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Posted: 13 years ago
Mishty love this update.
i love this ff because of
their so pure & dreamy
love.love maan the way
so possessive about geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 76

great part. thanks for the pm continu soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 76
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

geet - m sorry maan...apko pata hai na..me stupid hu..kuchh bi bolti hun..me sirf aapki hun..aur mujhe aapse koi nahi chhin sakta..khud me bhi nahi..mujhe kabhi kuch nahi hoga...kyunki mujhe ye haqq hai h nahi...aap shant ho jayiye...
dat calmed maan...
his strong hold became soft n warming...
he hugged her tightly..hiding her completely into his embrace..
calming his raised heart beat...

...

Part 77


dhol-tasha and loud yet melodious music started to spread its colors...
d smell of mehendi started to sperad all-around...
women giggling...applying mehendi on deir hands...
a group of women dancing in d middle...
men were busy having deir professional talks...
d whole area looked live n fresh...
lights playing all around...
kids playing unaware of d importance of time...
rano running from here n dere checking if everything is fine...
mohinder and leher's father welcuming people...
no bhangda in punjabian's wedding - impossibleee
...
music changed to soften as d beautifull leher was taken out by her mother uttara and other cousins...
all made her sit on d decorated place and a woman was called to apply mehendi on her both hands...
leher was blushing all d while...
...
soon every woman joined for applying mehendi...
nupur annie nisha uttara rano..leher's mother..literally all sat for applying mehendi's on deir hands...
as geet entered d hall...
d possessive pair of eyes of her prince twinkled showing emotions of happiness...
geet looked at him once and immediately looked away as she saw her maan looking at her without any fear...
...
geet immediately sat wid her frnd for applying mehendi on her hands...
...
as almost mehendi was done...
d mehendi wali gal asked leher to tell d 1st alphabet of her husband's name...
leher shyed a bit..looking down...
but her shy turned into a pleasant surprise as she heard a familiar male voice speaking on her behalf...
" B of brijesh " , said brij wid confidence looking directly at his leher's eyes wid all his love..
every clapped for brij and leher who was killing herself blushing...
d gal wrote B on leher's hands...
...
nupur made write M of mayank on her hand which didn't go unnoticed by her father and was damn angry of her being so ignorant to her own father...
nisha hidingly wrote R of ranbir in such a way dat no1 could notice..not even ranbir...
n finally it was geet turn...
maan looked at wondering how vil she manage to write his name on her hand in front of all...
he so much wanted to shout his name..claiming her as his forever...
but at d same time..he knew she wanted to make it special wen she vil tell everybody about deir relation and he didn't want to spoil her wish...
...
d gal waited for geet to tell d alphabet...
geet was blushing..thinking wat she should do now...
but as she was geet...
d would be mrs.geet maan singh khurana...
she had to get a idea...

geet smiled and said - mere liye jo bana hai wo khud apna naam mere hathon me likhega...aur mujhe pata chal jayega ke babaji kya chahte hai...
rano smiled knowing wat her daughter meant...
while every1 loved d thought of dis beautifull yong gal...
maan was surprised wid her words...
hmm his angel is quite smart...

so ab MAAN SINGH KHURANA...mehendi bhi hath me pakadenge...koi bath nahi maan..apni soniye ke liye ye bhi sahi...thought maan and smiled to himself...
dadi maa immediately corned him her elbow...
maan - kya huva dadi...
dadi teasingly - apna naam likhne ke liye tayyar ho jayiye maan bete...aap ki geet ne toh apko fasa diya...
maan made baby angry face at dadi...
while dadi smirked...
...

as all women done wid mehendi...
karan and shweta annouced of a dhamake dar proformance by gals...
and a beautifull yet matured voice of leher's mother took place beautifully...

[..d song is from d movie LAJJA...very nice movie...plz listen d song while reading it...]


" je me honasi parayi...
daas tu ye peet kyu payi "

" maayyyeee..."

leher's mother tried to hide d layer of tears dat just formed in her eyes...
as d word came from her lips...showing d heart of a mother...
leher looked at her wid tears...
but she shook her head telling her bachha not to cry..it her big day...

" music started..."

uttara at d centre of place looking beautifull...
started dancing beautifull matching wid d beats...
many gals joined from back...

" mehendi lagake aayi...
bindiya sajake aayi...

mehendi lagake aayi...
bindiya sajake aayi...
chudi khanake aayi...
payal chhanakake aayi..."

nupur moved forward showing her mehendi ( mayank who wa standing wid his frnd got lost in d innocent beauty and love of his nupur..showing her love in d form of mehendi to all d world...how much he loves her..ohh godd )
...
nisha took came forward showing her mang-tikka...
ranbir smiled at her but his eyes were glued on geet who was loking terribly beautifull...
and dat waist band made her look more sexy in dat saree...
uttara made d sounds of her bangles...
while all d 3 gals showed dere payals matching wid d beats...
and danced beautifully...

" hooo... "
" ab geet milan ke gana hai...
gaana hai...
gaana hai...

mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..."

geet came forward...moving her waist beautifully...
n joined all d gals in dance...
maan's eyes caught each movement of her...

as she said geet milan ke..maan's heard skipped a bit...
while dadi blessed in her mind...
geet said she wants to go to her would be husband's house and dat made maan feel dat just go n hug in front of all...
geet said it again n again dancing beautifull...
d saree wasnt't a barrier..instead it helped herdance more cutely...
all d gals like dolls...

" gudiya patole aithe...
meriyan nishaniya...
...yada reh janiya..."

dadi maa said d words so beautifully dat it made all d women held deir breath..stopping deir tears...
dey still could remenber deir beautifull childhood which sumwhere lost in her new world...
deir childishness which lost provinding d childish wishes of deir children...

" bachpan bita jawani aayi...
hoyyy...
bachpan bita jawani aayi...
...sajan ka sandesa layi...

sayya ji ke...
sej ko jake...
phulon se mehkana hai...

mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..."

uttara hugged her mother and den leher..who was on d verge of crying...
leher's father blessed deir family...
while every admired deir sweet n small family...
other gals dragged her back..
she giggled n joined dem back in dancing...
all gals turned making rounds..feeling d whole area wid d smell of emotions...

" jamdiya paape aato...
parayiya ho jandiya...
...piya...mar janiya..."

rano uttered dose word wid d flow of emotions dat just made her voice go crack..feeling pai sumwhere in her heart..remembering her visayi...
while mohinder smiled at her..signalling her not to cry...
geet went and hug her mom followed by rajji...

" pal me nata tod chali me...
hoyyy...
pal me nata tod chali me...
babul ka ghar chhod chali me...

ab to piya ke...
des me sara...
jivan mujhe bitana hai...

mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..."

geet uttered dose words looking at her mother..making her realize soon her child vil also leave...
mohinder's eyes filled wid tears...
while rajji hugged her tight...
even brij had got tear bcoz of his dill sis...
he smiled now understanding d condition was leher...
maan's heart ached feeling d pain in d voice of his jaan...
how on d earth can he able to bear her pain...
he is ready to break any rule made by dis society just for d sake of her..
just for her..
as geel felt d whole area bcame emotional..
she wiped her tears and again joined d dance...

and said dramatically dat she wants to go to her husbands home soon..making every giggled wid tears of happiness...

" hooon..
haaan...

beti ki takdir ka lekha...
beti ki takdir ka lekha...
...padh ke mamata royi...

kisine isko janam diya
aur
le jaye ese koyi

dis time it was leher who stood up wid mehendi in her both hands and tears of happiness and pain both at d same...
she hugged her mumma-papa and uttara letting dem know how much she vil miss dem...
y is has to happen...
y society is so cruel to women dat it made such a rule for women...
y cnt she spend her life with thode who gave her birth...
leher's mother could stop anymore and started shedding etars hugging her daughter tight...
only a mother can understand d vidayi of her daughter as she has gone through d same once...
bit leher continued further...
dat how easily sum1 stoles a gal from her family..her parents...

leher's dad could see her daugher shading teatrs like dis..so he started to cheer up singing in his style...

" hooo

saj dhaj ke aaye barati
laye ghode hathi
teri shadi ke mauke pe
milke sehara gayenge
sada suhagan rahe tu banno
tujhe duvayen de jayenge

aaj ki raina ...
hum logon ko...
jhum jhum ke gana hai..."

leher's dad came forward dancing and singing in his funny style..which made leher's mother , leher and uttara laugh ..still wid tears in eyes...
he thnk every1 who came to bless deir daughter...
he danced showing how much hapiness he hav got dat his daughter is getting married..
not bcoz she vil leave..but bcos she vil hav sum1 her own...
he dragged all d men including maan and dev who was quite all d whle...
and made every1 dance...
no1 said no..knowing d emotions dat were playing behaid dis happiness...

" mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..
mujhe sajan ke ghar jana hai..."

every started dancing...giggling...
searching deir partners...
d whole area surrounded wid d noise of happiness...
d sounds of love...
dancing and dancing...
maan reached to each other...
every1 was so busy enjyong dat no1 noticed wen d man singh khurana stole his gal from d crowd...

...

both maan and geet reached stopped at a lonesum area...
panting heavily and giggling of deir childish behaviour...
geet was still gggling while maan was lost in her beautifull and happy face...
maan gently put his palm over her waist...

geet looked at him smiling...
maan naughtily - to tumhe sajan ke ghar jana hai...haan geet...
geet looked at him surprised and her cheek immediately turned dark pink...
geet giggled - maan wo to gana tha...
maan showing baby face - ohh toh matlab..nahi jana hai...
geet was knowing he was teasing her...
she hit her elbow on his chest gently - maan..mujhe aise tang mat kijiyena...
maan smiled and puled her into bear hug...
she made baby face dat she cann't hug him back..showing d mehendi in her hand...
maan kissed her forehead lovingly and admired her mehendi...
she so much loved his gesture...
maan immediately took out d mehendi kone dat he was hiding from so long...
she looked at him surprised...
she knew she had said dose word..but she didn't expect dat he vil actually do it..
tears of happiness formed in his...
he nodded his head in no...followed by sweets kisses on her eyes 1 by 1..

and raised her hand further...
she smiled cutely...
he smiled too and wrote MG...on her palm...
she looked at him surprised...
maan read d question in her eyes ans replied...
maan - jaan...jahan maan ka naam ho wahan geet ka naam na ho..aise ho sakta hai kya...sham ke naam radha ke bina adhura hota hai...aur maan ka naam geet ke bina...
...
tears again formed in her eyes...
she so much loves him...
he rolled his eyes n shook his head at his cutie pie...
not knowing how to divert her mind from dose tears...
he took her arms gently..taking care of her mehendi...put dem around his neck...and picked her up by waist...

to hav a complete hug...
she burried her neck into his neck..gaining his warmth...
and both once again got lost into d world of deir love...
just...
...<3 <3 MANEET...MAAN-GEET <3 <3 <3...

...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part😛...loved it...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...lovely...superb...
thank you so much...
thank you mishty...
i loved it...
👏
please update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... awesome update
Amazing
Fabulous
So sweet n beautifully written.
Song selection was good... The song sequence was emotional.
Maneet part was heart touching.
You describe the emotions so well.

Luved it.
Keep writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update dear
it
heart touching scenes
Thanx






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Posted: 13 years ago
fabuls update. loved maan writing MG n saying y it is mg.

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