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Hey guys really bored so thought of writing something that would help us pass time during the weekend.If i get a good response ( I doubt😆) then i will continue, so if you want me to carry on then send good and bad feedback so i can make the next part much better.
Manvis Lengha
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Virats Sherwani
The Vadhera Mansion was lit up with lights in every corner wich lit up all the house showing the happiness on everyones face. Viren & Jeevika were enjoying each others company while Pinky and Kadambri where talking about films and the songs in them. The rest of the family were acting really formal aquainting thier guests and thier needs.
"Virat, Hurry up, how long do you take" said Vanshika banging on his door. Thier was no reply and behind that door it semmd that thier was a whole other world which was more depressing and dull than the world outside that door.
Virat was sat on his bed daydreaming about the one that he should not be thinking about at all. It was his engagement today & all he could think about was "Manvi". This girl changed his whole world around. This engagemnet had no consent from Virats side but he still continued in the hope of making his Badi ma and dada ji happy. Virat wondered sometimes that the more you try to make dada ji happy the ore he would find faults but it was his mum who persuaded him to carry on with this engagement because if he turned back from it then it would tarnish his familys status in the society and his dada jis image.
"I'm coming Maa" said Virat focusing on the task ahead of him which was trying to make this believable infront of everyone and not just some sort of deal or favor. Virat got accompanied downstairs by his older brother Viren, his Chacha Inder, Dabbu & Shlok.
"Virat, now its your turn!" said Viren giving him a light punch on his shoulder.
"Bhai!" said Virat giving him a convincing loving look. Virat felt like he was the only one that didnt want to be here in this whole gathering.
Everybody was waiting impatiently for Virats soon to be Fiancee to come out. Virat couldnt careless about what time she came.
"Viren Ji have you seen Manvi, I cant find her" said Jeevika. Viren start smirking and had this mischief look in his eye.
Virat was quitely listening to thier convo making them unaware of his appearence behid the marble pillar.
"Jeevika, remember that lengha i gave you as a gift but you refused to try it on " said Viren rocking on his heels.
"yeah, i remeber very well" said a blushing Jeevika.
"Well I..."
Viren got interupted by a voice.
"Jiju, how do i look?" said Manvi coming out with everybody attention turning at her including Virat.
"Manvi!, what are you wearing" said a giggling Jeevika.
"Di you dont like this, I didnt want to come to this engagement anyway" Said Manvi with a tear brimming in her eyes.
"Manvi what happened, im only joking, you dont look nice in this lengha, you look like an angel" said Jeevika with pride that Manvi was her sister.
Virat coudnt believe that this was Manvi, the one that never acted girly who all of a sudden changed into a model that had no flaw in her.
Manvi went towards the main reception when she bumped into a tall girl who was wearing a purple lengha.
"Sorry" said Manvi politely.
"Huh, trying to create competion are we" said the girl pointing at her beautiful lengha.
"Err, no...I"
said Manvi stammering. Manvi looked up and all she saw was a hench man in a black sherwani. Manvis eyes travelled from his chest to his face. Virat was speechless and wanted to compliment her but that would show him as a weak person falling for someones beauty.
Manvi walked past and continued towards the function. Virat smelt the air that she walked past which smelt so heavenly.
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Everybody was ready for the rings to be exchanged and gathered around Virat and his soon to be fiancee. Virat was looking at the rings and saw how much effort was put into this engagement and he knew that he couldnt disappoint his family.
Virat looked around for Manvi, but she was no where to be seen.
"Virat beta, its time" said his Badi ma.
"Badi ma, there is someone that needs to be present in this engagement" said Virat walking of towards the big garden with a big gazebo.
Virat saw Manvi on the marble floor of the Gazebo crying. For the first time Virat saw Manvi crying so much, even more than how she would cry for her sister.
Virat walked behind Manvi. Manvi felt his precense and shot up wiping her tears.
"What are you doing here Chep, its your engagement and your here, your weird" said Manvi making no eye contact.
"I can ask you the same thing," said Virat closing the distance. Manvi could feel Virats breath on her neck.
"Virat..." said Manvi losing control. Manvi said his name as if he was pleasuring her and this turned Virat on.
Virat didnt know what he was doing but he was listening to his heart and he knew that his heart could never be wrong. Virat traced his fingers from the top of Manvis arms to the bottom grabbing her hands. Virat slowly turned Manvi around making her face him.
Manvi was reluctant and didnt want to fall weak. All these weeks she kept herself together, trying not to fall for his charm, but it was useless.
Manvi ran to the other side of the gazebo with her back facing Virat.
"Virat, what are you..." Manvi sentence was left incomplete because Virat came and grabbed her bare waist massaging her naked belly with his rough hands.
Manvis head fell back an Virats shoulder. Manvi never felt this sort of passion in her life. Virat moved Manvis silky black hair which was opened flowing in the wind and started to kiss the nape of her neck, leaving Manvi moaning in pleasure.
Manvis eyes were closed, Virat turned her around and gave her a small peck on her lips, making his way down towards her throat. Virat went on his knees and looked up and still saw Manvi closing her eyes backed up agoinst the pillar of the gazebo.
Virat slowly kissed her belly, not leaving a inch of her belly un-kissed. Manvi grabbed a handful of Virats hair and held it tight.
"Virat, stop..." said Manvi out of breath.
Virat stopped and got up in shock. What was he doing? Virat was supposed to be inside getting engaged but instead he was outside making love with Manvi. Virat confused turned around not facing Manvi.
"Sorry, i didnt mean to, i dont what happened to me, ..." said Virat in a apolegetic tone.
"Why are you saying sorry for " said Manvi going up to him and cupping his face.
Virat grabbed her and gave her a passionate kiss not believing Manvi just confessed her feelings in a way that was bizarre but left no feelings un turned.
" Virat, but what about" said Manvi pointing towards the Mansion.
Virat was in a dilemma.
His Dada jis honour or his love for Manvi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is amazing! Continue soon! I loved the intense romance of Virman.
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Perfect plz continue soon nd pm
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Awsomee!! Continueee sooon and plz PM mee! :D
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that was awesome...do pm me when you continue :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsomee!! This is amazing story! Really! I loved the picture of the dress and the romance between Virman is great please Continue soon and please PM me when you update!

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Awesome... Continue soon pls...👏
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amazing~!!!!! pm me plzz and omgg love love love the lengha!!!!!
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Awesome, please continue and PM me if you update
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this is AWESOMEEE! continueee!! :))

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