Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 29

Originally posted by: kokoARSHA

suzzziii just superb...jaldi update kiya karna aise hi kyunki me humesha yehi pray kar ke IF kholti hun ki tune update kiya ho.n i see ur pm...

Originally posted by: namy21

nyc 1..👍🏼😊

Originally posted by: _sana.Magic_

Thats a really sweet update and m in love with this FF. awesome work.

Originally posted by: love_arsha

so good yr👍🏼
pls pls update soon next part
cannt wait to read the next part
nd thanx for pm me
keep it up good work
good job👍🏼👍🏼
nd hugs for u for cute update🤗🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: Sweetheart17

so sweet yaar...sirf tumhare liye...hahaha...update soon.cnt gt enough of ur writing...??❤️👏

Originally posted by: SugarCubes

Awesum!! :D

Originally posted by: aashima.jindal

awesome yaar

Originally posted by: swaron502

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Originally posted by: -sofiya-

nice Part !

Originally posted by: killerbinny

hayee!!!!...its so damn adorable...!!!!!!...

Originally posted by: kriyanshluver1

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cant w8 for the next update!!

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Originally posted by: crazysky

Originally posted by: Winz

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Originally posted by: perfectangel

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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

wao it was superb part

loved it very much

please update next part soon

waiting eagerly for it😍

Canteen

rey pulls a chair for kria

Kria: thnx

Rey: my pleasure

Neha: rey mere liye b chair khinchdo

Vicky: rey kyu? Mai hu na

Neha: ji nahi...

Vicky: kyu

Neha: bas... nahi..

Kria: arrey bas karo aur bait jao

Neha to vicky...suna tumne...ab baith jao

Rey: kya khaoge

Neha: mere liye veg sandwich

Rey: kria tum kya logi

Kria: mai khud le lungi..

Rey: kria mai le aata hu...bolo kya khaogi..

Neha: iska menu banne me aadha ghanta nikal jayega rey... Tum na iske liye veg roll le aao..

Rey: kria... veg roll? Is it ok...

Kria: nahi...mujhe toh...

Rey: bolo na..

Kria: mujhko Do aloo parathe, palak paneer, veg roll, fries, aur chocolate fudge...

*shock*...Rey vicky luks @ kria

Rey: Kria tum yeh sab akele khaogi...

Kria: haan..

Neha: maine kaha tha na rey...

Vicky: very gud kria...bilkul meri jaisi ho tum... Dikhta nahi k tum itna khati ho...

Kria: haan.. mujhe khana bahut pasand hai... Yahan ka aloo paratha..my fav.. Tum b try karo

Vicky: ok...Rey sun mujhe b aloo paratha..noodles...pastry aur orange juice..le aa..aur jaldi ja yaar...tym waste na kar

Rey: hello hello bas...jaake khud lele

Vicky: rey mere liye nahi layega...

Rey: nahi.. Tu b saath me chal...

Vicky: nahi tu jake le aa...mai bahut thak gaya hu

Neha: kyu vicky konsa tumne pahad toda...jao rey k saath.

Vicky: tum nahi janti meri dhuki daastan

Rey: oye band kar apna drama aur chal...

Vicky: nahiii...

*Rey holding vicky's collar* challl

Kria: he he...ye vicky b na...pagal hai..

Neha: kria vicky ko chod aur apna bol...kya zarurat thi rey k saamne itna sab mangwane ki

Kria: mai to roz hi itna khati hu

Neha: haan bahut accha... Wo kya sochega...kria thoda apna dimag laga...aur behave ureslf plz

Kria: mai ne kaha to tha k mai khud le aaungi...wo zid kar raha tha... To maine..

Neha: haan to chup chap se ek cheez bolti..itna sab blne ki kya zarurat..unke jane k baad fir tujhe jo khana hai wo khaleti

Kria: ab kya hogaya..maine kya galat kardiya...hamesha mujhe lecture deti rehti hai..

Neha: aur kya karu fir..teri harkatein hi aisi hai...kria ladkon k saamne kaise rehna hai na tuje nhi pata...tu nahi samjhegi

Kria: mujhe nahi samajhna...mai jaisi hu waisi hi rahugi...

Neha: jo karna hai kar...aur plzzz ye pair hilana band kar...its irritating

Kria: kamaal hai tujhe isse b prblm hai...tu jake dusri table pe bait ja...

Neha: huh

Kria: huh huh huh

Vicky: kya chal raha hai..ye huh kyu kar rahe ho?

Kria: kuch nahi..yeh neha ko accha lagta hai aise karna

Vicky: mujhe pata hai..yeh sab neha k hai chaunchle hai... Neha Yeh lo tumhara veg sandwich...

Kria: aur mera khana

Vicky: rey la raha hai...tumhara order abhi ban raha hai wahan... Tab tak tum mera khana share karlo...

Kria: nahi mai wait krlungi...

Vicky: ok...

Kria: rey wahan akele khade hai bechare...mai jake dekhti hu..

neha: haan ja...

Kria: ja rahi hu

Kria: hey..

Rey: hey..

Kria: abhi tak bana nahi

Rey: haan chota mota order thode hi hai jo ban jayega...*smiles*

Kria: haan...

Rey to canteen guy...aur kitna tym lagega

Canteen guy[suresh] tamilian: bas hogaya 5 mins aur.. He sees kria and says...Kria baby kaisa hai?

Kria: mai mast...aap Kaise ho?

Suresh: mai b accha hai...

Kria: aur lakshmi?

Suresh: wo b acchi hai..tumko yaad karti hai...kal leke aayega mai usko college..

Kria: accha...

Rey: lakshmi?

Kria: suresh anna ki beti hai 7 yr old..bht pyaari hai...

Rey: tum iski family ko b janti hu...great..

Suresh:Ye order tumhara hai baby...

Kria: haan...

SUresh: accha bas do mint me lata hai... he shouts.. Ehh aloo parathe me thoda ghee dal devanna...kria baby k liye hai...

Rey: wah kria baby to canteen me bht famous hai...*laughs*

Kria: aapko koi kasht hai??

Rey: kasht?? Wat??

Kria: Problem...

Rey: ohhh...no no mujhe koi problm nahi hai kria baby...he he

Kria: angrily...aap mujhe chidha rahe ho?

Rey: nahi to...mai to tareef kar raha hu...

Kria: sab pata hai mujhe..aap chidha rahe ho... Huh...suresh anna mujhe bhuk lagi hai..kitna tym lagega...

Suresh: hogaya baby..yeh raha aapka order... Aur yeh south special dish banaya mai...sirf tumhare liye..try karo...

Kria: how sweet...she tastes...umm...yummmyyy...bht accha hai...mai ye b le jati hu...thnks anna...

Suresh: mention not...😊