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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 29

Part 30

Did you told geet about me...?

No not yet..

Why didn't? I thought you might have told to her by now...

She can't bear that I loved some one else even before I met her she is very possessive about me...

If she comes to know about me how will she react..?

I don't know he pause for a while and continue but I know my geet she will understand me...

So sweet to hear about geet... it seems she is in loving you to the core as much you love her...

Yeah she is every thing to me he smiled through out the conversation where he thinks about his geet and speaking about her...after seeing his watch he said...

Ok for now...its already very late you take rest sam... saying that he adjust her pillow and tugged blanket over her...

maan I had only one wish may be my last wish can you do it for me..

he just looked in to her eyes for the answer...

can you please show me the care and love which you had for me earlier... she removed his eye contact and said at least just for 2 days... after a long pause she continued..I need my maan who loves me...

he removed his hand from hers immediately turned opposite side to her and stares outside the window what she is asking is not possible for maan to give when he loves geet a lot but how to reject her when she is saying its her last wish once he loved her badly and madly... but now there is no love but yet he can't hate her this is the magic of the love after all she is his first love...she done so much loss to him but yet he can't hate her that too at the last moment of her life...

she continued seeing his reaction for her words...

I know maan its not right on my part to ask you this after what all I had done to you But yet I can't stop my self from asking this from you..There is no one in my life now to love me...actually to love me like you...

So I want that sweet memories back to me for my last days... can you please maan?? I don't want you to forget your geet and love me... I actually love to know about her from you... I don't want to become a obstacle between you both at the same time I want to your love for just 2days and also want the same kind of care and love from you at my last days...

she told every thing with a droplets of tears in her eyes which is ready to escape from her eyes'

Maan left the room immediately after seeing her once...

He is in garden now seeing the moon

Geet is standing near the window and seeing the moon she is very happy after she spoke with maan and smiling to her self thinking about there talk to there baby she can't sleep after the maan's call..she is caressing her bulged stomach and talking to her self

mama is missing papa too much..

Maan who is in garden seeing moon he wonders what answer he can give to sam... its very easy to say no to her but she is dying its her last wish which no other can fulfill other than maan Is it fair if he say no to her... or whether is it good to say yes to her No..how can he cheat geet his geet who is very possessive about him...he is confused...

Sam who know clearly that maan won't accept for this she is crying inside thinking about her past... she thinks that she is been cursed from her birth that there is no one there to love her from her birth till her death...it kills her inside its all for what she had done to maan other than that she didn't harm any one in this world

because she thinks money is more important than his love... for that she is being punished by god now.. she is not afraid of death she is ready to welcome her death but she wants to be loved and love maan.. but it didn't happen she is now making her self ready to hear his No..

He returned to her room and made her lie-down who is standing and tries to move away... she held his arms by holding his fist and expect an answers from him...

He nodded his head in response to yes with a smile which gives her full of strength...

She gave a big smile to him he tugged her completely inside the blanked and sit beside her in bed she is smiling with tears there is no words to express her happiness she asked him

can I rest my head on your shoulders she asked with tears and words didn't come out properly from her mouth...

he nodded and adjust him self near her on her bed her tears didn't stop yet its flowing like water falls each and every drops of her tears now wetting his shirt completely he didn't respond instead he just hold her arms lightly with in his mind he is saying 1000 sorry to his geet...

she continued... maan I thought you will say No and thought to go far away from you all

I didn't believe my self that you said yes to me...and she whisper Are you sure??seeing his face he just kissed on her forehead she lost her self for that kiss by closing her eyes and again she rest her head on his shoulders and closed her eyes with a smile as she got what she want...

The next morning is a fresh start for sam she dressed up in her favourite kurthi and jeans... came near maan calling his name who is standing near his car

maan how I look

he just said nice and both left the place leaving driver behind as maan drove

They go to every place again where they roamed during there college times... sam was full on masti mode she actually turned to her teens and did lots of masti... she really enjoyed his presence near her and lived happily leaving behind all her fears and pains...maan who did every thing just to make her happy felt relieved and get away from his guilt...

At last they reach the guest house after there romantic date and long drive...

where both felt very tired especially sam she kept all her shopping bags aside and about to fall on her bed to take rest...all at a sudden maan's phone ring...

Haan geet he is answerd in a low tone...

What happen Mr.khurana ? you seems to be forget me completely today... not even a single phone call?

He is stunned by her question Vo..mein...ge... he search for words..

You didn't call me today even once from morning you forget us totally... we both are really very very angry on you..

He take a deep breath to relax and continued vo... geet...Kc got new projet am busy with my work so I cant call you because of work pressure ...am sorry...really am very sorry he appologise

Its ok maan don't stress too much take care... maan it seems dadi is also not in home...



Precap:Maan please today make me yours after this I wont ask you any thing this is my promise to you tomorrow am going back to London only another 18 hours remain for us..

i know you all are in super anger with sam...anger is not good for healt so please throw out that in your comments..😆.

part 31

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this sam is too much
even in her last days she is only worried about herself not about maan-geet ...
and maan is hiding everything from geet ... geet will surely b heartbroken
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oh what Maan is doing...and what is Sam upto...I don't think she is dying...there is some plan cooking in her mind and Maan is falling in her trap...

what to say I don't like Maan cheating Geet...he can take care of Sam that is ok but it is not ok to get involved romantically even when it is really her last wish...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
heey sorry iam nt able to give comments 4r some parts on ur ff coz of my illness...
today i read all the parts ... they were...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg maan is gettng trappd by sameera..hey babaji!ab kya hoga?
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
precap
what the hell
no maan should not accept that dear
we cant see he touch some woman
i knew sam is a b****
waiitng for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

sam😡 ye kya kar rahe ho. maan tum ko samghdar hona parega...

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SAmmm isss tooo muchhh.. stupid, idiot...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz plz plz update sooonnn...

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