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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

waaah im crying , I want more , pehla din he ladai main nikaal diya ... kuch hua nahi dono ke beech :(

this is my first comment , ill read again and give you my other coments bye for now !

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

if you add people to ur buddy list u can mass sms them , if you wish to promote ur ff you go to ff main page and one of the sticky topics has a link wher u advertise ur ff's

and do put ur first ff on another new thread naa please , i absolutely love it !!!!!!!!!1

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Ruch , Mitzi , thanks for explaining about PMs. I will PM whoever's been reading so far when I put my next update.

Mitzi, haa haa , Kuch nahi hua ...

Next part me shaayad thoda kuch hoga 😉.

Will try and put the first FF on a new thread and send you the link . Thanks for that advertizing info also.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wow pra amazing part. I love the way you write and an fights are some thing i enjoy gr8 part cont soon. And do add me to your pm list

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

hers an attempt at recaping what i kept begging Honey to write :

Abhiis a senior and he's in love wid Nikki , how will this come across , sometimes he wil be strict with her and sometimes he will melt at her antics. then i wanted to see abhi and Ridz becoming friends, then Armaan Abhi tashan . the slow acceptance of Abhi and yet the distance with the gang. and yes of course Abhi's insecurities and also Nikki who puts up a tough front is such a vunerable kid but she will show her vunerability to Abhi only ... and Abhi's vunerbility .. remember how he once ran to Nikki in the locker room afraid of Jiah and Nikki gave him comfort that was such a sweet angle. And Nikkis diabolical nature she is so vunerable , so much a kid , so cute and yet v v mature . and of course Abhis strut and his sadupan ! and dont forget that Nikki is very mischievious too ... wonder wat new ways of troubling abhi she wld devise ... hai !

Edited by mitzification - 13 years ago

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Pra you can write a few hindi dialouges also ... makes the reader connect to the original show

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ariel1985

@ariel1985

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

⭐️👏Good job yaar...u write really well...👏⭐️😊

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pra19

@pra19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Jyothi , thanks so much . Will add you to the PM list , having some problems in doing it now . Will do it with the next update I think. Do read Part 3 , putting it now.

Mitzi , Liked the short story plot there . Its really nice . Like I said before, I am waiting...😊 . And see one more fresh comment on hindi dialogues... Sure , will put in some wherever I can.

ariel (Sorry , didn't get your name ...) hello there. Good to hear from you after a long time and thank you so much for those lovely words. Do stick around to read the rest too.

Rucha , Nehu , waiting for your edits . Pasand nahi aaya to bhi kar do 😊.

Thanks everyone who liked the two parts so far .