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Posted: 13 years ago
@neetu,rupu and aish

Thanks a lot for shower of lovely comments..happy u are enjoying reading my FF's😛

PS; aish u got it right..buntu ka effect hain..😆😆..dakshu ka smile that day had made me write this FF..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Nxt stop
Ganga maya park

Daksh takes tickets for both of them parks car and both go inside..Both are having nice time...😛
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Both go near lotus pond in the park( pic main dekho)..

Daksh; naina..waha jaake khade hojavo.
Naina; daksh..ek aur photo??..ab nahi..pls
Daksh; sirf ek swt hr8..main logon ko dikhana chahta hoon ki meri swthr8 uss lotus se kam sundar nahi hain..looks at her..infact jyada sundar hain😛😛

Naina; smiles( taarif ka phool jo barsa raha hain daksu)...ab naa kaise kahegi..😉😉

Naina; daksh tum bhi na..ab tho jaana padegana..very smart( pulls cheek)
and she goes near lotus..

Daksh; haan..bas wahi khadi raho..haan baba...wahi

daksh photo lene ko koshish main he s taking few steps backward aur woh accidently ek ladki se( khoobsurat ) takra jaata hain😲😲

Daksh; woh..I am sorry..aapko laga tho nahi
Ladki; its ok..main teek hoon.looks at daksh ...and she starts saying something..

Naina dekh rahi hain sab Mrs kp look ke saath😡😡

Ladki;BTW I am sheetal( streches out her hand)..aur aap..

Ladki is waiting with strechted hand..usko shakehand mila..dakshu se nahi naina se😆

Naina; main naina patwardhan...ladki is confused ki ye kaun hain
Daksh; woh ye meri patni..
Ladki(lil disappointed); woh..no aapki shaadi ho chuki hain.😭.mujhe laga ki..
Naina; kya laga aapko? FYI hamari shaadi ho chukhi hain aur ye mera pati hain..ok( holding his hand tightly)..

Daksh is like enjoying naina's new angle...

Ladki; oh..fine.waise aapne apna naam nahi bataya( looking at daksh)😲
Daksh is about to say some thing
.just then naina says; chulbul pandey hain inka naam .😆🤣

ladki; kya? chulbhul pandey?😲😲

.Naina; haan ..kyu kuch problm hai iss naam se..naam kaafi hain.aur kuch chahiye phone num..ghar ka pata..haan😡.😡.bolo( lil rude and gussa)..with dnt mess with me expression...

.Holds his had more tightly and says chalo daksh...drags him from there aur dakshu ache bacche ki tarah uske saath chala jaata hain..😛😛

PS; This FF is for someone to smile.😃.I hope ki woh smile kare isse padkar..my darlin friend ke liye ..Smile pls😛😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky meri jaan🤗🤗... ilu, ilu nd ilu again🤗🤗🤗... thnku dear🤗🤗... tere FFs pe tho colgate smiles aa hi jate hai yar... aaj tho... u kno na...chintu nd bantu hugs ki barish...nahi toofan ho tujh pe😃...ek surpris bhi hai tere liye chek t out😛...
ps : i sersly, sersly LOVED dis new angl in naina🤗...sry naina ko PS me dal diya but tujhe ilu bhi tho kehna tha mujhe😉
pps : i think forum me "like" butn ke sath ek "love" butn bhi hona chahiye... wat d'u do wen u absolutly love d post🤔...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

lucky meri jaan🤗🤗... ilu, ilu nd ilu again🤗🤗🤗... thnku dear🤗🤗... tere FFs pe tho colgate smiles aa hi jate hai yar... aaj tho... u kno na...chintu nd bantu hugs ki barish...nahi toofan ho tujh pe😃...ek surpris bhi hai tere liye chek t out😛...

ps : i sersly, sersly LOVED dis new angl in naina🤗...sry naina ko PS me dal diya but tujhe ilu bhi tho kehna tha mujhe😉


ditto... Lucky seriously loved this new side of Naina.😛... Dakshu tho must be feeling so proud😉... wow ye meri hi Naina hai.😆..😆.. itne sare smiles dhene ke liye thank u dear thank u so🤗 much..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗... loved Naina's dialogue.🤗🤗 ha ha chulbul pandey good one.😉.😉...Naina ka sallu hi hai Dakshu tho 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky.. i don't know who is the special firend... But it gave me smile on my face.. 😊😉.. yaar.. I really like Naina's this new angle... i want it.. i kiss you.. umha..! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Aish, rupu, neetu

Shukriya mere yaaro aur mere pyaro...Luv u all...ab aage ki kahaani hain ye...

CONTD...

Naina takes away daksh from that lady they stop at a place..

Daksh; Naina ..that was lil rude..sirf naam hi tho poocha usne?

Naina; acha!..itna mann kar raha hain tho jaakar batake avo..javo..(pushes him)..tumhe sirf ye dikayi diya ki main rude thi..lekin ye nahi ki woh ladki openly tumhe line maar rahi thi😆
Daksh smiles.but acts; kya baat kar rahi ho? mujhe tho pata hi nahi chala..😉

Naina; yahi tho tumhari problem hain..tumhe buddu banana bahut aasaan hain aur ladkiyon ki maamle main tho tum😆...sab ladkiyan mere jaise ache nahi hote..😲😲

Daksh; kya? acha aur tum?🤣( laughs).😲😲.naina shayad tum bhool gayi ki tumne mere saath hamarefirst meeting pe kya kiya..train main...tumhe mera naam tak pata nahi aur mujhe apna pati banaliya...😆

Naina (chor nazar); woh..tab ki baat hain..ab tho main tumhari biwi hoon aur mera haq banta hai tum par.. ki main tumhe save karu saari ladkiyon se..😛.
Daksh; Hmmm..naina the saviour ha ha..😆😆

Naina;( looking at her nails)waise mere aane se pehle kya baatein chal rarahethe tum dono ke beech..😲

Daksh decides to pull her leg for some time...

Daksh; woh...main kyu batavu?😆
Naina; kyu batavu matalb? 😡mera haq hain jaan ne ka..batana padega..😡
Daksh; arey tum mujhe baat karne do tabna( naina gives a killer look)😡
Daksh; ok batata hoon...bas itna poocha ki ussi kahi lag tho nahi gaya..aur woh jawab de rahithi..uske baad usne naam poocha aur tumne entry liya...😉

Naina; badi chinta hai uski tumhe ... "aapko laga tho nahi"( imitating daksh).🤣.dil pe laga hoga usko tumhe dekh kar..😆..mujhe phir se mil jaaye..😡.

Daksh; arey swt hr8 shaanth hojavu..kyu itna react kar rahi ho..Bechari ladki ..
Naina; bechari?😲lagta hain bahut taras aa raha hain uss par...javo uske saath ghoomo..😡
Daksh; tho phir kya tum akeli baaki garden dekh pavoge agar main uske saath ghoomne chala gaya tho...😆😆
Naina; with lods of gussa later lil tears in eyes;😡 😭haan main akeli chali javungi.
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;daksh's hr8 aches💔 looking those small tears.he's about to react

Naina leaves from there..daksh follows her..arey meri baat tho suno..naina ..naina...

Daksh runs behind her and holds her shoulder..
Naina; javo.mere peeche kyu aa rahe ho.😲mujhe tumse baat nahi karni..( lil pampered voice)..removes his hand from shoulder..

Daksh comes forward Holds her both hands ; Naina..Mere tarf dekho. Naina ..pls

.naina lifts up her eyes and eye lock..

Daksh; wipes her tears...Naina .. I am sry..main tho mazaq kar raha tha.I am sry.. tumhe tang karne ke liye..( holds his ears).pls gussa mat karo meri jaan.aur tum jaanti ho main tumhari aankhon main asu bardarsh nahi kar sakta....pls naina 😛.

Naina becomes lil normal..

Daksh; Naina I love u..kya tum nahi jaanti apne daksh ke baare main..kitna pyar karta hoon main tumse..jaanti ho na..kaho.😛
Naina nods her head saying yes...
Daksh; tho phir ab ache se smile karo..smile smile...😃😃
Naina; .smiles and hugs him( small hug)


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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww Dakshu😉... so sweet.😊... Damn cute scene Lucky👏... U know how to bring smiles on our face 😛 too too sweet, cute one 😊 Loved all dialogues 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 Naina ko sirf aur sirf Dakshu hi pareshan kar sakta hai 😆 😆 😆 Loved it Lucky infinity rakh le 🤗 🤗 🤗 chintu bantu hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Aww Dakshu😉... so sweet.😊... Damn cute scene Lucky👏... U know how to bring smiles on our face 😛 too too sweet, cute one 😊 Loved all dialogues 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 Naina ko sirf aur sirf Dakshu hi pareshan kar sakta hai 😆 😆 😆 Loved it Lucky infinity rakh le 🤗 🤗 🤗 chintu bantu hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗

ditto ditto ditto 4 all... nd dakshu apna...aww. cuteness ki hadh😍... loved it lucky...thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗chintu hugs nd bantu hugs frm me 2🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh.. without Dakshu four days...!!!! (thursady to monday) I have not touched the videos of previous two days.. there is no FFs from Lucky, Sweetaish, Rupali and LM. So I think to write an FF for a satisfaction.

Here is it... very fast one... In Dakshna room in the morning, Daksh opens his eyes and looks around... he see Naina is coming out from washroom drying her hair. suddently she stuck with her saree and abt the fall. Dakhs tensed a bit... but Naina herself managed it. she does not notice Daksh has woken up. she checks her saree and dinfs it is not correct thats why she was abt to fall. she goes in front of the mirror and corrects the fleets. Daksh has a amazed, lost look seeing her image in mirror. He gets up from the bed and slowly moves towards her. He hugs her from behind.. naina a shocked a bit.. but being cool in next sec.. 'tum ud gaya?" Daksh does not answer.. she is also lost.. Daksh parts her wet hair a bit and abt to kiss behind her ear... naina realise abt what they are going to do.. she comes out from hir arms and tries to manage the situation. she puts the towel on his shoulder and tells: javo.. jaldi se nahakar avo.. mein nashta lagathi hoo.. " then she goes from there. Daksh becomes KP but goes to the washroom.. then after sometimes naina came back.. by then Daksh is getting ready for office. seeing Naina, the feelings invokes again... he holds Naina's hand and pulls towards him.. Naina looks at Daksh... Daksh is getting lost in her eyes.. love... naina abt to say something.. but Daksh stops her... abt to give a kiss on her lips.. Naina hides the eyes and comes out of the arms and opens the wardrobe and takes the hankerchief and gives him.."tumhara hankey.." this time Daksh is fullto KP (he knows her very well right?)... he takes it and throw it away... and taking bag he leaves... Naina feels bad.. she starts to think.. "Oh.. Daksh ka feeling buri tarah se hurt huva hai.. voh muje boho chahta hai.. vaise hi voh ek pati hai, uska poora haq hai yeh sab karne ka... aur ek patni hone ke nate yeh mera farz bhi hai.. kya mein galat karti hai kya?? mei sab se zyada daksh ka feeling ko khayal karana chahiye.. " and then decides to forget abt the no-romance policy and give his happiness.. it is her duty etc.. In the night, Daksh with KP face goes to bed. Naina comes near him and starts to speak softly and stokes his hair. pats his face and softly give kiss on his forehead. Daksh's heart beat is faster and he contrls.. tells "naina.. bas karo.. muje apne apko rok nahi pavoonga.. tumhe pata hai na mein tumhe kitna chahtha hoom..?" Naina slowly comes near ear and whispers "I love you.." Daksh is fully out of control and hugs her... he pushes her to the bed and looks at her eyes.. naina down Daksh up.. husky voice "I love you too...". Then he comes closer slowly slowly.. and places a kiss on her forehead, eyes and cheeks.. when they are in good mood.. they hear some voince form downstairs and they go there. as usual rohini is shouting at Aku and everybody looks at her dsgust... Dakshna lost their mood... they go up after rohini's drama... next day Naina gets a call from Daksh that ask her to come urgent to his office... naina gets concerned and runs.. raching his office he tells... "pehle tum apna phone swit-off karna hai.." Naina obeys.. the tells we are going to a resort in Goa for two days.. Naina suprises...!!!

Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Our Dakshu is smart and brilliant. He knows in current situation he cannot spend time with Naina peacefully from home. Now there is no objection from Naina also. Also he does not want to take any delay. after Okying their tickets he plans to leave. Thats y he calle her to office by telling lie and he does not want to spoil his plan due to any silly phone call from anybody. naina suprised.. N: Daksh! abhi?
D: ha... flight 3 O' clock mein hai.
N: par mera passport...
D: don't worry.. mene le liya hai.. (so smart)
N: humne kuch nahi le liya na?
D: koyi baat nahi... noon tak hum shopping kar lenge phir jayenge.. teek hai...
N: oh.. tum to bohot smart nikalte ho..
D: FYI, mei pehle bhi smart hai.. smiles..
N: Daksh kisi se nahi pataya hai na..
D: mei abhi akruthi ko patata hoo

he takes the phone and send message to her. Naina and me will be out of Mumbai for 2 days.Then they go for shopping and buy the necessary dresses and other things. Resort haina... sab vaham rom mei milenge... Dakshna have good time while shopping as he desired.
D: Naina tum khush ho na..?
N: Nahi .. daksh ek minute chup ho gaya..
Mien thrilled hoom my sweet heart... [Daksh KutePink ho gaya].. rem this is public place... after the lunch they go to airport and by 4 O clk, they reach Goa and then resort. Naina is so excited. They enter in the room... wow! it looks goergeous. well arranged room. first time Daksh ke sath khushiyam manane ke liye.. both are very happy.. she opens the window... wow... beautiful sight.. there is a smalll balcony facng towards sea.. she feels too good. Daksh looks at her..
N: daksh kitna accha site hai..
D: kisna choose kiya? yeh sochna hai..
N: Oh.. maan gayi.. ab chalo lets go out
Daksh is happy.. they go outside. They walk thought the shops and naina sees some sea bath suite..
N: Daksh... muje voh chahiye..
D: voh.. bath suite?
N: Ham.. kya hum kuch der sea mei chale? pls.. (pampered baby voice)
D: Accha... baba chalenge...
they buy a 3/4th sea bath suite for each [i don't tell swimming suite]. Aftr changing they come to the seashore. Naina is so thrilled. she runs towards tthe sea... when the waves come, she runs back... Daksh is watching.. Naina calls Daksh who was watching her...
N: kya darr hai..?
D: darr? muje? to yeh dekhlo..
naina runs and he runs behind her.. the waves pat them often..
suddenly a bigger wave comes and naina abt to fall.. Daksh gets concerned and rushes towards her.
D: tum teek to hai na?
N: haah Daksh.. bilku teek hoom.. hum vaha tak chale? she points a bit far.
D: no bilkul nahi... bohot khela.. ab bas...
N: offo daksh... pls... maza aa raha hai..
naina bachho ki tarah root jaatti hai
D: teek hai.. bas ek barr.. par tum akeli nahi.. mein bhi avoonga...
N happily..: teek hai..

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