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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys,, soon I ll post ...
Hi guys,,,,,,
Here is the starting part of the OS for u😊,
Os is starting with maan is bringing geet to their home after she had left him because of some misunderstanding. Maan tried his level best and brought his geet, his love, his life to his home again. But maan is so much confused about their relationship, because she has left him and went to her bro's home for uttering some strong words towards her in anger. Afetr he had brought geet to their home, there was a silince between them which is killing both of them. But both of them could not break the silince. Both of them were thinking about the incident which was happened between them.
The very next day maan had gone for office, and geet is in home. She can tolerate anything, any sorrows, any difficulties but not maan's silence...
She was thinking that she knew maan's anger, then why did she take it more serious and left maan eventhough knowing that maan could not live without her. She felt very guilty tat she was ready to leave maan foreverand felt maan's pain. She was thinking that she could not give any happiness to her maan except pain.She was thinking all of this when she was drying her hair before her mirror. She has taken their wedding photo, which was kept in the dressing table and running her hand over maan's picture. Tears came out from her eyes. She kissed the maan's picture in the frame and hugs it.
she promised herself not to give anymore pain to maan except happiness and decide to give surprise to maan for today's night. At the same time Maan was thinking about his geet and the words that he uttered in anger and felt very bad for that and decide to say sorry to geet. He also wants to give her a surprise gift and buy the veryyy beautiful platinum earrings and red roses for his geet and moved towards their home...
Here geet was getting ready for his surprise gift. She wore the red saree which was gifted my maan for her birthday. She wore the jewells which suits to her saree and tikka and waist chain and anklets, bangles and kajal, bindi and finally sindoor on her forehead. she looks stunning in that attire. And then she wrote a letter to her maan and kept that in his dressing table along with red roses... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continuation...
Part-2..
Maan has reached his room and saw the letter that was kept on his table. He took that letter and started reading. In that letter geet is seeking for forgiveness for leaving him and assures him that she would not leave him here after.His eyes were filled with tears...
He continues reading...
She has written that she wants to take their relationship to the another level. Maan was left with surprise and happy to read this...
Maan starts to search for geet. He was searching in all the places of their home. But he could not find her. Then suddenly got an idea and went to the terrace where he made the roop garden for his geet. The garden was decorated fully with candels beautifully. Maan was surprised to see the decoration and searching for geet. Geet was standing near to the arch which is fully covered with the plants and flowers.Maan was stunned to see his geet who was looking like pari because of the moonlight and candle light. He can't take over his eyes from her.He was drinking the elegance and beauty of his love. He slowly moved towards geet. Geet realished that maan had come there and filled with emotions, expectations.
Maan has reached geet and put his hand in geet's shoulder and turns her towards him.She looked down.He lift her face.He was shocked to see tears in geet eye's. She saw him with guiltiness and pain and love everything which makes Maan sad. Maan understood her feelings. He smiled at her and slowly wiped out her tears and kisses in both of her eyes. Suddenly geet huged him tightly like she won't leave him everafter.
Geet: Maan, plz forgive me for leaving u.. for not understanding ur feelings.. for giving u pain always nothing else..plz punish me for these... and broke out in maan's arm and crying very badly.
Maan: Geet... once look at me..
Geet was lifting her face from his chest and see him.
Maan looks deeply through her eyes and said,
Maan: I love you...
Geet: Maan, plz give me a punishment..
Maan: I love you...
Geet: I have given lot of pain to u other than happiness...
Maan: I love you...
Geet: Maan?? She looked into his eyes and realised the truth that he cannot hatet for anything.
she gave a kiss on his cheek and buried her head in his chest.
Maan too hugging her more passionately and said,
Maan: you have to forgive me if u can. i have told you very hard words.I should not do like that. I hurt u a lot.
Geet saw the pain in his eyes and she could not tolerate any pain in his eyes.
Geet: No,Maan.. It was my fault. U hav not done anything wrong. Plz maan don't hurt urself. She kissed him again and looked at him. Both were smiled and maan took out his gift and showed them to geet. He started to remove her earrings and he made her wear the new earrings that he bought for her and kissed both of her ears which made geet shivered. Maan noticed that and become naughty.
Maan: Geet I m hungry and have to to some works because i have one important meeting tomo.. So, have to go to sleep early.
Geet was confused that did he read her letter or not? She looked at his eye's with confusion and asked,
Geet: Maan, woh mein...
Maan: woh kya geet?
Maan was smiling inside..
Maan:Geet: aap.. my letter..
Mann: Letter?? what letter? Bolo na geet...
Geet was disappointed that he did not see her letter.
Geet: Woh mein .. appkiliye ek letter... Did't u see it?
Maan: No geet... I hav't seen any letter.. so wat? now tell me what have u written in that?
Maan was smirking...
geet: woh mein.. i mean...
Maan: bolo geet.. he wants to hear that from her directly. so, he continously asked her to speak up..
Geet: I.. I want to take our relationship to another level. I won't make u wait u more.. She told in one breath and buried her head in maan's chest...
Maan lifted her face and see her. Already he was totally mesmerised with her beauty and wants have more of her. now, he got her acceptance.. he cannot wait anymore. he took her in his arms and moves towards their room.
to be continued...
guys.. plz comment if u like...
Edited by Nandhini - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one..u have kept the suspense of their flash back..pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hai Nandini...
lovely update dear...
i loved it...
pls do continue soon...
am waiting for it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for ur comments dears...
Soon i ll update the 3rd part...😊😊😊

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