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Posted: 13 years ago
this part is really awesome
loved it
👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it
loved Maan n his replies
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi nisha nice update happy new year for u!
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Posted: 13 years ago
tx for the update, well i hope geet got her answers unless she is dumb

Happy new year dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was an awesome update nisha 👏

oh my god !!! maan was so rude 😲 to dadi

geet understand na !!!! maan still loves u !!! thats why she spoke to dadi that way !!!

i think dadi's plan is working 😆

cont soon dear and


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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 39

Part 40

afternoon at KM...

Geet founds that dadi didn't come out of her room after maan left she didn't had any thing after that so to make her eat some thing geet went to her room...

The sight was dadi maa is lying in her bed unconscious with a wet tears on her cheeks geet try to wake her up by calling her name but she didnt respond geet found her body is chill..she took her immediately to the hospital...

@hospital...

Where doc is examining dadi inside the ICU ...

Geet meera aadi pinky and all present out side the ICU pacing around in tension

Geet who sits in the corner with out a word with tears where maya is in the hands of pinky

Doc came out and said serious problem we need Mr.Khurana's signature where is he...

expect maan no one is there for dadi in delhi so geet took the papers soon from doc and signed in it but she is clueless of what she had signed latter meera explained her that its hospital procedure of getting signature from relatives to make sure if some thing happens to her during operation that hospital authorities are not responsible for that...

Meera what it means? ...

geet its just a formality you see nothing will happen to dadi ever...who said it with out any assurance she knows very well there is less possibility for dadi to came alive after these operation but yet she don't want to believe in that medicines possibilities she pray to god to for dadi's health in a while...

Geet who is very startled and panicked about dadi's health..is just cried where as every one around her is trying to get in contact with maan but he didn't attend any ones call even adi asked his some of the clients to contact him to inform about dadi's health but he avoid every ones call and no one has any idea about where he is...

adi even asked for police help to trace out his location but yet he had didn't get any clue about his location...

After a long time meera asked adi..

Adi sir...did police trace his location...

Not exactly meera he is in out of service area for a while and now his phone is buzzing but we can't trace his location due to some satellite problems

Where he went now? Why he is not at all available in such terrific situations...she fumes.

Geet kept mum she too want to scold maan for all this what he had said to dadi in the morning its is the cause for her condition now... and above all he is not attending any one's call now... why he doing all this... she is perplexed...

She knew very well that she is the reason for his anger after seeing her with tears he seems very disturbed and fumes at dadi maa in the morning regarding his marriage...#but what made him to tell dadi maa all these stuffs before leaving which hurts her who is the only soul in the world for maan but he hurts her too for geet's tears what he is trying to prove now...#

He don't know other things than hurting his loved ones...first me now dadi maa in his list now...she fumed in anger

babaji please don't let any thing happen to her...please babaji she prayed

When no one gets any clue about him till the evening... geet too got worried and when every one is out of sight she called him from her mobile once by having a hope that he will call her back at least if he seen her number in his mobile...

But to her surprise he picked the phone with in few rings...

Haan geet...she didn't speak for a while she didn't know what to speak exactly after a long pause she continues...

Maan vo ...vo dadi...she sounds very scary

What happen to dadi maa?

Maan come to the hospital...saying that hospital name she hanged up...

With in few hours he present there before ICU before her...

Where adi and meera already explained him about the dadi's conditions he has no words left to speak...

He remained stunned before ICU and looked at dadi with teary eyes through the glass opening...

@night hosp...

Where every one is tired and waiting for the doc to come out where meera who got her phone buzz and she is instructing her maid to take care of her kids...

When geet hear her conversation turn towards her and said meera

meera...you go home from morning you are here and any ways maan has arrived now so you go home your kids need you there

but what about you geet?

I will stay here till doc come out...

She turned towards adi sir and pinky and asked them too leave along with meera...

Geet are you sure you want to stay here? can you manage these And also maya is seem to be very tired what about her see her she already slept...

pinky added

Haan geet... I will stay here you go with meera and take rest maya needs rest... adi sir added

Its ok adi sir...I can manage... meera you took maya along with you any ways she has slept you bring her here along with you in the morning...

Adi sir... you too go and take rest if any thing need I will call you back... more than 2 cannot stay here in hosp as per this hospital rules... she said pointing towards to the board at the display...

Ok geet am going now but make sure if you want any help just give a call...

Ummm'she nodded ...

Before they leave she took maya and kissed in her forehead

I will bring your break fast with some necessary stuffs in the morning saying that he took meera and pinky along with him..

all left the hospital...


part 41 just below this post..

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first !!!😃

oh my god😲

dadi serious !!!!!😲

whats happening ???

will this hospoital incident bring maaneet close ???

hope dadi gets well soon.


Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 40 just above.
Part 41

Maan who lost his sense is still there with out hearing to there conversation and staring at some thing he sit in the chair near by ICU ward like a life less person...

Geet who sits before him in the opposite chair and looks straight in to his eyes...

After a while he sits straight and pushed his hairs back wards with hands and rubbed his face slightly with his both hands in the way he hide his face with his hands for a while and tears are about to escape form his eyes...

Geet came and sit near him in the next chair for a while and put her hands on his and pressed tightly...

With in a moment he hold her hands tightly with his another hand the tears which he controlled till now is escaped from his eyes and fall down in his cheeks'

Maan...she whisper

Geet dadi maa...he hold her hands and cried sab kuch mere vaja se...

No maan... its not because of you every thing will be fine...

If some things happen to dadi then I can't forgive my self...

Nothing will happen to dadi maa...every thing will be fine you stop worrying first...

this all is because of me right... she didn't respond to him yeah its correct he is the reason for dadi's condition now but she don't want to say this to him..

Geet I didn't deserve any ones love.... he cried bitterly in her palms by hiding his face

I already lost many things in my life..Am not ready to loose dadi maa now...

She kneel down before him and cupped his face with her both hands and said...

Maan don't cry please... nothing will happen to our dadi maa...

He started crying like a kid geet wipe of his tears with her both thumbs

Maan please don't loose heart nothing will happen... see dadi will be back soon and fight with you as usual

Geet... he is not able to speak now where tears in his throat is blocking his voice

Geet now who stood up and pull his head closer to her and hugged him... where his face is now pressed her tummy and she started to comb his hairs and hugged him tightly..

he is crying like a kid by holding her tightly around her waist where his face is hide fully on her tummy and his tears is wetting her sari frills

Both remain there like this for some time geet didn't have words to console him other then her action of holding him tight and patting his back...

After a while both straight them self where geet sit next to him and entangled his figures with hers tightly..after some time doctor came out of ICU and told them...

Nothing to worry MR.Khurana every thing is now under control savitri ji is out of danger but we can't say any thing clearly yet she wakes up...

Thanks a lot doctor..his eyes glow now where his teary eyes remains the same

Thank you doctor can we see her now'

No mrs.khurana After a 1 or 2 hours she will wakes up then you can see her.. till that please don't disturb her...here is the visitors room there you both can take rest there he said pointing towards that direction

Its ok doctor...we are fine here

Ok then... i will come in the morning good night mr and mrs khurana...

They both nodded and he left...

Till now maan didn't leave her hand... when she try to pull her hand he tighten his grip on hers...after doctor left also he is not ready to leave her hand...

Both again take a relax breath after doctor left and sit in the same position like before...but now they are not speaking with each other not even a small gesture they showing to each other but there hands are entangled... she even don't want to remove hers form his and the silent remain in between them till the sun raise... with out a words...

After a while a staff nurse form the hospital said to them that they can go in to see savithriji who got her conscious back...

Maan who is not ready to come inside...

Geet is immediately gone in side the door and turned to seen him who is taking steps back she asked him to come in with her eyes ...

No geet... you go in...she wont forgive me and I can't see her like this I don't have right to see dadi now...

Geet who cant understood his behavior just went inside to see dadi with confused face..

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Days passed dadi's health is improving now...till maan didn't come inside to see dadi but he used to sit out of her room all the time and see her through the glass opening when she is sleeping...

meera adi pinky and maya visit every day where as maya visit make dadi feel even better...

Geet is used to stay along with dadi to take care of her...where as meera brings maya in the morning to the hosp and take her home at night after she slept... keeping maya in hosp is a hectic task for geet she always used to pull and push the things in the table once she pulled the mouth piece and tubes which is on her body... often she shake the glucose strip and always try to wake up dadi...

what she can do then she can't see her very active dadi in this state like lying constantly in one place so she try to wake her up is the compliment given by meera when geet complained about maya's behaviour...

After few days they brought dadi back to home dadi always has some health problems but nothing went this much serious till now which makes every one afraid seeing dadi in such conditions very weak and tired...

Geet helped her to go to her room and made her lydown in her bed till now pari didn't came to visit dadi where she went to Bombay for work...she came now to see dadi in KM... dadi called vionod and asked him to call maan there to her room..

Geet didn't yet heard of dadi asked for maan in the hospital but at a sudden she is calling him now when pari came to visit her...

Geet felt may be that related to his marriage she want to talk to him personally so she try to move away from there but dadi held her hands and asked her to sit near her...where as pari took maya and went out...

Maan arrived there when pari left the place where dadi asked him to sit near her in another side of the bed..

Geet and maan once look at each other...with confused face...

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precap:::: dadi make maaneet to understand each other..

part 42

i hope you like this...

sorry for english and hindi mistakes all are due to my limited knowledge...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dwar
lively parts dear
hope nw maneet ll.undeestand
dwar
waiting for the next update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome upd8.
Maya trying to wake dadi by pulling her drips was amazing.

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