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Posted: 13 years ago

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So finally khushi tumne wahi kiya jo maine kaha good wo pehlewala idea achha nahi tha ap kahe aur me na karo ho hi nahi sakta ya muje bi kuch khas pasand nahi tha tabi to apse pucha
ok now the update adi getting the biggest shock of his life k mk ne assignment kiya hai hehe bechare ne khud ki chimthi kaat li😆😆😆 that was funny aur nahi to MK se assignment jo banai to kuch to hona tha
Mk ka pura adi patying mission mujhe achha laga aur adi ki prem kahni sunkar main pet pakadkar has rahi thi vo hai hi itni funny story thi pinky moge wali😆
hmm...professor mk aur geet is getting impressed hehe par precap se lagta hai msk bhi peeche nahi hai msk peche kase reh sakta hai jab mk se itna kush kar diya hai vo kehte hai hum bi kisi se kam nahi
continue soon
love-Piya love u alot shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
nice part...
MK is trying to patao Geet...
cont soon...

thanks alot di
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-5

Thanks alot for ur all encourage but this time i dont get time to reply u all individually.Sorry for that.

I dedicate this part to my dear friend Zahra.Today is her birthday

Romeo-Professor MK jinda baad.

Geet goes from their while smiling.

Meanwhile in basket ground

MSK[while playing basketball with friend]-Muje to samj nahi a raha ke me aur MK bachpan se ek saath padte ayi hai use to english nahi ati to fir vo english kab seek gaya?

Guy-Koi baat nahi use kya lagta hai english bolkar vo bhabi ke jyada kareeb a jayega.

Teji-Muje to lagta hai hume bi gedia shedia band karkar englsih seekni hi padegi.

MSK- Oye hum log english ke lia nahi bane hai.15 saal[warsh] ho chuke hai angreji seekhti hua.Hume to 15 salo me nahi ayi to ab 15 dino me kya ayegi.Hume to punjabi se hi kaam chalan padega.

He comes out from ground and sits on stairs.ALL other also come and sit with him.

Teji-Ye too kaam karab ho gaya.

MSK-Muje to ek baat peet me pach nahi rahi ke MK aur angreji.Ye chakar kya hai?

Teji-Chakar hai yaar vo jo profeesor adi hai na vo de raha hai MK ko english ki tutions.

MSK-Professor ADI.Lo ji ab to hogya kaam tammam.MK to pehle hi kam nahi tha ab ye professor ADI bi saath mil gaya uske.Mushkil ho gai ab to.

Guy-Hai yaar

Teji-Ek idea hai MSK

MSK-Teji yaar ab tumhe bi idea ane lag gae?

Teji-Mera ek padosi hai advocate lucky vo humari madat kar sakta hai.

MSK-Yaar humne koi murder kia hai jo koi vakeel[advocate] ke jaroorat ho hume.Ye dil ke mamle hai yaar dila de.

Teji-Suno to sahi yaar LUcky and ADI ek hi college me padte the aur dono ek hi ladki ke peeche the.Us ladki ka naam tha DOLLY.Vo to UK chale gai.Aur ab ye dono ek dusre ke dushmaan hai.

MSK-Lucky and ADI aur beech me DOLLY.Teji Muje ek baat samj nahi ati ke ye ladkia hi ladko ke beech ladai karwati hai.

Teji-Sahi baaat hai yaar.

MSK-Lucky hm ab to tumhara hi sahara hai.

At Lucky place.He also just dreaming of so called DOLLy

Lucky-Dolly ji me 4 saal apse kuch kehne ke lia ladta raha.

Dolly-To fir ajj keh hi dijia.

Lucky-dolly ji jo me 4 saalo me nahi keh paya to ab kase kaho.

Dolly-Lucky ji koi dil baat yehne me itna time lagata hai kya?

Lucky-IDEA me akhe band karke kehdoga ke dolly i LOVE U.OK

Dolly-OK

Lucky close his eyes

Lucky-I LOVE U my jaan.I really love u dolly.

MSK-I LOVE U Too ji.

LUcky see here and there but nobody without MSK.

MSK-Kyu DOLLy ki yado me khooe hua the.

Lucky-Ap kon?

MSK-Ustaad ji[guru ji] me MSK.

Lucky-Apka kya case hai?

MSK-Me ek ladki ko pyaaar karta ho.

Lucky-To kya ladki ke ghar wale nahi mann rahe?

MSK-nahi vo to me manna loga.

LUcky-To kya tumhare gharwale nahi mann rahe?

MSK-Naahi ji mere bapu[dad] ne to muje ladki fasane ko kaha hai.

Lucky-To fir problem kya hai?

MSK-Ladki nahi mann rahi.

Lucky-To fir mene ladkio ko manane ka rent nahi lia hua.Me tumhare lia koi marriage beuro nahi kolne wale.Jao yaha se mera dimaag mat paka.

MSK-Dekh lijia guru ji me to yaha bahot umeed[faith] ke saath aya tha yaha apke pass.

Lucky-Jao yaha se mere pass aur bahot sara kaam hai.Agar koi case hota to to me dekhta.Ab ladkia fasane ka mera koi rent nahi lia hua.Jao yaha se.

Lucky start doing his work.

MSK-chalo bai MSk ''Agar MK ko professor ADI ka sahara hai to tumhe to bagwan ka hi sahara hai'' [Said it loudly and intensionally] Ok ji mechalta ho.

He getting up and turn his back but luckky stop him.MSK very well know its going to happen.He smiled and againg turns towards lucky making baby face.

Lucky-Ye profeesor ADI ka kya chakar hai?

MSK-Proffesor ADI...Darasal baat ase hai ke humare college me ek ladka padta hai MK bilkul gunda type[goon type] vo us ladki ke peeche pada hua hai aur professor ADi uski help kar raha hai us ladki ko patane me.Us ladki ko Pyaar me karta ho.

Lucky-O ho bechari ladki.Aur us professor ADi ko to me bahot time se janta ho usne mere saath bi asa hi kia tha.Jab bi koi prem khahani banti hai to vo apni tang beech me jaroor adata hai.Ab tum chinta mat karo me tumhare saath ho me tumhari help karoga.Tum bilkul theek insaan ke paass aye ho.

MSK smiling and lucky msk shake their hands.

Next day.

Meera and geet coming out and walking towards parking lot.

Geet-Such a releife ajj kaam ho gaya.u know people here so helpful.

Meera-Ya

While MSk with his frends stand at some difference.

Teji-Yaar ye idea kaam to karega na?

MSK-Jyada Q nahi puchne chahia chalo kaam karo.Cholo tumhari bhabi a gai.

Meera-Geet tumhe punjab me a kar to kafi odd feel raha hogna.i mean ke tum bachpan se london me ho aur itni jaldi to tumhara yaha mann bi nahi lag raha hoga?

Geet-Nahi yaar muje yaha akar odd feel nahi hua.Muje to yaha akar bahot acha feel ho raha hai jase me yahi belong karti ho.Yaha akar to me london ko bool hi gai.

Geet seem lost.Meeera shake her.

Meera-Kaha kho gai?

Meanwhile one guya take a nail and puncher geet car tyre.

Geet-Kahi nahi wase i shoul thankful to dad ke vo muje yaha lekar aye.

Geet-O teri Dad se yaad aya muje ghar jaldi jana tha Dad ne muje kisi se milwana tha.

Geet-Ok now me take leave ok.Bye

Meera-Ok bye c u tom.

Geet come towards his car.Take out the key from his bag.As she going to sit in car then notice her car first tyre puncher.She make big O

Geet-O shut is tyre ko bi abi puncher hona tha.Shut ajj to muje jaldi ghar jana tha.Now wat can i do?

Teji coming from other side with bundal of books in hand.He collide with geet.

Teji-Soorry ji.

Teji kept all books on back seat of MSk jeep.

Geet take out her phone.She try to call someone at that time one more guy collide with her.

He also say sorry to her.and like teji kept bundle of books at back seat.Both comes other side where MSK standing while doing something on phone.

MSK-Hai books rakh di hai na?

Teji-Ji rakh di hai.

Teji touch his foot like taking MSK blessing.

MSk-Bus bus bache jete raho.😆

Geeet watching all this.

MSk sit in his black open jeep.Start his jeep.Wo gadi ko back karta hai aur jane lagta hai.Then pretending ke usne geet to sirf tabi dekha.

Msk-O ho ho Waheguru Waheguru.Phook nakal gai hai ji?

Geet pretend she doesnt licen it.Still trying to call.

MSK-Mehgi[expensive] cheejo ka ayahi to panga hai time par dookha de jati hai.

MSK-Me kehha ji phook nikal gai.

Geet again ignore

MSK-Ab to koi punchar wala bi nahi milega apko.Ab to shaam ho chuki hai.Kaho to me apko kahi drop kar do?

Geet-Nahi i will manage.

MSk-Ase kaise manage kar legi ap.Muje lagta hai apne muje pehchani nahi hum ek class me hi padte hai.

Geet smiles and comes towards MSk

MSK-Do bench chod kar to me badta ho apse.Daso kaha jana hai apko.

Geet-No its ok.I dont want to bother u.

MSK-Bodar Booder [he means bother]wali konsi baat hai .Ap batai ke apko kaha jana hai?

Geet-Vo darasal muje New garden jana tha but gaadi punchar ho gai.

MSK-Chalo hum New garden se car guma dege.Apka kaam ho jayega and meri GEEDI.

MSK-[in low tone]Wase kaam to mera bi ban jayega.

Geet-Excuse me tusi kuch keha?

Msk open the car door for geet.

MSK-A jao ji apne hi gaadi smajo isse.

Geet sit on front seat.

Geet-thanks u

MSK-Koi gal hi nahi ji.

He start the car and they leave from their.They smile to see each other but dont spoke anything.Geet eyes fell on back seat.

Geet-Shakespeare,Economics,biology

Geet-Ye sari kitabe[book] apne read karni hai kya?

MSK-Ye ye sari Lacauste, sexpeare[shakespeare], Biloochi [biology],Physic Ye sab to mane pad li hai.Ab to me padata ho.

Geet-Kis ko?

MSK-Mk ko.Wo mera dost hai.Pehle me usse padata ho fir vo gareeb bacho ko padta hai.Vo mujse ENGLISH seekh raha hai.

Geet-O U know what kal mane use college me bacho ko padate hua deekha tha.

MSK-Acha?

Geet-Hai vo baki bacho ko tution de raha tha.

MSK-VO bacha hai humara.Wase to thoda bada hai but respect karta hai meri.English seekta hai na.

Geet-Thats so sweet of u.Apko pata hai ap log kitna acha kaam kar rahe hai?

MSK-Ache ka to muje pata nahi muje to sirf itna pata hai ke Gyaan[Knowledge] aur pyaar baatne se badta hai.Jitni marji bada lo.Wase agar apko bi class me kuch samj nahi ata U call me anytime.I definately help u out.

Geet[Get more happy]-O god u know london me ladkia muje ase hi darati thi punjabi ladko ke bare me.

MSK-Kyu Punjabi ladke kaat te [bite karte ]hai kya?

Geet-Nahi nahi.Vo kehti thi ke punjabi ladke vo hote hai...Hmmm..

MSK-Soone[Handsome]

Geet-Nooo muje yaad nahi a raha.

MSK-Gabro jawan hote hai/.

Geet-AAa Nahi

MSK-Yanki[Good looking] kaha hoga.

Geet-Hai FUKRE hote hai.Yaad aya Punjabi ladke FUKRE hote hai.

MSK gets sad after licening it.Like aya daal galna mushkil hai.Msk kuch sooch.

Geet-But me really happy ap baki Punjabi ladko ke jase nahi hai.

MSK-Nahi ji hai to me bi punjabi ladko jasa hi ho but Appa FUKRE nahi.

MSK-Wase bi agar foreign ladkio ko dough hai to hum unka dough clear kar dete hai.

MSK start singing .

Plz watch this video and think MSK and geet in this video

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dxlt0RCGT9E&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

They reach at geet place.She comes out.

Geet-Hmm so thanku ji.

MSK-Koi baat nahi ji.Wase ab to apko punjabi ladke FUKRe nahi lagte ?

Precap-

Person-Meet my son Geet beta.[Now who is this 3rd ladka]😕

Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey khushi...i love you for dedicating this part to me...love you darling... :)))


i loved msk's talks with his friend...it was so funny how they were saying that in so many years they couldnt learn english...toh ab kya seekhen ge...


adi and lucky ke beech mein dolly...wah wah...kya baat hain...i guess each maan has someone to support them now...mk k paas adi n msk k paas lucky...


omg...msk telling geet that he teaches mk...these two are hell bent on impressing geet it seems...hehe...but precap... 0,o...do kam the ke ek teesra aagaya...haha...i wonder who is this one now...??????


continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet part dearie
i loved maan and his friends talk
"itne saalo mein nai seekhe ab seekh lenge"
baat to sahi hai par kya karein pyar sab sikha deta hai

overall nice update
ab precap is again confusing dear
continue soon
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...
and y i dint got the pm...?
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow just awesme part..thanx 4 p.m
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...👏
Msk and geet car scene superb⭐️
Precap sound interesting..Who is third son❓
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Car scene ws superb!!!!
nd deiur convo ws also superb...
but who is dis third guy????
plzz cont soon

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