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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi All,

Due to my new involvment at personal side, it is getting tough to manage 3 FFs and so I have put this one on hold for few days.
There are lots of story and imotion going come in this FF too so I want to give nice attention to it too. So once I find ample of time I will update this FF too.
But for few days i will only update HCS and Game or Love.
But I promise I will come with nice updates on this FF too once I am back on this one.
Thanks
--Anu


OK dear we'll wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi All,

Due to my new involvment at personal side, it is getting tough to manage 3 FFs and so I have put this one on hold for few days.
There are lots of story and imotion going come in this FF too so I want to give nice attention to it too. So once I find ample of time I will update this FF too.
But for few days i will only update HCS and Game or Love.
But I promise I will come with nice updates on this FF too once I am back on this one.
Thanks
--Anu


ok we will wait 😍
bt jyada intzaar mat krvana..




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Posted: 13 years ago
will wait for u n update
take ur tym😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi All,

Due to my new involvment at personal side, it is getting tough to manage 3 FFs and so I have put this one on hold for few days.
There are lots of story and imotion going come in this FF too so I want to give nice attention to it too. So once I find ample of time I will update this FF too.
But for few days i will only update HCS and Game or Love.
But I promise I will come with nice updates on this FF too once I am back on this one.
Thanks
--Anu


we will wait dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

yes we will wait dear hi tamanna... just behind u dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi All,

Due to my new involvment at personal side, it is getting tough to manage 3 FFs and so I have put this one on hold for few days.
There are lots of story and imotion going come in this FF too so I want to give nice attention to it too. So once I find ample of time I will update this FF too.
But for few days i will only update HCS and Game or Love.
But I promise I will come with nice updates on this FF too once I am back on this one.
Thanks
--Anu


😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its okay dear..we'll wait..take your time..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 47

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"I know, for me you will do anything and that is what I don't want to"

"No Maan I don't deserve you I feel" she turned away'. Tears in her eyes. Only the thought he was troubled because of her,she felt so low.

"Maan came closer'. Geet don't do like this' I can't see you like this" he paused.

"Ok I will tell you everything."

"After so many years I got to know the truth. I never ever had imagined that there Bhai sahib was going thru all this pain for so many years"

"You know what.. when he was just 12 yrs old his small sister was sent away from the family and he could do nothing"

"This is weird' with family like them'."

And Maan told her all that he knew only not having the guts to tell the name of the girl'

Geet was all lost in the whole story' after he was done her eyes were wide open in shock.

After a while

"Maan please forgive me but I think this whole thing in different way'. I mean in this whole story how can you even think of your Bhai sahib'. My heart goes away for that little girl'. Poor soul, everything was snatched from her and such a small baby'. How did they even have heart to send her away from them'.just for simple superstition'.. "

She shied in disgust

"Sahi kaha hai'. Uchee dukan pheeki pakwan'. Such a reputed family and what went with the child of this family'. Ohh chotee bache and then a girl'. Sending her away from them forever' did they realize.. anything could have happened to her' kaise kaise logon ke haath lagi hoge' kya ky ahua hoga uske saath' OMG'"

Maan never expected this reaction from Geet as he was so much involved in his Rishtoon kee uljhan.. He forgot that Geet was a social worker by heart and she will see things with entirely diffeternt perspective. Someone drowned in guilt was of lower priority for her' the Girl was her main priority

"Geet I am fully aware of the injustice she had gone thru her'. And you don't know how much pain I feel for her'. Per bechare Bhai sahib' he is suffering too"

he knew Geet's pain very well but at present he wanted to focus on uniting brother and sister and when he knew who the sister is.

"Maan I know your feeling for Bhai sahaib but that's just a guilty issue thing' per who bachi' I mean abb ladki' I can't even dare to imagine what she must have gone thru' I must talk to dadima of her ware about' being a social worker I can't leave this issue like that'. This is a social issue'. " Geet went on completely different mode.

"Maan I will need your help'. Will you be there for me"

Maan had completely no idea what help she needed from him

"I am always there for you"

"We will need to find that Girl" Maan's heart skipped a beat' for some unknown girl Geet is feeling so much concerned and in reality she is the one.

"And one more thing , seeing the situation of that girl, if needed we will have to file the case against Handa Family"

Maan was all shocked "Gee-eet" he stode up in shock.

Geet came near him... "I know your emotion towards them but Maan app hee sochiye jo log apnee he bache ke bare me emotional nahi hue do they need sympathy from anyone."

Things were going completely unexpected for Maan.

Maan needed to think wisely to take care of the situation'

"Geet, actually the one who did this are not alive anymore aur bechare bhai sahab"

"Maan, what bechare bhai sahib'. Yeh app logon ke duniya' he should have not been bechara' as he pult all his hard work to expand his company he would have done double hard work to find his sister ' but he have to think about her after all his responsibilities are over and now this is new additional left over job that he want to do now'.. "

Geet had no emotional bonding with Vinod to she could see things with entirely different perspective and also she did not know the girl was herself and thus she was just thinking like a social worker who was concerned about the socity and most needy.

"Saachi koshish se kya nahi milta'. Baithe baithe guilt me doobe rehna' khokhlee hai yeh baat'. You will see how I find that girl"

Maan had heard lot from Geet... not being able to hear anymore about Vinod he raised his hand "Gee-eet bas"

Geet was shocked. Maan left from there to other room

When Maan went Geet sat silently''.

"what did I do' I did not even hear what he wanted to say ' bass apne baat kehtee gayee' kitne parehsan the woo and I instead of healing his pain.. kitna kuch suna dia maine' "

"And now he is angry with me."

Maan on other hand ran to other room and hit the window side with his hand in frustration'

"Chii' what did I do' how could I' I raised my hand on Geet' when I have promised to be with her every time and on top of it' she is all so true' "

"And it was me who said her real family has no right on her' their fault is not pardonable and today when it is Bhai sahib mujhe uskee baton pe gussa aa raha hai'."

Then while Geet was all worried for Maan Annie and Sanjana came and took her out for evening walk' when she hesistated as she was all lost they started teasing her so she had to leave.

Maan was caught by Viccky for some of his issue.

Maan and Geet directly met at dinner. Both were feeling guilty for their own behavior. Both were stealing glances of guilt but others took it the other way.

Then they directly met at night in their room.

Geet initiated as Maan was too guilty'

"I am sorry'. Apkee baat bhi nahi sunee maine aur"

Maan came and hugged Geet tight' "I am sorry Geet' sorry for so many things' kaise kiya maine aisa'. I am all so confused."

"What is actually troubling you Maan"

"No First you say what you think about all this'I mean about Vinod Bhai sahib situation'. I promise I will tell you my trouble"

"Sachchi??" "Hmm" he made her sit on the bed.

"Maan'. He is sad about seeing his parents with guilt' why should he feel Guilty for someone who can even think of giving away their child for one superstition'. And his guilt is OK but is not as important as the small child' he have been living with his family' got a big business ' and looking for this girl has been his side priority after all his other priority was done."

Maan was all quiet in thought'

"Should the girl forgive him and consider him as her brother and forgive him.. why should he be punished"

"Its not about him being punished' its about that girl' how can she go to the family which has abandoned her at that tender age'.anyways we should find that girl' "

"I know her" Maan said "What?? Kaun hai"

"Tum'. You are his sister"

"What'." And her mind went blank

Next to be continued
Precap:
Wrote this part in hurry... don't know how it came up.Hope OK.
Will Pm later.
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..
so finally the truth is out..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oooh
Excited for Geet's reaction to this !

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