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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd
this is my 1000 post

now i m goldie

its very special post for me

and i choose ur ff because ur my fav writer

CONGRATULATIONS FOR BECOMING A GOLDIE👏👏👏

I'M HAPPY FOR YOU😊

THANKS FOR ACCEPTING ME AS A WRITER😊

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome parts...

but tooo unfair for poor geet... not even thinking of a girls heart every one r being selfish n unfair towards her...

cant they really understand tht it will b difficult to any girl to accept tht her marriage is forced n her so called husband is madly in love with other girl but not her...they r sooo insesitive only thinking abt maan n even emotionally tying her to customs...

sorry for saying all tht but really not liking anything happening with poor geet...n top it all now she was asked to strip...n tht to for whom??? her so called husband whom till now cant even accept him or this marriage...

sorry if u dont like my comment but i wrote wht i felt...but i really hated every one (her parents n dadi) for asking her to make him happy rather than giving her the chance to proceed further with her own identity... i really felt bad for her when she thought abt those lines...no one cares abt me n all

also i have a doubt if maan was really sooo madly in love with anjali cant he distinguish her from anywhere ... is it only face all tht matters ?? wht abt the heart n ehsaas...

Thanks for your comment...
you expressed what you felt..
i'm really happy to read your critism..
as a writer this is a story for me...
as a women..i'm also against it...
and why all are supporting maan you will get the answer soon
for ur question..you hate dadi n geets parents..
Dadi is selfish to see his pota happy..
and geets parents are tied in anjalis promise..
maans love.heart and ehsaas..
Maan is now seeing only her face..
he has never seen them both..n he is unaware of her twin..
and he had no doubt as she is daughter of handas..
go to next page yaar...i have brief questions...

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

THIS IS MY QUESTION TO ALL THE MARRIED WOMENS AND THE GIRLS WHO KNOWS ABOUT SUCH INCIDENTS..
I NEED A FULL ANSWER FROM ALL OF YOUR HEART SINCERELY...
DID YOUR PARENTS ASK YOU..IF YOU ARE READY FOR MARRIAGE?
HAVE THEY EVER ASKED YOU DO YOU LIKE THIS GROOM..?
HOW MANY GIRLS GOT MARRIED TO YOUR HUSBAND FORCEFULLY IN THE NAME OF PRIDE STATUS.MONEY.ETC..?
HOW MANY OF YOU MARRIED YOUR SISTERS HUSBAND AFTER YOUR SISTERS DEATH?SOMETIMES TO LOOK AFTER THEIR BABIES..
HOW MANY GIRLS GOT MARRIED TO FULFILL YOUR ELDERS LAST WISH?
(I BELONG TO THIS CATEGORY.I WAS NOT ALLOWED TO ENTER COLLEGE ALSO.BCOZ MY PARENTS WANTED ONLY MY BROS TO FINISH THE EDUCATION.FOR THEM A GIRL IS ONLY MEANT TO BE A HOUSE MAKER..THANK GOD MY HUSBAND IS NOT LIKE THEM..SHORT MINDED.)
HOW MANY OF YOU KNOW YOUR HUSBANDS LIKES N DISLIKES BEFORE MARRIAGE?
HOW MANY OF YOU HAVE TALKED TO YOUR HUSBANDS N WENT ON DATE WITH HIM BEFORE YOUR MARRIAGE..
@PRESENT BCOZ OF TELE.DEP.IT IS EASY TO TALK,.BUT IT WAS NOT POSSIBLE BEFORE.
HOW MANY OF YOU KNOW WHAT IS A REAL MARRIAGE LIFE MEANS AT THE TIME OF YOUR MARRIAGE..
NOW ALSO THERE IS BAL VIVAG GOING IN NORTH..LESS IN SOUTH..HOW MANY OF THAT MINOR GIRLS KNOW ABOUT THE RELATION.
AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST..
HOW MANY OF YOUR HUSBANDS ASKED YOUR PERMISSION ..
CAN WE TAKE THE NEXT STEP TO MOVE OUR RELATION..
MOSTLY ALL OUR MARRIAGES ARE FIXED BY OUR PARENTS..
WE GO ON SATISFYING THEM..
WE GIRLS ALWAYS KEEP OURSELF IN A SHELL..
WE NEVER RAISE OUR VOICE AGAINST ELDERS..
WE ARE PREACHEDTO ADJUST OURSELVES IN OUR HUSBANDS HOUSE ALSO..
IN OUR SR ALSO..WE GIVE US ONLY TO FULFIL THEIR DESIRES...
THEN ONLY WE KNOW HIM,UNDERSTAND HIM N LOVE HIM...
THIS WHAT HAPPENS EVERYWHERE..
ONLY A MINORITY GIRLS HAVE THEIR OWN WORLD TO LIVE OF THEIR OWN..
NOWADAYS ,THE PERCENTAGE IS INCREASING..BUT MAJORITY REMAINS THE SAME...
THIS IS A FEELING LIKE A VOLCANO INSIDE ME WHICH BURSTED TODAY..
THANKS TO BHANU_REKHAG.😊

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: vanisasv
😊 lovely updates

This is my sister vani..😛

congratulations for her first post in mine..👏
👏
today is really special..muraad is posting her 1000th post in mine

n my sister started her 1rst journey in mine..😊

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vrinda22

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thanks for the following members who liked the last two parts..this is the highest likes of geetanjali..and thanks for the people who gave me precious comments..🥳

9290860623, swati2011, kartheenarayana, 5armad, pyarisaheli, dpurva, navyanissi, krishna., lethasanthosh, drashtipatel30, sheetalvasa, cukish, kabslocks, hepzi, jagritimanocha, mishim, swabi, nats024, Bluesaffire2, vanisasv, its_me, saro, SweetestPari, maaneetmaahi, tanei, mhz007, tintinu, Saj110, shalinikanagu, cutemishti, maanmania, ElizaKawa, rifana2811, awesomepooja, manjusha_92, Acharya10, Paingel, dumas, surbhijn106, Maaneet4eve, bhakbhartifan, blessednim, thendral_111, Ash534, happydays30, nazsij, gill123, jyothinajo, SallyAmanda, 97531, Neeju, NH1971, Shilalipi, jssood, SiniHanda, Trisha4evr, muraadlovesdd, khushboo22, shalinisaran89, simm28, geetsweet, punam2712, disha_Maan.GC, krati5, paponecon, ammu5, ritzy09, sakshi04, Remya_Pillai, iceprincess101, angel_smily, rrs1391, tushti-kiran, 9n9i9s9h9u9, PerfectYaRav, meena.., soni4eva, mayurmaaneet, janu_2006, bhanu_rekhag, spvd, pop77, zaara2212, Shravya.M, Shalve, seemamary, abinash079, ambbiha, mrk-1, PrithviSanyo1, -Nilam-, Dreamy_Mystique, miss_giggles, abisamratgunjan.

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

will update in few hrs..

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vrinda22

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PART 12

Thank you friends for giving me a huge support...thanks for all of them who hit like buttons.😊and commenting me..😊

strip..
is this the word a girl would expect from her husband on her first night..
She was cornered again..he can go to any extent to get what he wants'
she looked at him in pain..was it his word or his bleeding hands..that makes her paining..
She made him sit on the bed 'where is first aid box..
do you hear me?prove ..that you care for me...not by bandaging me..
she looked into his eyes..it was piercing him with lots of questions...but maan could not understand it?
no maan...i can't...i said you...i need time..
her voice was pleading him..she dont know why he was pleading him..this is not her...she never goes opposite to her thoughts..she thinks she hates him..then why i'm doing this..
you are saying like that,I've not seen you before.. this is not our first night,.or first time.you are going to spend the night with me..Do you want me to remember you ..that night..your mom ki b'day ka pehla din..you n me.the rainy day..that hut..
Geet was extremely shocked..it was evident on her face..maan could see it easily..her eyes moisted..she instantly turned n stood near the window.
He felt bad for remainding that night..he saw her tears also..is this he wanted!!!!!!yes..i want to see her in pain..but his heart didnt accept it..her tears bother him..

Maan got a call..is waqt kaun..he saw the number..it was from abroad..(their time was morning...)some business call..
Ok..anjali...i'll give you time...5 minutes...till i finish this call..u can think...
He came near her n stood opposite 2 her..he was talking on the phone looking at her..he was grabbing the near by curtain ..
Geet had a small smile on her face..the blood has stopped as he was holding the curtain over the wound part..

Geet looked at the sky,the moon n the stars..She looked at a star far away from her sight...it was looking like a dot to her..
Anjali..
He called me anjali..
All says the persons who are not alive become stars...
are you also a star now anjali..is you the star i'm watching now..
do you know.. what i'm thinking inside me..
he says you spent a night with him..i dont want to believe him..
I know you are more culturised than me..u cant cross ur limits..
but i dont know why.. i believe him..his words are true..
may be the day he mentions is unforgettable..
how can i forget that day..which I spent hours in cold water to supress my unknown feelings..
that whole week i was hospitalised..is that bcoz of you..
now i can understand,why i got that burning feel inside me..
What should I do now anjali?
he is asking me thinking its you..
how can i give me ,who is not mine..only urs..
this is not his first night..how can a girl digest this ..his husband is not her first..
is that not enough shock for me to digest..he loves you...now ,he says,he intimated with you...
how can i accept him anjali...tell me..
even if i let him..
he will touch me..thinking its you..
he will feel me..thinking you..
he will smell me..thinking you..
he will kiss me ...thinking you..
he will love me..thinking you..
it all ends in you..you only..
I know we have same tastes...when we are young we always got things that are same..our choice is always same..but i neverthought,i'll marry a man of your choice..,whom you loved..
YOUR LOVE..May be you was unconditionally in love with him..you made me promise also not to say about your death to him..
If i dont accept his words..what reason will i say..i cant break my promise..
common anjali..what should i do now..
help me ..i dont know ,how to get to a conclusion..
should i refuse him..
...
should i accept him as my husband...
should i take a step to forward to proceed my marriage..

the star moved fast and stopped near her window...It was twinkling at her..
that was un imagined for her..
do you want me to proceed..
the star twinkled like an acceptence..

..
maan has finished his call..
he was looking at geet n her changing expressions..
atlast a peace in her face.
anjali..sweetheart..what have you decided.
his word sweetheart only was in his lips..not from heart..she can understand it.
geet looked at the sky..there was no sign of that star..
Is that my imagination..no..it was real..

She sighed as she knows what she should do now..
i'll try not to hate him for whatever he done to me..
i'll think this as an arranged marriage..and this man as an unknown person i got married..
i'll try to make him love me as geet..
But today..i'll live as Anjali for him..

I know guys this is a small one..but what to do..i'm fully drowned in sorrow of U,Me,Aur...?so i could not get back into this..sry guys..next one will be as usual...

Next :PART 13

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29.11.2011...8.30pm

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