MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back uff ye mayur kab samjenge ...
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hey welcum back really happy to see u back and also back with a cool update it was really great bechara mayu un per taras bhi ah raha hai kah zabardasti unnaha ek dosra koa bardast karna par raha hai just for their parents love sajan
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back

its a beautiful update.

very nice

feel bad for mayur ... i hope they ll become friend soon

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nice updt dear
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Glad to see you back dear...

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amazing update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part😊.
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awesumesttt update

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part 7

Nupur wakes up and gets fresh she comes out and suddenly sees bed from mirror

N-itni jaldi ut gaya ajeeb hain

She goes down

Shilpa- mayu kahaan hain

N-(to herself)-upar bhi nahin naahin neeche kahaan gaya hoga

Shilpa-kya hua

N-main dekh kar aati hun

She finds him sleeping in balcony hiding face in his palms she wakes him up

His eyes were red clearly showing he didn't had proper sleep she feels sad for him

N-tum yehaan kyun soye ho bed pe so jao

He gets up but catches his head

M-mujhe tumhari advice ki zaroorat nahin hain

N-mujjhse ladai baad main karna pehle apni haalat dekho bina muh khole chalo mere saath aur bed pe sojao

His head was not in his hand so he feels its better to sleep

She brings oil to apply on his head

M-mere baalo ko chuna bhi mat

N-jyada bak bak kiya na oil sar ki jagah muh main daloongi so acha yehi hoga apna muh aur aankhen dono band karo

He keeps quiet and closes his eyes

Because of massage he sleeps peacefully hugging her lap she smiles it relieves her she can understand his situation just wanted to help him

She goes down

Shilpa-mayu kahaan hain

N-mom woh so gaye actually kal kuch important kaam ki wajah se saari raat jaag rahe the

Shilpa-yeh ladka bhi na jab deko kam main use dekhti hun tu dad ke saath chale jaana

N-main akeli chali jaongi bewajah dad ko problem hogi

Shashank-tum akeli nahin jaogi beta

She has no other option going with him in car she was silent

Shashank-aaj aapka maun vrat hain

N-ji nahin dad

Shashank-phir aap chup kyun hain shashi ne mujhe hitler toh nahin kahaan jo aap mujhse itna darr rahi ho

She gives confused look

Sha-main mazak kar raha tha acha yeh batao ki meri beti ko kya pasand hain

N-beti

Sha-aap mujhe dad kehti ho is hisaab se aaap meri beti hi hona

She smiles she never talked to shashank directly only gunjan used to tell about him he is very strict everyone calls him hitler but today he saw different side of him

N-dad main aapse kuch poocho aap bura toh nahin maanenge

Sh-poocho

N-di ne kahaaan aap bahut strict ho bilkul hitler type (she beats her head) sorry

Sh-sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahin main hun hi aisa

N-nahin dad aap bahut sweet ho

Shashank-pehli baar baat kar rahi hona isiliye aise keh rahi ho baad main apna iraada badlogi

N-mera irada nahin badlega my dad is sweet

They chat for sometime in those few moments they became very close

Sajan reach hospital flowers shower on them they were given grand welcome a small cake party was held for newly wed couple

Rahul-toh treat kab de rahe ho

G-kiski treat

R-meri shaadhi ki ofcourse tum dono ki shaadhi ki

G-koi treat nahin milegi shaadhi ke liye bulaaya wohi kaafi hain

R-yaar tune shaadhi hote hue saare control ise diya kya

S-usne jabardasti cheen li

G-sam

S-kahiye ji

G-tumhein main baad main dekhloongi

R-ladkiyon ka sabse common line hain waise yeh karti kya hain

S-naye intern dekha hain

R-oh who she is ver hot

S-usse shaadhi karlena answer mil jayega

R-ek answer ke liye life barbaad karoon kya

S-maine kiya na pehle aise hi lagega phir aadat pad jayegi

A voice from back

Oh really

He turns it was gunjan

S-tum gayi nahin ab tak

G-sorry woh purse bhul gayi thi main jaa rahi hun you continue

She leaves in anger

S-mar gaya aaj

Rahul smiles

At home mayu gets up with smile

Lagta hain nupur ke massage ka asar hain

M(to himself)itna kyun has raha hain tabiyet toh teek hain

he feels quite better goes and gets fresh when he comes out finds nupur on bed reading book from mirror

M-tum gayi nahin ab tak

He turns and doesn't find her

M-zaroor oil main kuch milaaya hoga mujhe paagal banane ke liye

He goes down and has his breakfast or lunch anything

M-maa nupur kahaan hain

Sh-teri tabiyet toh teek hain

M-aapko bhi yehi lagana I think mujhe bhai se check karwaana chahiye zaroor oil main problem hain

Sh-yeh oil beech main kahaan se aaya

M-saare problem ka jad oil hi hain

Shipa-mayu tu kya bol raha hain

He narrates morning incident

Shilpa ' baat yehaan tak pahunci aur humein khabar bhi nahin hua mujhe toh baal chune bhi nahin deta tha phir aaj nupur se kya baat hain(teasingly)

M-itna khush hone ki zaroorat nahin hain usne mujhe dumki di isiliye chup rehna pada

Saying this he leaves

Shilpa-aate waqt use apne saath laana

M-main uska driver hun jaise gayi waise hi aayegi

Shilpa-dad lekar gaye the

M-dad se kehna laane ke liye main lekar aane waala

Shilpa-lagta hain gaadi patri pe aarahi hain

He goes to court she calls shobha in happiness (yeh moms kabhi nahin sudrenge)

Gunjan was doing her work he was staring at her

She blushes slightly

G-tum yehaan kya kar rahe ho

S-meri sundar wife ko dekh raha tha

G-sam jao yehaan se

S-acha jaa raha hun 10 minute main milne aajaana

G-main nahin aane waali

S-tum aaogi I will wait for you

In court he finds nupur

M-zaroor oil ki wajah se wahaan koi nahin hain

Nupur sees him talking to himself she pats him

N-kya dekh rahe ho

M-tum sach main ho

N-kya

M-pata nahin

N-i think tumhein aur thodi der sona chahiye bewajah yehaan aaye

M-phirse neend ke baare main mat kaho sach sach bolo oil main kya milaya main lawyer hun tum mujhe paagal nahin bana sakti

N-tum already paagal ho I don't think tumhein phirse banane ki zaroorat hain go to hell

She leaves

Gunjan reaches stairs

S-tumne toh kahaan nahin aaogi

G-main neeche jaa rahi thi

S-tumhein jooth bolna bhi nahin aata

G-acha jaldi bolo kya bolna hain mujhe kaam hain

S-who main maafi maangna chahta tha

G-jo bhi maangna hain jaldi I am busy

He pushes her to wall and kisses her lips

She was blushing hard

G-yeh kya tha

S-mere sorry bolne ka style

She was about to leave he holds her wrist and gets closer to her removes hair on neck

In ears

S-mujhe jawaab nahin mila

She looks at him

G-chodo

S-nahin

G-please

He leaves her

She kisses his cheek and runs leaving him shocked

G-yeh mera style hain maaf karne ka

In evening nupur goes to him

N-mom ne mujhe tumhare saath aane ke liye kahaan hain

M-main tumhein apne saath lekar nahin jaonga

N-main bhi wohi keh rahi hun mujhe tumhare saath nahin aane ek kaam karo tum street ke corner pe mera wait karo wahaan se dono saath main jayenga kisiko shak nahin hogi

M-teek hain

He waits for her she doesn't come he calls her she lifts but doesn't talk he again calls he gets busy

Shilpa calls them to ask where were they he says they were coming and goes to court he doesn't find her there

M-yeh kahaan chali gayi

He searches for her asks some friends they say she already left

She was going in auto some gundas attack her she runs to save her life he calls her but her phone drops so she cant talk she runs leaving phone

Atlast they catch her one of them takes knife out she closes her eyes in fear next moment she feels someone drag her into his arms she opens her eyes and finds herself in his secure arms

He beats them forgetting all his senses and leaves with her in car both were silent during whole journey when she was getting down from car

M-kalse tum mere saath chalogi akeli kahin nahin jaogi its my order (without looking at her)

She doesn't say anything and goes inside

Precap mayank badtime

Sajan honeymoon

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved both part 6 & 7
i m loving this mayur-- lol lol mayu ki uparoilki asar.. lol lol lol
hehehehehe i loved it dil se...
pls do update a longgg part next time

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