Hi everyone...well....im reading fan fic's since a long time....n i just love them....asusual last nite bhi i was dreaming abt Ram.....okay i know i have been crazy abt Jai Walia.....laikin Ram ne bhi dil jeet liya the way he plays Jai's chracter....okay im thinking of writing this fan fic....abt Jai n Bani....i have written many stories so far...n have won awards in schools n colleges laikin this is my first attempt in india-forums....so plzz bear it.😊 i will start from last episode...where Jai is drinking:
Jai is drinking....and keep thinking abt Bani n park road....and then recall wat rosh has said....He throws the glass angrily on the floor and just then bani comes....she is shocked when she see jai like that....
Bani: Mr. Walia
Jai looks at her....and then turn his face away
Bani: Mr. Walia....yeh kya haal bana rakha hai aapne apna....agar massi ne dekh liya to kya betegi un per.
She holds his hand....but he remove har hands...bani is shocked....Jai fell down...bani gets him up and take him to his bed...remove his shoes...n put blanket on him.
Next day: Jai is in his office and he gets envelope...he is shocked he thinks that its the same letter he got before abt the park road...he is irritated...he try to tear that envelope but feels like there is sumthing else in there..he opens the envelope and saw pictures...the pictures are of none other than Bani n pushkar....he gets a letter with it "Mr. Jai. Walia....pehle aap ke betay ke samman pushkar ne aapke pyar ko cheena aur aaj aap ki biwi...." Jai is shocked....he throws the letter angrily...and then once again see the pics..(Background music: Ab to adat si hai mujhko)....Jai goes home...he enters walia mansion....
Jai to dadi: bani kahan hai???
Dadi: Jai putar woh apne kamnre mein hai
Jai goes in his room....Bani is hanging her sarees in her closet....Jai closes the door with full pressure....Bani is taken back....he comes angrily towards her holds her hand n brings her closer.
Jai: Tumhare behan ne kya mujhe kum dukh diya jo ab tumne bhi uske kadmo per chalna shuru kardiya....?? kya kuch nahin kiya meine tumhare liye...aur tumne uska yeh sila diya...(he leaves her hand) Ghalti mere thi jo mein bharoosa karne laga tha tum per....God Dammit....(he hit his hand to the wall).
Bani (shocked): Mr. Walia yeh aap kya keh rahe hain....kya kiya hai meine???
Jai: Dont try to be so innocent bani....(he throws pics to her) kya hai yeh????? bolo kya hai yeh??
Bani picks up the pics n her eyes r filled with tears...
Bani: Mr. Walia....woh...mein
Jai: (stops her) Kya tum Pushkar ko chahti ho ya nahin????
Bani: Mr. Walia...aap mere baat to sunein
Jai: Haan ya na....yes or no???
Jai is angry n bani is shocked..
End of this fiction....If u guyz like it then i will post next part...if no then sorry for wasting ur time...
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