::SS- THE DEVIL'S PARADISE:: Ch3 Return of.. Pg5

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Hello Hie and no Bye Byee... Welcum to my Short Story..



Okay.. Now a small intro of my SS.
Pratigya marries Krishna to save her family from all trouble. Slowly she realizes that he loves her very much and she gives in.. However, things take a bad turn when he starts getting over-possessive. His behaviour towards her changes resulting into bad consequences.

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Chapter: 1

She walked down the huge staircase with tears flowing freely from her moist eyes. The sight of the huge bouquet of orchids bought a small n sweet smile on her face. She wiped the tears whilst walking towards the table. Besides the bouquet lay a huge card. She gently picked it up and flung it out of the window. Her smile vanished and within seconds her cheeks were glistened with tears.


After sumtime..


She almost froze at the sound of the screeching car brakes. Her body trembled at the thought of what he might do now. Her mind was flooded with the events of last night. Lost in her turmoil, she failed to see him standing right in front of her.


"Good Evening Angel!" he greeted her with his hand around her slender waist.


His touch bought her abrubtly into reality. She tried her best to move out of his grasp but in return her tightened his grip.


"Oh Come on Pratigya... We're already late. I mean.. what would Lavanya say? Its her birthday and Her best friend has still not come."


Pratigya's body stiffened. She stood silently while Krishna continued-


"Im sure you wouldnt want to be late. Go.. Get ready.."


Pratigya gave an affirmative nod and was about to walk away when-


"Angel, here.. Wear this"


He handed over a blue package. Pratigya was completely shocked. After all that happened yesterday, He still wanted her to wear that dress.


"Dont be surprised Angel. I've bought it especially for you. I admit you're beautiful.. But this dress will make you look sexier"... He whispered in her ears.


"But Krishna.." Pratigya stopped when she saw him staring intently at her. Without a word she took the dress and went to her room.




On reaching her room Pratigya shut the door and sat on the floor.


'How could he even say that. Did he forget how he almost killed a man for complementing her.'



after a while Pratigya heard Krishna banging the door.

"Pratigya.. Are you sleeping?"

Pratigya, sensing the anger in his tone replied in a feeble voice... "Im ready"


Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res
kon pp lagayi ?😕😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ye ka title Rams? OS r FF..?? Thoda description de dethe achha hota... Anywayz am off 2 read n will comment later...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arrey waah another short story...awesome Rams...bt pleej dusre ffs update karbo yaar😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mitaly..


res kon pp lagayi ?


hie sweetu..

Dats Arnav and Khushi.. One of my favs
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting dear
Wana read more
Whose in ur pp?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life


hie sweetu..

Dats Arnav and Khushi.. One of my favs

hmm ok 😆

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