Maya my love (completed)l MG//FF - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg their past is still mystery!cant wait to knw their past..
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh pls geet aur maan ko mila do na pls no more separation pls 😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 24
nice part...
me still wanna know how Maya happened...
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part 25
nice part...
Dadi wants Maan to marry again?
their past is really a mystery...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb update.

loved it.
thanks 4 Pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 25

part 26


After some months...

Geet can we handle this can we both give her the best things in the world can we make her happy...

why not maan? She is one of the lucky child in the world who got the worlds best father who will love her to the core and make the world upside down for his lovely daughter...

and he continued' worlds cutest mother who make her strong and beautiful...

by the way Mr.khurana why the baby should be she why not he...

what ever geet the baby is the magic of our love she will bring more magic to our love...

day by day there love is growing as well as geet's possessiveness she didn't allow any women near maan... maan used to tease her by taking pari's name often which make geet irritating she never want to hear any girls name from maan...

one day morning geet is preparing breakfast and maan came near her and hug her from behind she frowed at him and push him behind with anger and continue with her work

he knows its the reaction for the last night scene in which he taunt geet to the core by speaking about pari...

madam ji is not yet consoled I think

ji nahi

if I say like to take u for a romantic dinner today night then...

no way you go and take your payari pari for romantic dinner today am and my baby is busy today

is it so I thought to spend some time with my baby and wife today...if you both are busy ok then I will take pari for the romantic date saying that he is about to move

geet held his hand pull him closer and put the knife on his throat and said once for all am telling you mr.khurna if you took her name again in front of me I don't know what I will do further... maan just showed fake scare to her and get a hold of her knife and said

geet you didn't believe me?

No she said with fake anger and latter she turned towards him and said I believe you and only you in the whole world but I don't want to loose you .. I can't bear any girls name form your mouth I feel very jealous I want you to always speak about me and always thinks about me and love me forever I don't want to share you with any one else...

You know for the past 2 days am getting bad dreams me with baby in my hand standing alone and you move far away from me I called out your name loudly but you didn't hear me you didn't even turn back to look at me you are moving away from me with some other girl who is very close to you and she is not letting you to turn back'

Another dream where you take my baby with you when am sleeping and disappear In the fog after I wake up I shouted and cried seeing you and baby missing and you are not near me you didn't hear me I cried like any thing in my dream...

Geet that all is just a dream why you taking all these in to your mind we are not going to be separated ever and I wont go leaving you and our baby... you both are the more precious things in my life so cheer up and don't panic

Did you talk about your dream to dadi maa and meera

Haan they told it's a kind of fear every women got this kind of dream during there pregnancy time

So every thing is clear then why you fear for that dream I will be there with you for ever...

Maan what ever the reason please you don't go away from me don't let me alone ever..

I wont geet I can't go away from you ever that's my promise...come on now cheer up and what about today's dinner date?? She nodded her head in yes in response and smiled to him

Pari also gets the same treatment form geet when ever she tried to talk about maan but yet geet and pari are close friends they share the most lovable moments with each other but pari too didn't miss a chance to taunt geet when it comes to maan...

For pari yet maan is her dreamy prince for whom she dream often...

in office maan is very professional and in home when ever pari is with geet maan know the consequence he have to face when he just look at pari so he almost avoid going in between them friendship and keep distance with her...

Maan and geet life went like a river very slow and steady with out any obstacles and worries every where happiness they are always filled with love

But life and river wont be like that for ever there is an big storm and flood will also cause the damage to the peaceful flow of the river same thing happened in there life too..

Which separate them forever...



Sameera's entry...

Sameera maan's first love...

It's a one business meet he again meet her there she is just waiting outside for him to talk to her she is completely lost all her beauty which made him to fall for her at first during there college times.. she lost her intelligence and she seems very tired and pale..

He didn't want to see her again in his life he didn't want fall for her now he just move away from her thinking not to meet her again.. but she followed him by calling out his name he didn't respond and move faster and get in to his car and tried to start but she stand in front of his car and said

Maan just want to talk to you... he glares her a angry look and get down from the car with and shut the door with a huge sound and said

stop your drama now and go away from my sight else I don't know what I will do


Precap:

I came here you to tell you one thing that there is no one for me in this world other than you...(sameera to maan)

part 27


i know you all are ready with your chappels to throw for this precap


sorry for hindi mistakes..😃

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG UN KNOWINGLY MEEE FIRST AT YOUR POST... THANKS DEAR...

MAI TO LIK RAHI THI UPDATE SOON YAAR... AND MY WISH FULFILED IN A MINUTES .
WONDERFUL UPDATE... AND LET ME ENJOY THE UPDATE KNOW EVEN WE ALL R SAD AS WE WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SEE MAANEET TODAY ON OUR TV SETS.
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
loved it
so it means due to sameera they separated from each other forever
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

OMG UN KNOWINGLY MEEE FIRST AT YOUR POST... THANKS DEAR...

MAI TO LIK RAHI THI UPDATE SOON YAAR... AND MY WISH FULFILED IN A MINUTES .
WONDERFUL UPDATE... AND LET ME ENJOY THE UPDATE KNOW EVEN WE ALL R SAD AS WE WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SEE MAANEET TODAY ON OUR TV SETS.


thank you for being my first reader of my update am eagerly waiting for your replies yet i didn't pm any one...😳



yeah its very sad to accept the fact no maaneet from today.🥺... from morning am seeing there previous episodes in youtube and consoling my self..😍
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome upadte
loved it
so it means due to sameera they separated from each other forever


yeah at last mystery is revealed... 😆
don't know how all going to accept this..

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