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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.

feeling very bad for nupur ... she is so lonely, bt m happy that she has mayank n his parents ...who loves her so much...

hmm ... to nupur started feel something for mayank ... n penned down her feelings ... i hope mayank too have same feelings for her...

shilpa aunty was so nice ... unhone ek pal me hi sab samajh liya ...

waiting for next update..

jaldi update karo ...

love ya ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved both part 5 & 6
awww my mayur r damn sweet and cute
loved them to the core
nups has already fallen for her...
wow its great
loved the way maynk took care of nups
mind blowing update
keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful FF

loved all the parts
plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part...amazing...
loved it...
and really very well written by you...
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Posted: 13 years ago

SA: bolain na kiya baat hai..

Nupur: woh ap ny kaha tha na k mein socho us din apni feelings k baray mein

SA: han..kaha tha..tu kisi k baray mein socha..

Nupur: woh actually….

SA: mayank k baray mein..she asked smilingly

And nupur looked up to her, finding her smiling and raising her eyebrow is Wht..

SA: beta ji..bachy hain ap log humaray sab dekhta hai humain…so..yeahi sadu mila tha

Nupur: anty woh itna bhi sadu nhi hai…

SA: acha ji..tu baat yaha tak agai…so u love him

She noded in yes SHYLY

Tu bolo na us ko

Nupur: mein kyun bolo…aur kasay bolo..pata nhi woh kiya sochta hai

SA: aray woh naliak kuch sochy tu na is baray mein..aur mjhy buhat achay se pata hai k woh tum se pyar kerta hao

Nupur: SACH

SA: much..per us k moo se nikal wana paray ga…is ko ehassa dilo..

Nupur: kasay…ek min anty

JI baba..ji thik hai ap driver se kahien mein mayank k ghar hoon ajay laynay

SA: kya hua…

Nupur: dad ny bolaya hai…pata nhi kyun..

SA: koi baat nhi ja aur un se mil lo…hum dono bad mein baat kertay hain..thik hai…aur yeah operation mayank rekh tay hain…

Nupur: done anty..

……

Next day at college:

Mayank enter the college and waited for nupur at there usual place but didn't found her there, moving inside in clas he looked all around but she wasn't there too, sumthing feared inside him, he called her but her she wasn't receiving the call, this made him more angry…

Bunking the class he moved out and looked around the whole college but didn't find her, calling her home her nani told that she went to college and even her car was in parking…sumthing struck his mind and he went to the science section 's room..opening it he found his anger raised to the highest..

Mayank: tumhara kiya deemgh karab hai mein itni dair se call ker raha hoon, tumhain sari duniya mein dhood liya aur tum yaah arm ker rhai hoo..nupur kisi ki fikar hai tumahain ya nhi..

As he move near her he heard her sobs…and getting a clear picture he found her crying badly

Mayank: kya hua…why ru crying

Nupur: mayank dad meri shadi ker rahy hain

Mayank: KYA….

Nupur: mayank bauji meri shadi ker rahy hain…she said shifting her head to his shoulder..and he encircle his arms around her as fact..

Mayank: KYA…magar abhi tu ……tu….ur studing asay kasay…

Nupur: pata nhi kasay…woh kahtay hain engagement abhi kerlo shaid studies k bad ..

Mayank: oh…

This was the only word he got say in his own feeling of distress, sumthing was buring, paining, fearing , and wht not inside him. Nupur's wedding ..sounds to weird..

Nupur: kya oh….mein shadi kasay kero gi

Mayank: kyun…

Nupur: MAYANK…tum ..tum poch rahy ho kyun..phir mein cahli jao gi, hosakta hai us ko tum se mera baat kerna bhi pasnd nhi ho,..mjhy dekh bhi nhi sako ga

Mayank: ASA KASAY..asa kcuh nhi hoga…pagal hogai ho kya..per tumhari studies k kya hoga

Nupur/: uff mayank tumahin studies ki fikar hai..humara final year hai tu ek saal tu koi bhi rukh jay ga..magar phir bhi mein shaid kasay ker sakti hoon ksi aur se..

Mayank: kisi aur k kiya matalb..nupur kya bekar ki baat hai..koi shadi wadi nhi horahi hai tumhari, bekwar ki filmi baatein band kero, aur ja ker notes complete ker jo class miss ki hain aj pora din..tumhara deemgh karab hoagy ha..mein ja raha hoon…

And nupur looked at him all surprised

Saying so he left form thre, it was not nupurs mind that was off that moment , it was his mind that was not at all registering anything..he left hurrily for his home. N reached his home.

Shilpa: tu itni jaldi kasay agay aur aker room mein kyun band hai , lunch bhi nhi kiya, kya hoa, asay kyun moo latka ker bahita hai….

Mayank: maa..kya nupur ki shaid hosakti hai…

Shilpa: she chukled…lo kyun nhi hosakti,itni payri bachi hai…kyun

Mayank: aur us k bad woh mjhy se nhi milay gi.asa kasy hosakta hai..

Shilpa: agar us k husband pasand na hotu tu asa hoskata haia ur wasy bhi tum dono ki dosti bhi asi hai…kafi close ho tu kisi ko bhi doubt hosakta hai…per tu kyun poch raha hai…kya hua..

Mayank: kcuh nhi maa..plss tum jao meray sir mein dard hai ..i want to sleep…

Shilpa:a ray..

Mayank: maa pls…

He closed his eyes n shilpa left in surprise. As soon as she left he opened his eyes, her each word wos again n again cuming in his mind, her wedding..how can she get married. The feeling of sumone that close to her..wht the hell..he sat up. He hates anybody touching her, never ever any1 can do this..she is only his..the words were left incomplete as he was unable to understand all this..or rather has always been denying all this

Wht actually he is thing, she is his, his? Friend maaynk…but how can anyone snatch her from him, he cant just imagine his life without her, and a moment. Its not tht he live with ther 24/7 yet the feeling this always there tht she is his. No body has any right on her, other than him…the classes of literature already made him an a daze, listening to a lovestory he couldn't help imagining her in tht, he has been shrugging this thought for so long, desire to have her close, his..yet today sum1 else even tried to think so..how dare it..

Mayank tu yeah kya bol raha hai..tu janta bhi hai in sab kiya kya matlab hosakta hai….itny dino se avoid ker raha hoon..phir se…..MAAA…MAA..

SA: kyun chila raha hai…pagal tu nhi hogaya hai..

Mayank: tum idhar aao aur aagr yaha se gai tu mjhy se bora koi nhi hoga

SA: lo… tu ny hi bahar nikala tha mjhy apny kamray se…ap kya hua..

Mayank: maa…mein itna weird kyun soch raha hoon…

SA: kasa weird…

Mayank: maa tumhain samjh kyun nhi araha hai..

Shilpa suppress her laugh

SA: mein kya koi antar yami maha Giyani hoon…jo tera bina kuch batay samhj jao…

Mayank: nupur ki tarha batein maat kero maa pls…

SA: acha bata tu kay pershan ker raha hai..nupur ki shadi…

He lied on her lap

Mayank: han…

SA: kYa….tu janta hai is k matlab

Mayank; per asa kasay hosakta hai…mjhy kasay nhi pata

SA: kyun nhi hosakta asay…tu ny aj tak kahbi kisi k liyan asa feel kiya hai….

Mayank: nhi

SA: aj se pehly tuny kisi per itna trust kiya hai…ksis ki itni care ki hai…us din tu itna pareshan kyun tha..tu yeah baat buhat achay se janat tah k woh thik hai …n she will mange ..phir bhi tu us ko akela nhi choran chata tha..woh thik hai..phir bhi tujhy laga k woh pain mein hai…han k NA

Mayank: hmm..

SA: tu…sab chor….jab tu assignment k liyan apni feeling pen down ker raha that u..mera ya ur dad k sath nupur k nam kyun likha…hum se tu tu buaht pyar ker ta hai….tu kya nupur se

This statement left him in daze but woh tu sadu hai

Mayank: tum ny meray notes parhay….maaa

SA: nhi parahy teri MAA hoon mein…sab pata hai mjhy…andaza bhi hai tujhy tu apni choti se choti kamiyabi us k sath kyun share kerta hai..sab se pehly tum era pass us ko kyun liya…aur aj..us ki life mein inta close joi araha hai tu tujhy jealousy kyun horahi hai…kay kerany k dill chaha raha hai us laraky ki

Mayank: QATAL..he said in high anger…maa tum mjhy aur confuse ker rahi hoon..

SA: ray hat mein tujhy confuse nhi teray deemgh k fuse sahi ker rahi hoon…ab sirf us k baray mein soch us ko apny sath soch…phir pata ker apni feelings k baray mein …

Aur han dair maat ker…agar woh kisi aur ki hogai na tu zindagi bhar asa hi sochta rah jay ga..aur is mein kuch galat nhi hai

She left leaving a confused mayank..there a lot more things he was thinking apart from just wht he has feeling for her….

The next day at college was quite for both of them, it was difficult for him to be now with her, thinging about her the other way round, yet he even cant left her alone..or rather himself without her..

Mayank: hmm..woh…tum ny dad se baat ki..

Nupur: tumhain kya fark parta hai…she collected her things and moved out

Mayank: wht do u mean mjhy kya farak parta hai..tumahri life se mujhy koi fark nhi paray ga…he was walking matching her pace..

Nupur: han nhi parta warna tum kal yeah nhi kahty k yeah sab meri filmi batein hai samjhy….tum jao na apni class lo..phir kaho ga mein ny miss kera di…she said wiping her tears…mein shadi hi kero gi ab tu..engagement bhi nhi…jab nhi hongi na tumahri life mein ..tu tum khush rahna..

With few second what happened left her in daze… she was been pulled inside there most loved place the empty class room. Pined against the wall, make her gasp, breathless..n shiver with his closeness..yet the rage in his eyes were making her scared

Nupur: mayank…

Mayank: Ms nupur bhushan sochna bhi maat k tumhari life mein meray elawa koi aura ay ga bhi..ya tum ko mein kahin bhi kisis bhi idiot k pass jany do ga samjhi tum…mjhy kis se kab kya farak parta hai tumhain andaza bhi nhi hai…so donot u dare say that u will leave me…

Nupur: kyun…she threw her nost awaited question praying she may listen to wht she wants

He looked away n than looked back

Mayank: tumhain kya lagata hai…he said while smiling

Nupur: mjhy kuch lagta waqt nhi hai..chor mjhy..she said avoiding to look in his eyes

Placing his hand on her cheeks making her to face him …

Mayank: chorny k liyan hi pakra hai….

Nupur/: tu kyun pakra hai..

Mayank: tumhain pata hai…phir bhi…he smiled n said cause I love u ..

She smiled widely n with a seocd hugged him tight….i love u too…with that he too embrace her in his arms..

After 2 days of som much of restlessness he found so much of peace..so much of relive that he himself was surprised..she who sumhow with his reaction that day thought he actually didn't love her..she was fearing that he may say no..thats why today when he came infornt of her and again said nothing she couldn't hold her tears..

But still she couldn't hold her tears, feeling sumhting wet on his shoulder..he felt a bit worried

Mayank: nupur roh kyun rahi hoo…

Nupur: u will stay with me always na..

He tighten her grip he knew why she fear this in her heart..

Mayank: u doubt

Nupur: no …but..

Thing wht maybe troubling her today…Oh freak her proposal..

Mayank: donot worry abt ut dad…mein baat kero ga uncle se..

Nupur: i am nt afraid of that..n even I don't care…she said in full juvenile way

He moved a bit away with frown

Mayank: matlab…

Nupur: ahm…kuch nhi…I mean I know u will handle dad..

Mayank: nupur…I know u preety well..tumharay words se jan sakta hoon mein kya khichdi pak rahi hai….sach sach bolo

Nupur: tum yeah baat waps tu nhi lo gay ..

Mayank: kaun se…

Nupur: yeahi k u love me

Mayank: pagal hogai ho kiya…yeah koi baat hai wapas layn wali…

Nupur: paka na …naraz maat hona

Mayank: nupur tum bol rahi hoo ya hai nhi

Nupur: woh actually koi proposal nhi hai ..yeah tu mera aur anty k plan tha…tumhary moo se bolwany k liyan

Mayank: KYA…TUM NY MJHY SE JHOOT BOLO

Nupur: tu aur kiya kerti…tum ko koi baat seedhay samjh nhi ati hai..tu aur kya kertay

Mayank: tu tum ny aur maa ny bhi…mjhy se jhot bola…mjhy tum logo se baat hi nhi kerni hai

Nupur: mayank..dekh tum ny kaha tha mjhy nhi choro gay…aura b

Mayank: mein tumahin chor nhi raha hoon stupid….per tum dono ny mjhy…

Nupur: mayankk…woh anty tu sirf humari help ker rahin tha na….

At home..

Shilpa was laughing and nupur was suppressing her smile…

Mayank: haso haso…mein ap dono se baat hi nhi kero ga

SA: han tu thik hai maat ker…hum dono baatein kerain ga

Mayank: maaa…is ko mein hi laya hoon is ghar mein

SA: han per is ko permant position mein ny di hai…warna tujh se tu kuch nhi hoga..

Mayank: MAA…APKO ASA LAGTA HAi…thik tum dono bhait ker enjoy kero…mein ja raha hoon

SA: kaha…

Mayank: tum dono is khel mein ek aur isnsaan bhi baqra bana hai…

Nupur: kaun

Mayank: ur dad

Nupur: KYA..

Mayank: ji..mein ny un se baat kerli thi…

SA: mayank…tu janta hai is k kiya matlab hai….tu kay baat keray ga

Nupur: aur woh bhi dad se tum dad ko janty bhi hoo….mayank …ab tu hum paka gay

Mayank: tu mein kya kero…tum ny kaha tha uncle nhi maan rahy tu mjhy yeahi thik laga k uncle se baat kero..mjhy pata tha k yeah sab jhoot hai…

Nupur: yeah sab se kiya muraad hai tumhari…tum meri feeling ko bhi jhot bol rahy hoo

Mayank; nhi mein khud ko jahota bol raha hoon jhoti..sab tumhari wajaha se horaha hai…

Nupur: ji hi sab tumhair wajah se ..tum mjhy bata nhi sakty thay tumharay deemgh mein kya chal raha hai….

Mayank: tum tu mjh janti hoon na..so yeah jan nhi saki

SA: ek min..tum dono…chup….mayank…tum nupur k dad se kya shadi ki baat kero ga

Mayank: maa..pls…abhi koi shadi nhi horahi yaar…abhi mein final year mein hoon….atleast 3 saal tak tu shaid ki koi baat bhi keray

Nupur: KYA…3 saal mein tumhain kya government set kerni hai…

Mayank: meri pass job hai?..degree hai?...tum tumahray dad itny bewaquf nhi k tumhari shadi mjh se kerdain ga//aur sochan bhi maat jadli shadi kerny ka

Nupur: sadu

Mayank: thnku

SA: tu tu ja kyun raha hai

Mayank: pehly tu shadi rukhny ja raha tha..ab un ko batany ja raha hoon ..

Nupur: per dad..asay nhi manay ga…she said droping herself on sofa..

Mayank: kyunn

Nupur: cause dad buhat class conscious hain…un ko tu mein damkiya dekh ker manti …aur I donot care woh manty hain k nhi..woh koi nhi hotay meri life k decision layna waly

Mayank: nupurrr….shilpa ask him to clam down n talk to her n left them alone….

Idhar dekho…asa nhi kahty woh tumharay dad hain.. aur is decision mein hum un k shamil rekhy gay..

Nupur: per tum nhi janty

Mayank: u trust me…

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: nupur ..he cuped her face do u trust me…sh nooded in yes…tu bus let me handle it..okay..

Nupur: per woh nhi many tu

Mayank: aray yaar negative kyun soch rahi hoo..tum apany character mein raho na …chill kero…tension mjhy handle kerny do…okay.panic tu mein kerata hoon.

Bye…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
APIII🤗

ek baat kehni thi...
i loved ur Threads...
both of dem were jst awesome n u r sooo cute...
n i love ur voice...
u know i evn downloaded it...hehe
love u lodsss API...🤗

n han!!!
un-resssed...😎


Awesome update API...
i sooo loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written...
i loved it to d coreee...
awww...
it was a cute part...
finally dey confessed...
i loved dat...
waise mujhe toh pehle se hi laga tha Shilpa aunty ne hi kuch chakkar lagaya hoga..hehe
bt phir laga kya pata sach ho...
By God!!! yeh huyi na Mayank Sharma wali baat...
Ladki ke dad se khud puchne ja raha hain...
loved it lodsss...
waiting for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

APIII🤗


ek baat kehni thi...
i loved ur Threads...
both of dem were jst awesome n u r sooo cute...
n i love ur voice...
u know i evn downloaded it...hehe
love u lodsss API...🤗

n han!!!
resss😎

rofl
thnku sweety..OMG download kerli computer crash hojay ga...😆..
thnks
jao i have update WWu.res there...by the time i am pming..i will love if u coment today on that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Fiza,

amazing update ... wonderful ...😃

finally they confessed.🥳

LOL ... ye nupur n shilpa aunty r full nautanki ... bechara mayu ko kaise phasa diya ... LOL ... par accha hai, finally usne confess to kia ...😆

kya plan tha dono ka by god ... amazing ...👏

OMG ... now he is going to talk to her father ... GODDD ... ab kya hoga???😕

bt hats off to his guts👏 ... apne gf k father se khud puchne ja raha hai ... very appreciating ..👏

continue soon.

love ya ...🤗

ps : love the picture .😍... hayyy😍 ... mera mayank 😍


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sweet update...
loved the last line..that..."tum apney character me raho ...chill karo...tension mujhe handle karne do..."
that the most adorable line i must say...
really amazing update...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

rofl

thnku sweety..OMG download kerli computer crash hojay ga...😆..
thnks
jao i have update WWu.res there...by the time i am pming..i will love if u coment today on that



ji nhi!!!
meri Api ki voice sach mein bht sweet hain n yeh meri lappy ko bhi pata hain... :P
sigh!!! pata hain humne kitna late ress kiya??? :(
coz main abhi ayi yeh update mein tab main thora busy thi na :(
n maine yeh parhne se pehle hi waha comment kar diya... :'(
apne aj mujhe rulaya... :'(
love u lodsss API...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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