OS - Trust Me, Khushi! , Pt 3 updated pg 11

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Please Note: Intense hindi dialogues...I apologize if some you find it difficult to understand.., but most of you may...so Enjoy😉

Scenario:

Khushi finds out about...Shyam and confronts him alone in his room at RM. She slaps him very hard and tells him that he broke the trust of both the families and throws the engagement ring on his face and walks away...


OS - Trust me, Khushi! Part 1

Khushi looks very miserable...she bids goodbye to everyone. And Anjali notices that she has been crying...and Arnav looks shocked...seeing her this way...

Anjaliji: Khushiji...kya hua...aap

Khushi: Hamari tabiyat theek nahi hai...hum chalte hai...

Anjali: Khushiji...

Khushi rushes off very quickly shutting the door behind her...

Anjali: Khushiji ko kya ho gaya...unke aankhon mein aansoon kyon the

Arnav looks very worried...

Arnav: Khushi aise chali kyon gayi...uske aankhon mein itna dard kyon?

Arnav quickly goes off to his room. And he is pacing up and down the room...

Khushi is outside...devi maiyya's mandir...crying her heart out...

Khushi: Hamare saath yeh kyon hua devi maiyya...Shyamji ne itni ghatiya harkat kaise ki...Unhone sirf hamara nahi...Anjali ji ka bhi vishwaas toda hai...ab hum kya karenge, kisse aur kaise kahenge...Anjaliji toh unhe poojti hai...kaun hamara vishwaas karegaa...

Humne Shyamji ko pehchaane mein itni badi galti kaise ki...devi maiyya humme shakti deejiye...Kya karenge hum ab...

Meanwhile, Arnav is very worried...Arnav recollects Khushi's sad face...

Arnav decided to call Khushi.


Gupta's residence:

Phone rings. Paayal picks it up...

Arnav: Payal, mein Arnav bol rahaan hoon. Kya mein Khushi se baat kar sakta hoon...uska cell nahi lag rahaan hai...

Payal: Arnavji, who toh aapke ghar aayi thi naa...

Arnav gets up suddenly...

Arnav: Haan...woh sorry...mein actually usse mila hi nahi. Shayad woh di ke saath hai...

Arnav hangs up...and is all freaked out...

Arnav: Khushi ab tak ghar nahi pahoonchi..."Where the hell are you Khushi?"

Arnav quickly goes down...but as he walks, his eyes falls on Khushi's ring...

Arnav: "Yeh toh Khushi ki engagement ring hai"

He takes the ring with him...takes his car keys and steps out of the house without anyone noticing...

Arnav drives around...looking for Khushi everywhere...and he gets very frustrated...he tries calling her, but Khushi keeps cutting the phone call.

Arnav: Pick up dammit...Kahaan dhoondhu main tumhe...Khushi...

Arnav realizes something and stops outside the mandir (Wah, isse kehte hai connection😆)

Arnav quickly runs up the stairs of the mandir and looks around for her frantically. Arnav keeps calling out her name... "Khushi! Khushi!" He turns around and looks behind...and Khushi is sitting on the bench...crying...with her face down..

Arnav runs to her...

Arnav kneels down in front of her...Khushi notices a surprised Arnav...

Arnav: Kya hua Khushi...tum achanak aise kaise chali aayi...aur kyon ro rahi ho tum...Maine tumhe kitni baar phone kiya aur tumne uthaaya kyon nahi...

Khushi gets very flustered by all his questions...and gets up with her hands on her ears...

Khushi: hum kuch nahi jaante...chale jaayiye yahaan se...aap...aapko meri itni chinta kyon hai...

Arnav holds her very tightly...

Arnav: Just shut up...khushi! Mein tumhe yahaan pagalon ki tarah dhoondh raha tha...aur tum mujhe keh rahi ho ki mein chala jaaon...theek hai... "I'll go away" lekin pehle mein tumhe ghar chod doonga...chalo mere saath...

Khushi: chodiye hamara haath...aap sab samjhte kya hain apne aapko...jab chahe dil se khel liya...aur ussse tod diya...

Arnav is very confused...

Arnav: Khushi, kya bak rahi ho tum...dekho tum...

Khushi: Nahi dekhna humme kuch bhi...vishwaas todiyaan hamara...bharosa tod diya hamara...Khushi cries very bitterly...

Khushi comes close to Arnav and holds his collar very tightly...

Khushi: Kyon kiya hamare saath unhone aisa...Arnavji. Humne kissika kya bigaada tha...Kya hum itne boore hai...Bataayiye Arnavji...(Rabba ve moment)

Arnav cups her face very gently, completely shattered seeing her tears...

Arnav: Khushi...tum...please stop crying...Khushi.!...Bataaon mujhe kisne tumhare saath aisa kiya...please baataaon mujhe...For god's sake tell me dammit!

Khushi: Kya aap hamara vishwaas karenge...

Arnav's eyes looks a little worried now...

Arnav: Trust me, Khushi! Kaun hai woh!

Arnav is still holding her ..

Khushi: Shyamji!...

Arnav: Tumhara mangetar...

Khushi: Haan, Jo aapke Jijaaji Shyam Jha bhi hain...

Arnav's eyes wide open and he leaves Khushi 's face and backs up one step from her...

Khushi looks at shocked Arnav with tears in her eyes.


I know after reading it you all will be like...ok Shy, snap out of la la land...Really? 😆

Please let me know if you liked it...😉



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Posted: 13 years ago
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*edited*

Yayy!! First to comment!!!

It was too good. . . . .

I absolutely loved the fact that Arnav went in search of Khushi. . . . .

Though I'd love to know if he supported or not. . . . . 😉

Anybody getting a hint??????!! 😉 😆

Thanks for the PM too. . . . . 😊

😆
Edited by harsh42 - 13 years ago
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shit, I missed the first place, Harshita


dude, absolutely amazing yaar...it was freakin' good!
Loved the pics, specially total revolutionary change of the atmosphere of the last two ones, left me wanting more, yaar, add one more part to it hun!

Loved the rabba ve moment

Lovely work :)
Edited by -Murphy369- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DRAMATICC! but in a way it seemed quite hilarious to me!

Awesome work! keep up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!! Loved it...I know it is an OS but is there a possibility you could continue it????

Superb!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. I like it😊 Dunno why like button is not working for me. I was thinking of writing my version of this track too. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kyaa dhamaakedaar dialogs yaar.Ek dham patake wala.Loved it.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it like how arnav went serching for her so sweet he knew something was wrong but you need to write a little more we need to know if he supported her or not you know he can turn into asr and then the s##t hit the fan and he stars blaming her awesome os


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love it...pm me 4 more!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Like it?

I loved it!! 😆

Bohut hi mazedaaarrr !!

Quality OS.

Thanks, Shy !! (Especially for the PM) 😊

Edited by DTeacher - 13 years ago

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