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Posted: 13 years ago
edited my comment on page 21 😊
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MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL OF U

Standing outside her house he was actually feeling his heart racing, he knew this was not the time for all this, but the mess his mom n his love has create he needs to make right. Pressing the bell he waited for the door to open..

Her nani open the door, with a broad smile, he said hey to her, and she escorted him to drawing room

Nani: best of luck..she said with smile before leaving

And he shock his head smilingly, bulkily nupur per gai hai….with that his cell vibrated as like a gentleman he has putted it on silent, for his serious meeting

" donot worry dude u will rock, kya ghum hai jab hum sang hain..dad k tu tum hosh ura do ga..apni sari books k reference rekh dayna woh ghoom jay gay..unhony degree dadu k paso se li hai…

Best of luck ..suniye achi kahbar lay ker ghar aai ga"

From n expresion of frown to "wht"..it a huge grin on his face he giggle reading her message. She is one pieces..the last line craked him

His smile vanished listening foot steps, he corrected himself. As her father entered the room he stod up, keenly looking at him. A stern, proud and seems like a brand store arrived in fornt of him, who was talking on phone, having his assistant with him, who seems a nerd a Robert…

He asked mayank to sit down and sat down himself to, giving his phone to assistant and mentioning a list to do work to him..

ND: ji tu boelin kya kahna chaty hain ap…

Mayank: he collected is voice…sir I study with nupur in her colloge…and wanted to talk about us with u.

Nupur' dad cant deny the confidence, and at first cuming to the point attitude , his mentioning of US, was making thing quite visible he was definitely not afraid, neither was confused about why he came here. but he can see he is smiple boy, not from a higher class that did give a – 2 to mayank.

ND: as in..he stil maintain his sterness, and that did make a mayank bit more difficult to talk

Mayank: sir, I wont beat about the bush, we love each other..

ND: wht…are u nuts…tum janaty ho kisi k baray mein baat ker raho hoo..she is Nupur Bhushan, bhushan group of industry ki eklotui warsi

Mayank: pardon my saying so sir , but I just know NUPUR, us k sur name aur us k father k business se I am not concerned…

ND: tu tum us se shadi kerna chaty hoo

Mayank: yes ofcourse..but obviously abhi nhi….

ND: acha ..aur tumahin lagta hai k hum tumahin han kahein ga….wajha

Mayank: wajha na kerny ki hoti hai….

ND: ohh..so tumko lagta hai tum perfect ho….

Mayank: ji nhi..bukil bhi nhi….per han mjhy yeah lagta hai k nupur meray sath perfect hai…

ND: kya keraty hoo..how much u earn

Mayank: right now I am studying and wht ever I earn is quite enough for my studies and my expenses

ND: tu tumahry parents tumahry expenses bhi nhi utha sakaty ..poor people

Mayank: SIR…mein earn islyan nhi kera…I want to be self made…ab tak un k hi support tha..now I want to do things on my own…

ND: acha…tu tum yeah kahan chahty hoon k hum huamri beti ki shaid k liyan tumhara wait kerain…aur asa kyun kerain…

Mayank: cause is mein apki beti ki bhi khushi hai

ND: but hum kasay man layin k tum nupur k liyan thik hoo…

Mayank: ap kasay many gay k mein nupur k liyan thik…

His answer were cuming right at spot with all the confidence that were actually somhow was impressive for him

ND: mein tum k ek saal dayta hoon…and that's unfortunely the only year ur getting..this year, proof me that u can afford nupur, is saal k end tak tumhary pass, ek secure bank balance, ya atleast ek achi job, jis mein tumhain kam se kam 3 months hochukay hoon ..is saal k end per tumhary hath honi choiy

Mayank: but sir yeah humara last academic year hai is k baad hi job mil sakti hai

ND: tu tum ko is k baad ana chaiy tha meray pass..this isn't my problem….deal or no deal…

Mayank: its certainly not a deal sir I have came here to make with u….

ND: but to have nupur in ur life, I want this much security for my only daughter….

Mayank: thik hai…I agree with it…

ND: good…so dekhty hain ab tum se kab mulakat hoti hai….

Mayank: withing 12 months for sure sir…

He said forwarding his hand to ND, and he shock them and mayank left…

Nupur's dad cant deny that he was impressed with his clear, focus and confident thought and words, yet he is not satisfied with his livening standards. Its true for him money matter a lot. If it would have been anyone lese than mayank he would have thrown him out, yet his confident and is ambitiousness, and above all his thought of making his life own his own made him give him a chance. As this one thing he loves.

Cumming out from the her house he wasn't able to go home, he text her that every thing is fine and he need to go to work so will talk to her later, he went to beach to thing what he actually agreed on..

Siting there he was thinking what will he actually do now, Nupur was right his father needs money , yet he cant deny that yes at this moment he isn't a secure choice for any one's daughter. He loves her, truly and he knew it pretty way back yet he wants to deny this fact knowing it's a hindi films plot of a middle class family boy falling for a rich girl.

But this is real life and now he has made a promise.and now he will make it real

He went back to his home, and nupur has left already. Reaching home she asked her nani and she said it was close room talks so she doesn't know wht they talked about yet ur father was smiling cuming out of the room, nmayank was expressionless..

This was a think made her pretty worried , knowing pretty well her fathers smile, she wished she had a mother like shilpa now, whom would have convinced her father and told him how perfect mayank is ..

Mayank thought its best to take advice from his father. He moved inside his room n closed the door as shilpa was busy in kitchen

Mayank: dad I need to talk

MD: wht happened..sasur ji na daat lagi..he chuckled…

Mayank: dad pls its pretty serious….unhiny ek shirat rekhi hai..

MD: he knitted his eyes brows…kya

Mayank: he wants me to have either a proper bank balance or a secure job that I have been in for atleast 3 months, till the end of this year…

MD: KYA.. I so knew it…pata tha mjhy woh kafi rich family ki hai..

Mayank: hmm…aur yeah mom aur nupur…mjhy se jhot nhi bolty tu yeah baat abhi tu paat nhi chalti na uncle ko…aur tab tak tu kcuh n kuch hoi jata

MD: hmm…ek kam ker mein apny account se pasy transfer ker dayta hoo,..6mothns mein shaid

Mayank: dad..mein koi shadi nhi ker raha abhi…aur yeah cheating hai

MD: acha bhi…hmm…so u need job…

Mayank: hmm…

MD: tera final year hai…apply kerna shoor ker…dekh akasar last semester tak job mil jati hai…try kero

Mayank: but dad mein smiple graduate hoon..achi job not possible

MD: dekho…tum apny MS k liyan scholarship apply kero, aur yaha job search kero, unhony yeah nhi kaha k tujhy koi buhat high paying job milni chaiy,…yet tu topper hai. .principal can help u…so u can get a job….

Mayank: hmm..try tu ker sakta hoon

MD: yes exactly….aur ek meri baat mani paray gi

Mayank: KYA

MD: for this year let me pay ur fees n expense, jo tu earn kerta hai us ko safe ker…

Mayank: nhi dad yeah nhi

MD: chup…mjhy nupur ghar mein chaiy samjha…he smiled…jo kaha raha hoon na ker…

Mayank: okay

MD: kya baat hai mayank tu tu devadas lag rah ahi aj

Mayank: dad pls yaar…

MD: lo itna acha moka mila hai ter tang keechny k…wasy soch nhi tha tu ksis larki k baray mein itna sab kuch keray ga..good I like it

Mayank: dad pls…

MD: acha larkiyoon k tarah blush kern band ker…

..

Nupru: KYA…tum ny baat kyun mani,..MEIN NY KAHA NA MJHY UN KI BAAT NHI SUNI…AB TU HUM PAKA BHAG KER SHADI EKRAIN K WOHI BHI A J HI

Mayank: uf…NUPUR…deemgh karab hoga ahai kiya..chill kero sab hojay ga

Nupur: kya hojay ga ..kasay hojay ga..aur agar ho bhi jay ga tu mjhy nhi chaiy…un ko pasay chaoy hony ga mjhy nhi..mayank….tum meri baat sun rahy ho k nhi…tum asa kcuh bhi nhi kero gay samhjy tum…

Mayank: nupur…pls…let me prove myself…aur dekho is mein tumhara bhi faida hai

Nupur: mjhy nhi suna..aur tumhain tu is saal hi scholarship mil jay gi na…tum ko tu abroad jana ta..us k kiya hoga…mayank tum kab se us k liyan mehnat ker rahy hoo

Mayank: suno tu…mein asay jadli settle hojao ga..MS ki scholarship k liayn hum dono try ker rahy hain…ek kam kerain ga shaidi ker k sath chalaein ga kasa…next year..simp;le na…

He prayed his this word can make her calm…else his ear is paining with all the shouts cuming form the other side

Nupur: hmm…magar mein phir bhi dad ki baat kyun mano..mjy nhi mani …tum abhi k abhi aao…

Mayank: shut up nupur…chup bulkily…mein tumahry dad k liayn nhi yeah sab apny liyan ker raha ha hoon,..meir bhi ko self respect hai k nhi…so pls let me do this…I want him to say yes willingly…he needs to accept I deserve u ..nuprrr…I want u to be with me..asa argue kero gi tum mera moral tu gaya na

Nupur: per tum aur kitna kero gay..tum janty ho na final year kitna touhg hota hai…phir

Mayank: hojay ga sab…bus u stay with me

Nupur: kay baat hai mayank shamra…kitnay dialogues maar rahy hoo..

He giggled…

Mayank: kya kero..ishq na nikama ker diya…

Nupur: lo woh tu tum pehly se hi tahy…kahama ka ishq ko batnam maat kero

Mayank: NUPUR…..

Nupur: kya nupurrr

Mayank: I love u …

Nupur; pata hai…subha miltay hain…

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Mayank: nupur ..agar tum asay hi pen ko muskrat muskara k dkeh ker ghomati raho gi tu loog tum ko pagal kahein ga

Nupur: I donot care..

Mayank: yaar dekho…I donot want to loss my only friend..tu pls..donot make me regret my confession by taking this way..

Nupur: huhh…tum regret kero ga

Mayank: ahmm..mera woh matlab tu nhi tha …mein tu bus

Nupur: mein tu bus kya …han mein tu bus kiyaaa….

Mayank: aray mera matlab hai..i m missing my firend na..orignal nupur…tu tum itna sharmo gi tum mera kya hoga..

Nupur: baat maat palto…

Mayank: nupur..donot doubt on my feelings smajhi tum…

Nupur: tu kiya kero…regret k sirf ek matlab hota hai….

Mayank: uff. ,…thank GOD ur back…aasay thik hai

Nupur: mayank…she hitted him…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

amazing update Fiza.👏

ROFL ... kya ladki hai nupur ... i just loved her sms ... dado k paiso se degree lia hai ... n also loved her suniye jee 🤣

wow ... i loved mayank's confidence ...⭐️

how confidently he talked to nupur's father ... wah ... bf ho to aisa ...😳

like his confidence ... m sure ... ND kafi impress ko gaye honge n nupur k liye unhone mayank ko hi choose karlia ... aakhir experience bhi to koi cheez hoti hai ...⭐️

like MD ... he is so understnading ... n love his bonding with mayank ... mujhe nupur ghar me chahiye ... wow ... how beautiful ...😃

i loved nupur's reaction ... bhag kar shadi karenge ... sahi hai ... ye soch sirf nupur ka hi ho sakta hai ...🤣

mayank is so sweet ... he respect ND very much ... jab k nupur pata nahi kya kya bol rahi hai..😊

love their lil friendly moment.😃

m sure he ll prove himself soon...😃

continue soon.

love ya ...🤗



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update lvd it thanx fr PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Fiza ji
beautiful update...
Weldone
very nice part
Do cont. it
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
how confidently mayank talked wow ladka hu tu aisa... lolz...
faria ka comment miss ker rahai hu iss pai... 😉
and i m impress by mayank father how helpfuland understanding he is... love dit...
now m sure he'll prove himself and make himself proud for every one...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...
loved the conversation mayank had with both the dads😆
loved the confidece he had while talking to nupur's dad...
amazing...
waiting for the next, continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazingly wrritten..

very well..
bvery nice.. update
so her father has put a condition i just hope mayank could able to fulfill it
and i liked nupur's reaction
"Hum To Bhag k hi shadi kaenge "
that was lively...
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Posted: 13 years ago
vryy nic update diii
loved it
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u...

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