New OS: He couldn't take it anymore(note on p7)

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My mind has cooked up another scenario of some scenes after fridays (9th Dec) episode.
This OS is a bit on the sad side, hope you still enjoy reading it though
After Anjali introduces Shyam to Khushi, Khushi cannot bear to stay even a minute more in the Raizada house infront of the Snake. She manages to stutter an excuse that something needs to be done for her Babuji and she needs to go home immediately.

ASR still worried after her sudden break down infront of him offers to drop her home, rather firmly says that he will drop her home but she knows that she cannot risk telling him anything as in anger he cannot just think right.

So she says no and makes a run for the door, letting out all her tears freely now while running as fast as she can... ASR runs behind her & then realizes that it'll be faster if he gets his car and eventually she would have to listen to him and get in as he couldn't keep up with her as he had been feeling slightly weak due to some fluctuations his sugar levels today.

Khushi still kept running on, her mind running wild too. With what had happened today, her heart was full of pain as if been darted with a poison arrow. She couldn't imagine how a person like Shyam could have done this. Who would have imagined that this was what this snake of a man was capable of?? She kept hearing Shyam's evil voice in her head and the voices started getting louder and formed up to the throbbing pain of a migraine. She start feeling really dizzy and her body could no longer take the weight of her legs, she feels herself falling..She fell down, her head hitting the edge of the sharp pavement, immediately cutting through and making a deep wound in her head, the blood oozing out rapidly.

ASR was on his way, he had been slightly delayed by Shyam who pretended he had something important to say to him as Shyam did not want Khushi spilling out anything, especially to ASR. He drove as fast as he had ever done so before and came to a halt when he saw a circle of people had formed around someone lying hurt on the pavement. He wondered why so many people had gathered by, and a thought came to his head KHUSHIII. No it couldn't be. He did not even want to imagine that in his head. But he just had to make sure. He stepped out of the car, each step taken came with yet another fear of that person being Khushi, His Khushi.. His strides got faster and with one roar of a voice asked everyone to make space for him.. He saw part of the dupatta of the person and it was the very colour Khushi had been wearing.. He was horrified, it couldn't be..it couldn't be ..thats what kept going on his mind.. Keeping strong he walked closer to the person lying, and with only one look he knew it was His Khushi...His mind went blank for a few seconds

ASR: Anyone called the Ambulance DAMMIT?? What are you all staring at??? WHY HASN'T ANYONE CALLED THE DAMN AMBULANCE?? My Khushi is hurt here and ur all just staring at her blankly as it its a movies or something.

Just then an ambulance siren could be heard and the ambulance staff came over with a stretcher immediately.

Ambulance staff: Any relatives of this lady??

ASR: Me, she's my family.

Ambulance: Ok sir, please come with us in the Ambulance

Khushi was in a semi conscious state and was murmuring something softy

Khushi: dhoka dhoka Shyamji.. Anjaliji...Dhoka dhoka Shyamji..shaadi..dhoka

ASR: Khushi..Khushi..tum theek to ho?? We'll just reach the hospital.. Dont worry, I'm with you now..He tried to make out what she was saying but he too was in a much panicked state to analyze things now. He decided to try record what she was murmuring on his phone and would try making it out later.

Khushi: Dhoka..Shyamji..hum dono..Anjaliji..dhoka..shaadi..dhoka

They reach the hospital

ASR: Doctor, she'll be fine wont she??

Doctor: Yes Mr. Raizada, Is she your relative?? If so we'll make sure we do her treatment right away..All your donations to our hospital..

ASR: Yes, yes I'm with her. Doctor please make sure she gets fine please doctor..please

The doctor had never seen ASR in such a state

Doctor:Dont worry Mr Raizada, I will try my best at everything

ASR: Not TRY DOCTOR DAMMIT.. I need a guarantee that my Khushi will be okay

Doctor: Yes Mr Raizada, we'll make sure that she will be fine. Please try to calm down.

The doctors see to Khushi immediately as she is losing blood very quick and the cut from the injury was quite deep.

Arnav was in such a state that he couldn't really think properly. He could not bear the thought of anything happening to his Khushi

He couldn't take it anymore

In His Mind: Khushi I know you'll be okay,you have to be.. I love you..
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Your Friend, Mandira (Mandy)
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whisperer thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVE IT...hope she survives😭
thanks again!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww..really nice os
Pls continue & thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it!!!!
i wanna see khushi suffer an accident...only then i thnk arnav will realize her importance!!!!
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i love your OS, mandira... superb story!!!! perfect!😊
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I absoloutley loved it, please do continue. Wonderful OS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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⭐️⭐️my enchantress back again with an OS gr8!!!😃😃
it was emotional for ARHI together and i liked ASR's presence of mind of recording khushi's in-congruent words...👏 👏
continue soon with the part 2 dear and thanks for the pm👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks 4 the pm
nice os do continue
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loved it dear...kaash yeh sab hota...😆
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Thanks for reading :-) i know it was a bit sad, but hope you still enjoyed reading it.

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