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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no what would happen when geet knows abt sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 29
nice part...
poor Sameera...
Maan should tell Geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hate sam poor geet feels bad for her preacp is very scary continue dear feels bad for maan coz some times its really difficuat to choose thanks for the updates and pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
i had doubt that sam will end up like this 😡😡😡😡😡
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
if sam will be more in masti then i will give u kusthi..😡...(punch)

ena raskela ...what story is going here maan geet or sam and dumbo maan?😡

nisha are u showing all ur talents through sam?😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 30

Part 31

He take a deep breath to relax and continued vo... geet...Kc got new projet am busy with my work so I cant call you because of work pressure ...am sorry...really am very sorry he appologise

Its ok maan don't stress too much take care... maan it seems dadi is also not in home...

Yeah she went to pune to see her cousin sister who is hospitalized...

Are you are alone in home maan...

No geet I stay in office today to complete some process for tomorrow meeting

Oh she sounds sad I thought to give some instructions to nakool to take care of your food

its ok ...geet I will take care of it...You take care of your self when you coming home then...

you are always busy with your business meeting and dadi is also not in home what I will do there alone maan... here all my cousins are there and we are having lots of fun... so me and baby are not interested to come there now

I think you maa and beti is having lots of fun there with out me'

Haan.. she said with a smile and he frowned with her answers latter she continued

No maan we both miss you a lot...if I can na I will start now from here but your baby na she is making me too weak.. because of her no one is letting me to travel now to delhi...

I too miss you both very badly want you both near me now...geet did you take your medicines and ate properly...

Yeah I did... why you always posting this questions to me'am I a kid ?

He laughed at her and continued what to do geet you are behaving like kid some times now go and sleep its late already and take care of my princes...

Baby's is saying good night papa..he smiled and replied

Good night baby...and good night sweet heart...

Both cut the call smiling at the phone where sameera is just behind him and who's is hearing his conversation through out with out disturbing him

Maan you both talk like this in phone she smiled at him

Haan sam ...you know geet is just like kid...

she smiled with his choice of words..

Did you name your baby...???

Haan...Maya

did you know that this is a girl child

we both always had a argument over that at first but at last a month before doctor clarified its baby girl...

why maya? She asked

she is the magic of our love... he explained.

Maya nice name she conclude..

for a long time they talk about geet and maya...

sam who didn't get the mothers love and who can't give birth to baby further is just enjoying the feel geet had during her pregnancy with the help of maans explanation...

In between she can also feel his love towards them...

Maan is as usual over joyed to speak about his geet and baby...

Its getting late both forget to sleep and lost with in there talks after maan founds its very late and gives her medicines, made her self comfortable on bed and about to leave maan she whispers

He turned towards her... will you kiss me? She questioned

He sit beside her and said sam it's very late you have to take rest

Will you maan please she pleaded further...

He wonders is this the same sam who run away from him and avoids him when he ask her for a kiss...

is it she? who rarely allow him to touch her when they are in love she is very conservative which he always likes in her... by that time she always believed in marriage but now what had changed her is the fear of death changed her?

He remains lost in his thoughts for a while...

Maan please which bring him back from his thought..

sam he whispers..

Maan please today make me yours after this I wont ask you any thing further this is my promise...she kept her fingure in her throat

tomorrow am going back to London only another 18 hours remain for us where we are gone be together... after that I wont come back to you again more over I will not able to this is my last day..

she gulped her tears and again started

You remember those days when we are together you always long for a kiss but I avoid you but now am longing for a single kiss from you... she can't control now she cried..

He took her in his arms and kissed her to sooth her pain he continued to kiss her all over her face and to her neck which finally ends in when they become one they made love to each other...

Maaan with a huge sound geet wake up from her bed she had tears in her eyes she is in panic her eyes are terrible she closed her mouth with her hand and sit up on her bed... with that sound the whole house assembled there in her room

She hugged her maa very tightly and cried... when she came near her to console her ...

Maa some thing is going wrong maa'

Some thing is going to be wrong she murmured...

Nothing geet...its just a dream..you are dreaming see you are in home and we all here near you... she tried to console her by patting her back

Maa maan maan some thing wrong with him... maan... he is going away from me he is no more mine...she shouted...

Nothing is going to happen to our damadji.. beti her father started to console when her mother can't do...

I don't know any thing I want to go to home now she said again in panic...

Ok geet you can go but not now in morning now take rest every one try to console her maa and some elder women's slept along with her in her room... but she cant rest she had some fear in her heart which she cant explain properly she caressed her stomach and closed her eyes but didn't sleep till sun raise...


In guest house...

morning sam is still sleeping maan wear his dress freshen up and moved out he walked continuously and at last he founds a pond near by with a wonden bench near by it seems to be very old and broken he went near and sit in the bench near the pond.. in the pond water he can see his geet's innocent face again and again her giggling sounds, smile and laughs which is echoing in his ears now... his eyes went moist...


Precap:when you will think about me maan did you loves me? really? i didn't believe you are...

part 32

Waiting for your comments now its up to you to decide now who is right and who is not...😳

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

yaaa ho ...

me first at your post...
meee enjoying it...
now about the update sweety...
omg what they did ...
geet ko kitna bura lagega...
scared for precap...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wht maan did is wrong


trust...truth is on which relations stand


nd during geet preg he did a big mistake


by spending one night wid sameera


he desrve dis...


feeling very sad for geet


whts her mistake

loving maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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butwht the hell
how can he does like that
geet is his love dear
waiting for the next part
eagerly dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
really depressed to read this part...i dont know who is right or wrong...everyone has different opinions...but i dont think its love which maans demands towards geet...may be its attration...may be its the result to live together under one roof...may be she is his wife...may be she is his would be daughters mom...but if he loves her with his full heart then he could not go to that extent...love can never approve this...sams demand is right in her perspective...ok she is his first love and he felt pain to see her in that condition...but that does not mean that u can betray ur wife which is ur life according to u...sam demanded a kiss...ok maan could kiss her in her lips but why all over the face...when there is no desire for someone and u have to do something then u only do that thing not supplementary...he could kiss her only one time...he could make love...but after that he could go away from the bed...anyway this is only my opinion...i know there r many stories like this in real life...poor the better half...here geet...if u cant able to move from ur past then plz never allow anyone else...in future i know geet forgave maan coz she loves him a lot...and love can do anything...but maan should not do it...

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