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"Shefali" come let us go yaar!

"I am sacred we are not allowed."

"So what? Let us try at least you never know they may let us in.

"No they will not we are underage."

"Look at us do we even look like 15?"

Shefali shook her head in No

"Then why are you hesitating? We must try different things. I am not interested in to see what it is but to break the rule. It is a thrill and you can't say no to it come on."

"No I am not coming let us go."

"If you are not coming then bye I'll go alone when I want to do something there is no one who can stop me."

"Well in that case have a safe and happy time."

"Sure I'll have and once I am home you will regret for not coming with me."

"We will see"

"Yep we will see."

(2)

"I am 18 can't you look at me? You do not know who I am. If I make 1 call you will be'"

"I don't care if you are God rules are rules children below age are not allowed here."

"Well in that case you are going to pay for this."

And he came to the parking lot where he parked his bike. He sat on the bike with a sad face. "Damn these rules!" he kicked his bike with frustration.

"They threw you out I guess." He heard a sweet voice asking him in the same disappointment he was going through right now.

"Yes! According to them I am underage."

"Oh really? You do not look like but I know you are. By the way how old are you?" She asked casually

"Sorry?" He was confused why this girl was asking me my age. Why I would tell any stranger about my age.

"I asked you what your age is." She asked narrowing her eyes.

"Why would I tell this to a perfect stranger?"

"Because I am also a victim of this stupid security people like you."

"Really?" this was interesting he thought.

"Yep I am fifteen how about you? See I already told you my age though women do not reveal their age."

"Wow 15? You do not look like. Well I am 15 too."

"Wow so what you think can't we break into some stupid place like this? After all we are the future of our country. If we can't take risks how will our country develop?"

"Well I guess you are right. You are much matured girl."

"Oh thank you for the compliment" she said by bowing down a little by holding her skirt in two figures.

""Well than what is the plan?" he asked now elated.

"There you are on the right track."

"We can go there as a husband wife."

"Wow brilliant but they already saw us."

"Well then we have to disguise ourselves."

"That can be arranged. You stay here and I'll be back in 10 minutes."

"Sure" and he kicked his bike and zoomed out.

After a while

"Come on this is a sari and high heels I think it we go for you and a makeup kit make sure that you are completely different."

"Sure this can be done. What about you but?"

And he showed her a bared and goggles.

"Wow give me 5 minutes and I'll be here changed."

"Sure"

After 5 minutes.

"Do I look like a changed woman?"

"Wow brilliant are you the same?"

"Yes definitely. But I must say I am surprised that you too look different."

"So shall we go then?" he asked.

"Yes I guess."

"Wait" he stopped suddenly.

"What is it?" she was confused.

He opened up the makeup kit and colored his thumb with a red color and then without wasting time he put it on her head.

She was shocked for a while but she was so excited that she didn't care.

"Now it is perfect. Let us go." He said and they both went inside a great hall and this time no one stopped them.

P.S. tell me how it is.

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INDEX

#1-- PAGE 1

#2(a)-- PAGE 2

#2(b)-- PAGE 4

#3-- PAGE 7

#4-- PAGE 9

#5-- PAGE 15

#6-- PAGE 18

#7--PAGE 24

#8(a)--PAGE 29

#8(b)--PAGE 31

#9(a)--PAGE 39

#9(b)--PAGE 42

#10--PAGE 45

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let me read..

hehe...cute 😳
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nice one!

wow they are arjun and arohi naa?

continue soon!

and pm me pls...
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Add Me To The PM List...

Wow... It was so AMAZING...
Arjun filled her Maang???
OMG!!! Update Soon...
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Main itni late;-(
its so cute di:) omg both r damn stuborn,bt whr dy r going?
Its gonna b interestng.
Luv it so much:)
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one more story on arjuhi...
well lemme read first 😉
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OMG!!! That was an amazing start...Just luved how stubborn they both are in achieving what they want.

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wooaah
wht a start mrinal.gud going!!!
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#2 (a)

After 10 years.

"Shove away" he heard someone yelled out loud on someone. He didn't like the sound of it. Nobody ever dared to speak when his family around but today he was alone. It was the wedding of his closest friend Shravan with the girl Shravan loved for last 5 years. They were together in college. The place where wedding was taking place was grand but the people were not so grand. Shefali the bride was from very poor family so to speak she had no one but an adopted sister who never got their surname. At the age of 15 Shefali's both parents died in car accident living their only child and so called adopted child orphan. As he heard from Shravan Shefali's sister took whole responsibility on herself after her parents death and now Shravan told him that the wedding has share of both the sides. Shravan was ready to take the responsibility but his sister in law refused and made it clear to him that she want to do her best in this last responsibility. After the wedding Shravan was going to London as he settled over there 3 years ago that means Shefali will not be meeting her sister soon. When he heard this story that girl took so many burdens on her shoulders he could do nothing but admire that unseen person. She was the real hero. As I thought about what has happened he was distracted by yet another loud yell.

"Shove off"

"What is the matter" he came to the person who was shoving someone as he glanced in the direction he could see a tall girl in a red lehenga much like of a bride who was trying to talk to the guest something.

"At least listen to what she has to say." He said interrupting the elderly person who was making the fuss.

"Who are you? Did she hire you for killing me? You don't look like a killer but from a reputed family."

"Of course I am from a reputed family but why would she want to hurt you?" and he looked at the girl who was almost in tears but still stood there trying to fight with the situation. When he looked at her she nodded no. As he saw that girl he felt some unknown familiarity with the girl.

"She is filth, a dirty blood I don't know from where the bride's parents has brought her. She is a married woman without any husband and is here making this place dirty. Her husband left her the day they got married and now she is spoiling this occasion of my nieces wedding." The old man said almost crying.

"Relax uncle and please have something to eat I'll see to it." He offered.

"Better stay away from the girl or else she may trap you with her tales." Old man said whispering in his ears.

"I'll take care of it uncle." And the old man left.

He then turned to look at the girl who was standing with her head down looking at the floor.

"You are Shefali's sister right?" He asked her giving her a tissue.

"Yes" she said still looking at the floor.

"What is wrong with that uncle and do you mind asking me where is your husband I mean as far as I know you are hot married."

"The old man is our relative who chooses to throw dirt on me at my sister's wedding. As far as marriage is concern why would I tell about that to a perfect stranger?" she said with doubtful eyes.

"Well you are right I am Shravan's friend and I heard a lot about you and the day I heard about you I became your fan. You are the real hero."

"Well thanks for the compliment and marriage I never knew whether it must be called as marriage or not. For once I broke one rule and a guy helped me in it and somehow my all off the people came to know about it. Before Ma and Baba could tell the people they were not with us and that left me with a tag of being abandoned by a husband who I met just once." She paused and then said slowly

"I was 15 then."

That was a real surprise for him he didn't want to talk but he couldn't control his tongue.

"That was too young and in India it is illegal I guess." He spoke unsure.

"Yes but can we not talk about that and yes the reason behind he called me filth is because I was adopted not legally but I have their surnames on my entire certificates. So I guess I answered all your questions. Do you mind if I ask you one?" She said composing herself.

"Sure."

"Don't you leave in India?"

"Oh no we left India 10 years ago and then we are settled in London I came especially for the wedding. We have a business umpire build there."

"That is interesting." Her eyes were showing how excited she felt.

"It is a dream to seat in the airplane for me." She said ecstatic and bit her lower lip the next moment as it hit to her that she has spoken more than needed.

"Well nice to meet you" he said ready to take her leave.

"Nice to meet you too." And they both parted in separate direction.

Edited by Karnika007 - 13 years ago

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