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Posted: 13 years ago
Vry nyc update
plz update soon
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Jaldi update karo...intezaarving😍
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Waiting for the next part, where Maan will be at his in-laws
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hey thanks for the double update both parts were great :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update sweetheart
Thank u very much for z PM & double treat
Waiting when Maan will go to his in -law's house I have a feeling that in Maan & Geet will be a bit close
Please uodate asap
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next part plsss eagerly waiting ...
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loved the update...
geet started to feel for him again even after all these...
may b maan gets lucky...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is awesome and great
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awesome
Maan has change alot and he is ready to go to any extend to remove the pain
Waiting for Geet reaction when she see Maan's in her parents house
Loving it
ur FF is very additive
Cont soon
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you to all of you so so much for your support... Please keep supporting me and encouraging me...
This part is especially for my friend --Nargis--. Hi Dear it was your PM that tempted me to give this update - Maan in Geet's house
Thanks
--Anu
Part 27
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Maan was about to leave when he gets some important call regarding his new venture and he gets stuck in it for an hour and then he left immediately'. But the more eager he was more problems he had to face' he then got stuck in the traffic'.

All his way he was just relieved that he will see Geet after 3 days and he also looked at the packet'. "Hope she accepts it"

By the time Maan reaches her house it is night and everyone had already have their dinner. Geet was in her room. Everyone else was so very happy to see Maan there'.

He took the blessings of Rano and Mohinder and Brij hugged him'

"oye Geet yaha hai to tujhe yahan ke yaad aayee'."

"ohh it's not like that'. Actually there many issues in which I was stuck'. Kaisa hai tu'.."

Rano:"khana lagaoon beta' humne dinner ker liya' tumne bataya to hota" maan's eyes was looking for Geet

"Koi baat nahi' khana apke haatho ka mana kaise ker sakta hon main'. Waise Geet'"

"who apne kamre me han' bulatee hoon"

"nahi nahi' I will give her the surprise" he himself was scared to meet Geet infront of everyone'.

So he had the dinner and headed to Geet's room'.

Geet was herself lost, fighting with her heart and mind everyday'.. When Maan entered the room he just could not move with the view of the room' which looked like a perfect painting'.

It was just dimly lighted with blue night light and the moon light which was entering the room along with the cool and soft wind. Geet was sitting on the bed in a light pink nighty surrounded with lace which was flowing along with her hair with the soft wind coming thru window'.. She was glowing in the dimly lighted environment'. Looked so pure and delicate'.

One of her leg was folded and the nighty pulled up to knee length ' her milky white skin was glowing even brighter with the lotion that she was applying and her hand were smoothly rubbing on her skin'. She herself was lost in thought which made her look even more magical'.

Unknowingly and automatically Maan moved closer to her' like he was being pulled up by the spell' he was not knowing what he was doing but he was drowned in the surrounding and her beauty'.. he sat beside her all lost and his hand went on soft skin of her leg' the moment he touched her Geet closed her eyes, knowing it was him' only she was not able to realize if it was reality or dream'. His hands softly started moving on bare part of her leg'. Geet took heavy breath'. After being lost in his thought she had no strength to deny the touch'. She breathed heavily'. Both were lost, like under some spell of the surrounding'..Maan not knowing what he was doing kept moving his hand on her skin' his eyes closed, he just was feeling her'. Geet's breath became even heavier only provoking Maan'.he opened his eyes and moved his hand to slide on her arm' his figers swiftly moved on both her arms' giving her both sweet tickle and shiver in her spine' none had strength to stop this' they were just flowing with the flow'.. Maan then moved his hand to her face' caressing it' Geet was still breating heavier' her eyes closed' her heart wanted to drink the moment'.he removed her hair flocks behind and bent to bring his face closer to her'. He placed his hand behind her head and pulled her face softly towards him'.placed his closed lips on her cheeks'.with his lips still closed he started brushing her face with it'. Geet did not know when her hand went behind his back'. And held his shirt tightly'. He ran his lips from her face to her ears' Geet tightened her closed eyes and her hold on his shirt'he slowly moved his lips to her neck' both were lost when

When Nandini suddenly entered the room as the door was still open'. Maan had entered the room in trance'. Nandini Eyes were wide open to see them in that position'

"ummm hmmm" she coughed and it was then when both came out of trance and got separated. Nandini closed the door for their privacy and ran to other room'.

Both maan and Geet did not know what to say or do next'. Geet immediately switched the light on to bring them to more reality' Both feeling embarrassed'.

Geet ' how could she betray her descision?

Maan - how could I again think of my desire only

Maan needed to justify the moment so that she did not feel guilty. Both had their back facing each other now' breath still heavy'. After a little while when the situation was little cool

"We are husband and wife Geet"

"hmm-mmm" is all she uttered. Again both were quiet.

Geet needed to justify to him she was not weak in his love' like he cannot give her pain again' she made herself stern.

"I know I am your wife and so I will never deny you your right'."

"Right???? Geet was this all about giving and taking rights' you know it was something more'"

"Nothing more for me'. Again if you want me I will not deny, I am your wife"

Maan was too pained' he knew she was lying but that lie showed how helpless she was and in how much pain she was to say such things'.

"Geet main koi haq nahi jata raha tha tumpe'. It was love between" beore he could complete Geet snapped

"NO'. it was nothing like that' not to me and you should know we are too late to talk about it" she was not ready to give in to his tricks'. Yeah she got weak for moment but she will not give him any further chance

Maan did not know why he was arguing'. It was not in his plan to convince her like this but he felt helpless at this moment'.

"Geet trust me'." He begged "Please Maan' as I said you we are too late to talk about love and trust' but I am always there for you as a wife, in return I don't expect anything" That she convinced to herself more than him... she did not expect anything from him

It felt to Maan that someone have pricked thousands of needles on his heart'. He just kept quiet. This was a small house and no place for Geet to run away from room'. Where will she go in this state and what will she say'.. they were confined in a room to face the situation'.

After half and hour of pin drop silence Maan realized what he was doing' he have to give Geet her happiness and not put effort on making her believe him' he have to win her trust.. Convincing her like this will not work'. He decided to change the mood'.he also wanted her to show the paper'

"Acchca so you will do what I say'. So here you go'" he placed the packet infront of her'. I need your signatures on thses papers'.

Without any question she opened the packet' there were bundles of pages'.

"Sign kahan kerna hai'." He wanted her to read the papers "don't you think you should read before you sign any paper"

"No I don't want to read'just tell me where I need to sign"

"So you trust me that much" he teased

"No, it doesn't matter to me even if you cheat on me'. " Maan was taken aback'.agained pained by her word'. But it was not time for his own pain'. He needed to concentrate on her happiness

He calmly said "ek baar perd lo na'.. it's a request' Please" he pleaded

"Where do I need to sign'" Maan did not want to spoil her mood by insisting more'

He just showed all places to her where she needed to sign.

Next to be continued.
Keep liking and commenting Dears
Anu
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago

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