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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

so now maaneet r sharing same bed as well as same room nd onone of the family have objection abt it...thats thats...ummm...i dont know what soud say...but loved their understanding...they tell they r gd friends but their behaviour says more...nd maans manofying geet with the help of a maid...thats dialogue of maan ... hubby wifey understanding nd they r just friend...,..different things...nywy read all 9 parts together...loved them...


yea I get your surprised state. But they are truly friends and have great understanding. If you realized, geet started trusting maan as he slept on the couch whenever she worked late. They are just friends. but he interpreting by hubby wife dialogue that just as husband and wife have a relationship, friends do too. They just have to realize that they're not just friends but more ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

super duper update
love it
waiting for maan revenge me wonder what i'll be
story turning more & more interesting
great job shona
muahb
bless yu
thnx


thanks di!!
Oh thanks for the evil idea 😳
Hope you like my twist.
yes you love it don't you.
Thanks again.
luv yu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

lmao!!! What a typo!! No one pointed that out 😲 Well other than you. of course i will point out! You know i give my undivided attention to those ffz i read. those ffz are lucky that i read them u know **batting eyes** .lol. :p Who's zooming off baby? M to here only in this world. That's why am forgetting. doesn't the tittle say BHULA 🤣 oh my freaking! r u serious. though i will say good one! lmao! well looking at u this is more off - rofl! hehe

Haha arjun is funny, "I told u dad dont get such soft bed" lol arjun! IKR!!!!

Awww so sweet! maan serving food to his geet! so dreamy, wish guys were like Maan for real! Too bad... Can only dream.. Oh wait. Some are like that 😛 ahem who is this lucky guy whom u noticed! should i take the clue to him!

Haha biggest surprise of Meera's life ! Maan sleeping on couch in geet's room! lolzz

Maan could give up bed and sleep in couch for no one but for geet only :) :) You said correct there! yup i know!

Waking up part is really sweet! I just love Maan and Geet! they are so cute and sweet! With each other they are completely different than how they are to the others in the world! Yes!!! Gald you liked it. :-*


Chapter 7 in the next post! sry for being late! No prob =]


Oh shut up! You're lucky I write this!!!

and about the guy, you don't even know him. so how are you gonna tell him huh? and everything I write doesn't have to be related to me! 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Chapter 7

Hmm Maan and Annie are like online friends! Wonder who Annie is 😉 😉 Stop pretending like you know nothing!! 😆 oh i am pretending for ur own good alright! if u want me to stop than those comments will stop too! now u decide!
Love their 'friendship' growing! yup it is definitely time for happiness to sip in and say buh-bye to sadness. Its good to see Geet living lively. Good to know 😛

Woww Maan ! ! ! Bad Boy! ! ! Talking with an online friend when a beautiful girl is sitting beside you! ! ! So not expected this from you! and oh mahn Geet's anger! Poor soul of the PILLOW ! lmao! !! I am practically dying out of laughter. LMAO!!! Nice way to pout it! Poor pillowww but not poor geet? 😲 bichari... kaise bichari??? she doesn't know why but she is angry at him! arey in order to be bechari she has to have a reason to show that she is one bichari! .lol.

Husband and forgiving! ahem ahem Maan what are you pointing out? that you are dreaming of being Geet's husband? ahem - something got stuck in my throat - ahem "You belong to her, she should know better" Oh shush! Stop giving me ideas to strech this... 😡 ummm sry i was just saying my thought out. actually typing it out!
Yup geet how can you stay mad at such a sweet 'friend' of urs!

Loved that scene to core! really a nice add in Khush ;) Thanks!!!! Welxx

Hmm Mission Find Family! chapter 8 in following post Yupp Alrightyy





Oh shush again!!! And about bichari, you just didn't get my joke. so forget it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Phew Chapter 8 - I so didnt realized that i was 4 chapters behind in commenting and two chapters behind in reading! lmao! I knew it!! I am sure u knew it! u stock ur own thread to see when i do what!


I guess I should comment as soon as I read, but i read mostly during lunch break in skool and log off in hurry and than always forget to come back and read. any ways here goes for 8! Oh well then sto yourself from reading at lunch time. well, thats the only time i literally get time to read peacefully!

So, now all in Mumbai - hmm lets learn the family secrets! and what lead them to part ways. I am all ready to learn Geet and her familys' history! For the first time history word excites me lol oh whatever!! let me plan the history. 🤣 lolll i didnt stop u! go ahead! and better make it interesting as this is the first time i am interested in this subject!

Arjun and Annie are wow! arjun is so like bro i need u over here right now! lol arjun as geet said get a grip and control urself! and so maan and annie are finally meeting .!.!. ROFL I love your comments man um correction dear! I am no man, i am a lady! lolll and thanx! though i dont get, why on earth u love my comments and stock me to death for them!

"I decided to suicide" "Nice" WTH Geet pay attention, what if he took u seriously and went along with that stupid line he said to get your attention! You wont like that now will you? I say the same!!! God forbid this. hmm yeah that should never happen

So geet is going along with maan and meeting annie. is that a good thing? IS IT??? seriously khush, seriously!

cant wait for tomm! than and will soon read 9 and comment on it! Sure!


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Posted: 13 years ago

HAIR- DID YOU SEE THE TRASH CAN THIS MORNING? NO I DONT THINK SOO..

OLD SWEET OLD - NOT SURE! DEPENDS...

GRR!!!!!!! YOU DON'T GET IT DUMMY.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kasurbest


UMM WHOM ARE U TALKING ABOUT?


YOU SERIOUSLY WANT TO TRY ME RIGHT NOW!!!! 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 10

Geet entered the office while Maan started talking to random people. She went to her cabin straight and staff stood up to greet her as she passed. It was very rare that she came to the office unless there was a meeting. Ishwar was already present there. She sat down on the chair and asked, "What happened uncle?"

Ishwar brought the file he was studying. "Look at this." She took a look and calculated the numbers. She spoke, "They don't add up. Something has happened in between."

Ishwar: "I know that. You need to go to London immediately and look into the matter. It'll be better if you go. I would have gone but I'm needed more here."

Geet said getting up, "It's alright uncle. I'll leave tomorrow itself."

Ishwar nodded and said, "You'll be leaving in private jet this time."

She turned to look at him. "But that's not needed!"

Ishwar shook his head. "No. this is a financial mess up and someone or other is behind this. Everyone in our staff is too loyal to betray us. I am not going to take any chances."

She nodded understanding his point. "As you say." Just then Maan came in. He said, "Hello dad. How are you?"

Ishwar, "Maan, what are you doing here disturbing the office environment?"

He sat down on Geet's chair. She looked at him with dagger eyes. No one dare's to sit on my chair! Not even you Maan.

Ishwar forced his laughter aside and tried to look serious. Maan saw Geet fuming and he asked, "What?"

Geet replied sternly, "That's my chair."

Maan said, "So?"

Geet: "SO! No one sits there other than me Maan! I don't like it."

Maan said teasing, "Oh! So the stubborn girl can't see anyone sit on her chair huh? Alright. Let's see who makes me get up."

Geet said, "Fine! Sit there. I don't care. I'm leaving."

He sat up straight in the chair. "Where?"

Geet replied, "Why do you care? You got the chair na? Have fun!" Maan looked at Ishwar and he just shrugged and got back to work not wanting to be the target between their fight/argument.

Maan replied, "Fine. Go. But how? Huh? You came with me. Are you gonna walk home?"

Geet retorted, "Oh hello! I don't need your car. I have my own thank you very much!" she walked out the cabin and said as she passed, "Get the car ready." The person who heard it pressed the button and informed the basement watchman and the car was at the main entrance ready before Geet got to the ground floor.

Maan saw her sit in the car fuming with anger from the window in the cabin. He too turned away with anger. Than after a second, it struck him that she had left getting mad at him. He banged his head slowly to the window and then rubbed it even though it didn't sting him. He self-talked, "Maan! What were you doing?! See, now she is mad!" he started cursing himself as he quickly went down the stairs and got in his car to follow Geet home.

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Meera watched as Geet went in her room mad. Not few seconds after, she heard a car come to a halt and Maan walked in running. Even before he should ask, she guessed what must have happened and so just pointed at the room. Maan flashed her smile and ran to 'their' room.

He came in saying, "Geet?" She yelled from the balcony, "WHAT!?"

He stood behind her and held his ears. "I'm sorry. Please forgive me."

She turned the other way. He came in front of her and said, "Come on, aab zyada bhav mat kaho. I am saying sorry na."

Geet said, "One condition."

Maan: "Anything."

"You will have to buy me my favorite ice-cream when I tell you to. No matter how late or early it is and whichever season it is."

Maan thought Uh-oh! Ice-cream lover ghost is back! Why doesn't she understand that this makes her sick? And I can't see her sick'. But Maan, right now, agreeing to her demand will be the only good thing for you.

She asked, "Agreed?" He nodded. She got happy. Till it was up to Ishwar, he wouldn't let her have ice-cream. Now she can have it!

She jumped up in excitement and hugged him. "Oh Maan! You're the best! Thanks!!!" as he laughed and hugged her back, she came back to earth and realized she was hugging him. She let go and bowed her head and was about to leave. He stopped her by grabbing her scarf and pulled her back.

He whispered with a smirk on his face, "What did you call me? Gay huh?"

Geet pretended to be oblivious. "What? Gay? That too you? Were you dreaming Maan?" she giggled. Maan admired her laugh but then blinked away his fantasy land away.

"Oh I wasn't dreaming all right! You did call me gay."

Geet said, "Maybe because you were behaving like one! I mean come on, you went there to meet Annie and talk to her. But you were over there sitting like a bride! What else was I supposed to infer? Huh?"

He asked, "You think I'm gay?"

Geet replied, "You were acting like one." She put her hands on her waist. Geet didn't see Maan's next move. He pulled at her hand and pulled her close. Her hands went on his chest. Maan just looked at her deep eyes and forgot what his actual plan was. Geet saw his slip and whispered, "Prove it." She ran away inside and tried to close the balcony door.

Maan snapped out of his land as he realized what Geet just said and did. He smiled a smile that declared the war. He ran his hand across his hair and ran behind her. Of course Maan is much more stronger and easily opened the door pushing Geet's efforts to close it. Seeing that she was losing, she let go of the door immediately and ran in on the other side of the couch.

Maan almost lost his balance but then ran after her. Both circled the couch a several times and Maan was always a bit away from catching Geet. if Maan was stronger than Geet was faster!

They circled around the bed and Geet even climbed the bed once while trying to escape. As she jumped down, her feet fell on the carpet which slipped due to sudden movement. She slipped as well but steadied herself just in time.

Maan's heart almost skipped a beat when he saw her about to fall. He was about to run to save her when she stood straight and made a face at him sticking her tongue out. He again was pushed to his far end. She just knows which buttons to push!

He again ran after her and this time caught her scarf and pulled her back with a jerk without giving her a chance to escape. Now he steadied his breathing as he held her tight. She tried to free herself out of his grip. Unluckily, he is the strong one here.

She spoke, "Maan, chodo na."

He shook his head. "I will. But after I complete your first request."

First one was to prove that he wasn't gay. She spoke with fear in her voice. She did trust him but then again, he was unpredictable just like she ways. No wonder they both understand each other! "Maan, what are you up to?"

Maan moved back and she moved too till he had cornered her in front of the wall. She looked around and anywhere but him. He was closing the distance between their faces. She turned her head to the right. He came close to her ear and said, "Do you really want to know?"

She closed her eyes trying to not breath his scent in. it was intoxicating and his proximity was making it worse for her to avoid him. Maan smirked as he could see his effect on her. With his other hand, he moved her face to face him and she refused at first but then looked at him. He blew air on her face. She smiled. She always loved it.

She whispered, "Maan'" After few seconds, she said again, "Maan." His hands were outlining her face. She shivered in his touch.

He said, "I know my name Geet." He moved in close to her lips. The distance got little with each second. Geet jerked her eyes open. "Maan!" Maan came to his senses as well. He immediately let go off Geet as she stood there blushing and thinking about what was about to happen. Luckily there came a knock at the door.

Meera peeped in, "If your making up session is over than come out! It's about time you both start spending time with others other than each other." Geet looked down and walked away. Maan threw his hands on his head and pulled at his hair a little. (Of course my making up she meant the manaofying. She had no idea what had happened inside')

What were you about to do! How can you lose your control this easily! But then again, Geet was always normal around him and lately, she had been pushing him to the edge by her antics filled with innocence. He followed after a while to try to talk to Geet alone and tell her that he didn't mean for this to happen. It just did. He was worried on what she might be thinking. I can't lose you for losing my senses'

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Precap: Uhmm Again, I have no idea. 😆 Oh yea, Geet's London trip. What do you all think is the problem?? Leave you responses!


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Next: Chapter 11



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