Naino ki Bhasha...Samajhe na !! pt 10 -pg 133 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

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congrats for new story...
interesting concept...
prologue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshdb

wow the introduction is superb.



very colorful font.



the pictures and the brief intruduction on the pictures about maneet and abhay and payal very intresting.








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continue soon...



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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 2



3 cars slowed down deir speeds as dey realized dey hav entered in hoshiyarpur.abhi and dadi maa were in 1 car.kabeer and kavita in other, while maan wid his new bodyguard MR.LOVELY SINGH were in 3rd car...

[no offense..i liked salman khan a lot in bodyguard..dats y..]

d bad state of roads and slow speed of cars made dem realize dey hav entered sum village type area and concluded it to b hoshiyarpur...

maan sighed at d speed of car, "mr.singh...hav u ever been to such kind of place..." asked maan looking d bad state of roads, fields n village type area...to which lovely singh answer ," no sir...im basically from delhi n was specially trained for 6yrs to be kept as ur bodyguard by mr.khurana..."
maan shook his head wid a smile at d protective nature of his mother n replied, "ok..."

as dey continued wid deir talk, d sudden slip of tyre didn't go well, breaking deir concentration. d driver lost his control over d carn dere came a hit to d nearby tree...

thankfully none of 3 (maan lovely n driver) got any injury, except a small cut on lovely's hand as he kept it safely above maan's head.saving him from any injury.

d 2 cars lad long left further unaware of dis small accident...

as dey moved out of car, maan asked wid a worry ,"r u ok ?..." d casual cut was felt nothing much to lovely singh n he answered wid assurative tone, "im perfectly alright sir...i hope u r ok.."

maan smiled at his devotion towrds his work, "yaah im fine..but dis cut.."

lovely cut him instantly, "its nothing sir..just a small scratch.."

"Okkk..." maan uttered still not convinced..

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as dey searched for d reason of accident, a big unwated stone in d middle of road gave dem d reason of slip of tyre

maan sighed n took out his cell , "let me call dad..."

but to his badluck. d area was out of coverage...

maan brushed his hand through his hairn muttered litle irritated , "dis had to happen now...wat a perfect strt..."

" dnt worry sir...let me see for a mechanic...u wait in d car... " assured lovely singh

maan nodded having no option, "ok...see if any telephone booth or sumthing is dere..."

"right sir..." wid dat lovely left

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maan sumwhere had idea dat it vil take time n decided to check d area as for help and d place looked beautifull wid so much of greenary and fields...

as he started walking through d fields and side by areas.a sudden scream voice broke his trance.he searched for d source of voice but found none.he could make out dat its a female voice...and sum female was literally sreaming on top of her voice..."but who is screaming and where is she"...thought maan not finding any1 n tryed to search further...


maan searched and searched but couldn't get any source.tired he stopeed near a big tree of mango, and he realized dat d voice has became more clear and loud.he looked here n dere and finally looked up...


Wat D HeLL

WATTT

dese were only words dat his mind could thought at d unbeleivable sight in front of him..he was sure , he is dreaming..dis has to be an illusion...did he just see...a gal..

A GAL...

a gal is standing on a very high branch of d tree, and screaming loudly like a mad..

[ ignore her clothing sense and hair style..n concentrate on my written attire :D ]

his eyes popped out...

" wat is she doing up dere...how did she managed to rise till dat branch..." dats all coud think of as he kept staring at d weiredest sight..

"wat d helll...is he halucinating...or is she not human...is she a chudail or sumthing coz a normal gal can not rise till dere..." concluded maan watching quite impossible thing happening in front his eyes...

no wayyy...

she must be a bhoot (ghost) or sumthing, he swallowed his throat to breath and glanced at her face.

" she is beautifull.." thought maan looking at her beautifull face n fair color.her pink chudidar made her look like a baby doll or barbie..dose curly hairs falling on her face...dose thick n beautifull hazels showing unlimited different expressions every single moment...dose beautifull pink lips which has widened n screaming...

" Watt SCREAMING...maan u hav lost it...she is screaming for help...n u r checking her out..." scolded maan himselfinstantly..

a chudail can not look beautifull...dat means she is human...but den wat is she doing dere...

1 sec...

wat is she doing...

WATTT...

" STOPPP NOOO..."


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm 4 part 1. Saw u updated part 2 ...will wiat 4 pm bt read part 2 alreday! fab n awesum updates...well written, update soon. Sorry 4 late likes n comments
Edited by khwaishfan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update congrates for new ff dear.😊

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