohhh babaji, I am sleeping till 8 am" but the moment she tried to get up she realized she has nothing on and Maan had his hand wrapped around her waist and was deep in sleep….

Sudden shyness blushed her face as she remembered her previous night…. She closed her face with her palm feeling embarrassed as what she had done….

"OMG, what will Maan think about me… it was just first night with him and I gave in all like this…. Kahin who mujhe desperate to nahi samjhenge…."

She tried to remove Maan's hand from her waist quietly but to her surprise he made the hold tighter and pulled her even closer….. her bae soft curves crushed his hard chest…. She closed her eyes again in embarassemnt….

"Chup chap soyee rahoo aur mujhe bhi sone do…." He said pulling her even more closer…..

"soyee rahoo aise…. Ohh this bright light is not helping " as with bright light see can see everything….

Least she wanted was he to open his eyes…. But Maan with closed eyes was enjoy her closeness and her soft body against his hard one…. No way he was going to let her out….

She however tried to voice….

"ohh bass kapde" "even if you dare to touch your cloth…. I will repeat whole night in this bright light….got it…. Now let me sleep"

She quietly closed her eyes…. Feeling completely shy and something more with his closeness as he had glued her to him….

But now as she had woke him awake and he could not sleep feeling her so near him…. He started moving his hand around her… and dipping his face between her curves…..

"Maa-aan" she started loosing her self to him as he started making wet kisses to her…. Increasing them with his passion…. Geet never knew when she went along with him in his world forgetting all her shyness ans wanting more and more of him…. She was returning his kisses madly and bitting him to claim him as hers… they had again a long love making session after which again they drifted to sleep….

It was 10 am when Geets eyes opened… "Maa-aan… it's alredy ten… please let me go…"

He lazily opened his eyes to see her naughtily…. "ummm… kya phir se" he winked….

Without saying him anything she puuled the spread covered herself, got her cloths and was about to go to washroom when she she realized she has completely uncovered him and he layed there sahme lessly….

She immediately ran to the washroom…. Maan took other cover and again drifted to sleep…. But when she came out the room was full of her fresh frangnance…. Maan opened his eyes to look at her…. Ohhh the fresh water droplets from her hair were teasing her cheeks, making him jealous…. She looked so tempting that he wanted to pull her again to bed with him…. But then pitied her and left her….Geet got ready and came to him…..

"Aabb maine itne mushkil se control kiya hua hai… isse khud musibat ke pass ane ka shauk hai"

He got up laying down with support of his one hand… she looked in deep thought…

"Geet is something bothering you…." "I was just thinking what you must be thinking about me."

Now Maan got idea of what she is asking… she was feeling shy again of what they had done

He cam ecloser to her ear and whispered "Hot…. Very very Hot" Geet's eye popped out…

He left her there in her confused state and got out to get ready….

They were ready and about to go when geet asked him as why he was so late last night and then the reality hit Maan….

He asked Geet to go ahead and and himself went to look out for Vinod….

Geet was all blushing with the thought of what Maan said to her and his wisper… about what they did she…. When Sanjana caught her….

"Somebody is blushing badly…." Girls- Ani, Sanjana and Sanjukta just let her take blessings of elders and pulled her away….

Sanjana kept her teasing on full poking her with weird question which she was not at all comfortable with…

"Maan aise me mujhe chor ker kahan chale gaye… phasi to main hee" he was thinking.

While Maan spotted Vinod after a long look out…

"Bhai sahib… why are you escaping… I can't see you escaping like this…. Aisee bhi kya baat hai…."

"Maan listen…."

"You very well know bhai sahib… I will not go away before listening the true problem… which definitely is a big one and I want to know the true issue… don't fake up any new story today…."

"Maan… we have a business meet in few days and then you are heading for your Honeymoon… after you are back.. I will tell you everything…. I will have to tell you or else I have no option"

"What… there is something realated to me… what is it …. I am not going to wait for anything….."

Vinod tried his hard to divert him but Maan was no where listening….. It was getting tough for Vinod to hold now….

"I have a story ….but I am warning you Maan…. If you listen to it everyones life is going to be a mess… you are newly married… I will suggest again don't force me"

Maan got more confused…. Whatever would be the case he wanted to know the truth now even more…. He felt there was something he was missing and he was now more admant to know…..

So vinod started his part of story…

"I was just 12 yrs old…. It was really a very scary night… thunder and rain… and in house to everything seemed very odd… people were behaving odd…. Then one big part of our haveli was sealed… sealed for us Kid to go there… but my ball went there and to catch my ball I by mistake went there"

Vinod was all sweaty…. Maan was now more confused…. He got an intuition that something dark is coming….

"Then I saw that there was no way out and from there I sensed something odd…. When I looked around I aw the big hall of haveli…. It was a far as I was on top lobby and the hall was at the bottom… I could not hear anything but could see….my mother was crying…… and" He described all that he saw that day…. His admant darji… crying Mom…. Begging father and savitri Dadi… running to everyone…..

Maan was full of sweat by then….his head was spinning… like everything was blank….

He was numb for few minutes….

"And then next day my 6 month old sister was no where in Haveli…"

Maan's mind was not working enough to correlate anything…..

"Main kitna kamzor hoon Maan… maine kitnee koshish kee per usse kabhi doondh he nahi paya….."

"No Bhai sahib… please don't say so…. I will find her for you…I will definitely find her for you….. Dadima must know something….main unhe naa nahi kene doonga… zameen asman ek kerdoonga…. She will have to say it out… I promise….. Uska naam kya hai"

"Aise promise nahi kerte Maan… it's complicated…. Now I will find her out… you wanted to know the truth... I said it…."

"Naam to bataiye…." "Nahi this is me to solve… I don't want to drag you….. now just leave me alone Maan"

"Why are you not telling me her name…. naam me kya hai when I know everything"

But Vinod was not going to tell him the name.

Next to be continued

Precap: Maan find out the name

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Posted: 13 years ago
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balle balle
me frst... ohhh i lv dis ff...😃
haye meri blshy blshy geet
Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago
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congratulations for new thread
awesome update continue soon
Edited by -maankimishti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update

eagerly waiting for the next part
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Cngrats for new thread
awesome update...
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congrats on new thread
awesome update
cont soon
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Its confusing handa's does't seems have any problem wid girl child bcoz vinod have two more sisters... Then y they give away geet
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congrats for the new thread.
Awesome part .
loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats Anu on the new thread...you deserve many more
awesome update...loved it totally...
it started on a romantic note with Maan being naughty and Geet being shy. But very soon Geet joined him in his naughtiness. I guess she will keep on moving between naughty and shy
and then the serious part of story...got a small glimpse of Geet's past and Vinod's helplessness. But still lot of story is to tell...
waiting eagerly for the truth and the storm it will bring with it

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