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Posted: 13 years ago
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love ur wroiting nisha
waiting for mahii mahii 😳
pls cont soon
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

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love ur wroiting nisha
waiting for mahii mahii 😳
pls cont soon


thank you dear...😃
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part 23

Part 24

Both lie-down in the floor where maan is just combing her hair with his hands with out a words where as geet is still mourning some thing with tears which is maan now wiping with his hands in the same position where both share all there pains and fears with each other the whole night and slept at last in tired..

After some time maan felt the heat from geet's body and she is shivering in fever maan felt the heavy fever and tiredness in her face and also she is shivering in cold maan try to wake her up but she is unconscious and murmuring some thing in sleep which is not clear too maan'

maan removed his shirt and try to cover her with his shirt to make her feel comfortable but he failed in his mission yet she is shivering in cold and her body is felt like a kept in eyes so much chill and maan try to make her body warm by rubbing her arms palms and feet but that has no effect on her.. his eyes now filled with tears now he is trying his level best to make her wake up and stop her murmur which has no effect on her she is still murmuring in pain unconsciously at last she told some thing which is very clear to him

I love you maan... he can't control him self from crying after hearing those words form her he hugged her tightly and said softly like wishper in her ears as

I too love you geet... I can't able to see you like this geet...

He make her head rest on his chest and he too lie-down near her by her side and caress her cheeks with his hands after a while he caress her back and hands with his warm hands to give her body warm and he catch her right leg in between his legs and caress it smoothly to make it warm and again repeat the process for another legs of her... he not slept until he found that she is sleeping with out shivering after some time she woke up...

She found very tired she not able to open her eyes properly she feel like some thing heavy over her eyes and her whole body is paining like any thing she can't even able to get up on her own she just try to open her eyes hardly to found where is she ..

She is comfortably sleeping over him..Yeah her maan is protectively holding her tightly and she is resting her head on his chest she can clearly hear his heart beat which is like a soft rhythm for her and she felt very protective now she didn't felt her body pain.. she only felt happy a million dollar smile appeared in her face

she slightly took her face little bit upwards too see her maan who is sleeping holding her tightly he is not sleeping peacefully there is a tension and confusion which is clearly visible in his face a slight moment of hers can even make him wake up..she found it clearly on his face she remember the pervious night when she is in half sleep he heard maan's words here and there and in half opened eyes she can even seen maan's tears which falls on her cheeks often..

Geet wake up..don't make me afraid I love you geet... these are the words she heard she even know that he wont slept until he found her sleeping peace fully so she don't want to disturb his sleep and don't want to move away form him don't want to break that sweet hug she is enjoying now so she decided now not to get up and again slept hearing his rhythmic heart beat..

He can hear the small sounds made by birds as there is no sun raise yet and woke up... he remember the yesterdays plight and immediately check her fever keeping his hand on her forehead and neck a slight fever prevail on her yet and her body remains chil she is sleeping restfully... he slightly put her on ground near by keeping his shirt as her pillow and left he made arrangements to take her back to home...

yet she didn't wake up he took her immediately to the nearby hospital when the his car arrived to the place they were staying doctor give prescription of medicines and put injection for her fever to calm down and told due to heavy dosage of medicines she can't able to wake up for nearly 4 hours and she have to take a complete rest for this four hours..maan take her to home where dadi is already very afraid of them came running towards them where maan already lifting geet in his arms


maan kya hua geet ko..

kuch nahi dadi bus she got injected to heavy dosage of medicines and sleeping

dadi arranged her pillows in her room so that maan can place geet on bed and left the room saying that

i will come back with in seconds.

maan placed her slightly on the bed where she is not letting him go by holding him closely her arms around his neck hoding his neck very tightly he slowly removed her hand from his neck and cupped her face caress her forehead and cheeks by then dadi enter with a first aid box to undress the bandage of maan which is strain he didn't even notice that

dadi dressed his wounds with fresh one and asked him to take rest and went out..yet there is not a sun raise occurs but sun is getting out of the clouds slowly ... he spend some time watching her sleeping and he freshen him self and started to get ready to office...

now the sun beam is straightly falling on her face and making her eyes irritating she started to rub her eyes hardly which caught maan's attention and he immediately close the curtains to make the room dark again and to make her sleep peace fully..

now she opened her eyes seeing maan..the first words form her mouth is..

are you going out?

Maan who turned immediately towards her direction answerd

First good morning tho bolo...with a smile on the corner of his mouth..

Answer my questions first..Are you going to office today?...she is fuming in anger now..

Haan there is a small work left in office need to complete it today itself its very urgent..

Now geet get up to a sitting posture glares him and said...apko patha hai you got injured yesterday... and you need to take rest say no to office work today..

Madam ji with a taunting tone he said..am fine you just take care of yourself first

She pouted and turned her face in the opposite direction..

He came near her and sit beside her with a smile and said am ok geet nothing happen to me see am very fit and fine you need to take rest first.. why you wake up so soon come on lie down now..saying that he pushed her shoulder she just respond to his caring action with out any further argument and he continued.. and how are you feeling now ??..saying that he checked her for fever by keeping his hands on her forehead and neck..

She just stare at him after giving instructions to take her medicines properly on time he started to move geet held his arms..he turned surprisingly and again sit near her with out a word

you want to go today??...you can't take leave today at least.. with a pleading voice which melts maan now he too want the same but work comes first for him he didn't postpone his programs for any one in his life..

He whispered don't see me with that pleading eyes I can't go then.. understand the situation geet its necessary for me to go today please understand na.. he said this with his pleading eyes she can't say no to that ever... she just nodded her head slightly in yes in a very cute manner..

He just bend towards slightly and kissed on her forehead with a husky voice he said thank you...and about to leave where she just hold his tie and pulled it towards her and said in a whisper don't go

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Now

Suddenly driver put a break which bring him back from his thoughts...

kya hua...

nothing sab ji just a dog run before the car..

ok be care full..

he sit straight and come to the present situation where geet and maan are no more husband and wife which hurts him inside...


Precap:no idea yet... in a confused state whether to proceed with past or else jump to their present state...😕😕😕

will give precap if once i get clear idea...😕


part 25

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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sorry for the late update I can't bear the geet ending and can't able to write further 😕 hope you like this part please keep on putting your feed backs


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wow atlast everuthing is sorted out but now in present why there is stil the difference
contiue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear say
for once what happened with them in past dear
so that they are like this
and then u can continue
wih the present dear
nice part
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Posted: 13 years ago

he knows she loves him, so he ever thought about that divorce thing?

nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks dear for PM

Excellent job. Pls do continue n Pls be in touch.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my past was nice ,

well pls make them one 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


I want and request u to first finish past...then continue present...because when past story that why they are no more husband-wife...what happened with them...this is not clear I am not able to enjoy present story...it is very confusing...where past starts and where present...

update was good...

thanx for pm
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