Maya my love (completed)l MG//FF - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear it was an awesome post
Loved the way maan took care of geet
Thanks for the updates
Loved geets confession
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vanadhi

regular update plz...


elai unaku teriyum la enaku adu lam easy illa nu aparam yen regular updates kekura..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 24

Part 25

He sit straight and come to the present situation where geet and maan are no more husband and wife which hurts him inside...

That day evening when he is in his room working in his lap top by sipping his coffee he found some giggling sound near his door and turned to that side its maya who is crawling towards his side and get the hold of his chair and stand straight with the help of his grip..He took her in his hand immediately after seeing her cute smile...

Da'da..da.. she started to shout in a happy tone

Hey my little princess how you came here? Are you alone? Saying that he searches for some one outside by then dadi enter his room

no she is not alone hum bring her here beta

Dadi ma aap...

Haan..hum...

you bring maya here?

Ji haan hum brought her here.. now a days you are not getting time to speak with your dadi maa... in home you just keep on playing with your daughter else working in your lap top..so I just came to see you any have geet is also not in home now me and maya were alone so we both thought to disturb you...

Your both presence is not at all disturbances for me dadi ma...and my little princess I was always longing to spend some time with her he told seeing maya who is playing with his mustache

Haan woh tho hey...saying that dadi smiled at maya's mischief..and latter she made her face serious and asked maan

Maan did you decide about that ?

No dadi maa not yet..

You have to beta I know its hard time for you to decide but I always want you to be happy

but I wont be happy with your decision dadi maa..

I know that but think about my happiness you are the only grand son I have I want to see you happy..beta..

she didn't want to make further arguments so she left him alone with maya and left saying that think about it..?

he put maya in shoulders and rest on the chair with his heads facing upwards looking at the fan maya is now comfortably sit on his lap and trying to catch the image coming on the laptop which is in the near by table..

#what dadi is asking me to marry again is it possible for me to live with out maya and geet?

I know they are not with me but I can live with there memories I don't allow any other girl in my life other than geet...#he stuck with the memories for a while...after some time he took maya in his hands and hold her tightly...

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Flash back'

There life went on smooth with full of joy and happiness after they found each others love ...

Now only 6 months left for geet to complete her studies and for there second anniversary they both love each other' it's a almost the happy part of there life both felt like they are most blessed human beings in the world with there perfect life partners they become one life and one soul

There is no maan with out geet and no geet with out maan

they enjoyed there life like any thing with lots of fun and happiness all round them...

Maan introduce geet as his wife to the world on meera 's marriage every one is happy for them every one blessed them for there happy life..which come true too and also every couple is envy on them for there closeness and there chemistry

They are the most happiest couples in the world they feel like flying for some months... latter they also get fruit for there love they showed for each other..

###sorry all for tamil song in between i didn't find any good song other than this to express maaneet love for each others i know tamil people going to enjoy this song as much i do others i think there is no language barriers for love and music.##thanks to the song uploder..😃😃[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g7rEIW0etRU[/YOUTUBE]

Its yet remain in his eyes as its happen yesterday one morning when geet is get up from the bed and try to tie her hair maan pulled her hand towards her

What you doing maan ?stop all your mischief's now...saying that she throw his hand away from hers and try to move away from him and take few steps suddenly she felt head spinning and stop for a seconds ..

What happen geet?

Nothing just feeling like head spinning and tired..

Maan who wake up with a jerk and went near her and hold her in his arms and make her sit on bed are you ok ?asked with fear full eyes..

Am fine and nothing to worry Mr.khurana...she said by cupping his face

You are saying like this for a past few weeks i asked you to check with doctor but you didn't ?say one thing geet when you will obey my words? You didn't take care of your self if I asked you to come with me also you wont come what you thinking about your self am an idiot here to shout at you and care for you?

Maan relax relax why getting so much tensed relax... nothing Is wrong with me am fine as I already told you...

Is it so... ok then come with me today we have to meet doctor today..

No she said with shock

Why so??i don't want to hear any thing further... today we going to see doctor you get ready soon...saying that he get up and about to move away

She held his hands and pull him closer finally put his hands on her belly...with a blush he didn't understand anything for a while and look at her in a confused state

Humara baby she said in his ears in whisper tears started rolling down on his eyes unknowingly

Such???he questioned her

Haan...for the past one week am trying to hide this from you to give a surprise tomorrow on your birthday but you bhi na?? she turned away in a fake anger

He cupped her face and turned to his side this is the greatest gift for me ever...


precap:

I want you to always speak about me and always thinks about me and love me forever I don't want to share you with any one else maan...

part 26


sorry for hindi mistakes..😃

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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This part is specially to you vanadhi as you expect regular update i update today😳😳


but don't expect that from me its hard for me to update daily... 😉😆
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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what does it mean
dadimaa want maan to marry again
and maan said they are not there
but there memories...
pls update soon dear
reveal the past soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago


Nisha...u r not revealing their past still it is a mystery...

Daadi ma is trying to get him married...why she is not trying to bring them back together...if Maan loves Geet so much that he can't give Geet's place to anyone then what is the problem...at one time they were married...why can't now...

interesting update...thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆ena nisha raskala...😆
if i ask regular update thum masazag karthi hoon right...ur part 25 is confusing did sameera got involved in maan 's life..again ...i cant understand a bid...about thier seperation and for ur good wishes me too got runny noses.😭
what to do like friend like cold😡😆
Edited by vanadhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
but the past is still a mystry
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Posted: 13 years ago
at last every one is ready to throw chapples and tomato at me for this update i think this is the reason i didn't update regularly the story is some what tricky 😆

but don't worry all i wont stop my torture ever...😳😳 i started writing the mystery about there separation it will clear with in 2 or more updates hope you all happy now...😃😃
am sure you all going to kill me for there separation scene

here after i try to move story faster...😕
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
but dadi really thinks he will stay happy by having some one else in his life?

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