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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker

^^In quite a hurry, will discuss the rest of the points thru PM later, but ryt now, need to clear one thing, coz ur reply confused me :S



"She is IN the Game now.
Awesome Line, gave me those chills! I doubt others present could gather any meaning from it. Overall deeply Thrilling!

if they didn't, they should be able to by next chapter.


By 'they' you mean inmates of Shantivan and Khushi, ryt? 😲


YUP. YUP! 😳 i'll explain their reactions in more detail in the next chapter! 😳

Originally posted by: 1996Desigirl

Omg u updated chap 3 on my...B-DAY!!!!:D thank u sooo much...I luv u for this


oww! love! i'm so glad i did! wait.. PM-ing you! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Shalu 🤗...Remember me...

Well pehle mujhe maar that I am such a late lateef in coming to know about this super mystery shrouded yet intriguingly interesting FF.Well frankly speaking I have never watched IPKKND.😕.but have seen some promos..The original show did not grab my interest Nor will I ever watch it.😛


But Since My Shalu is writing this FF ..It seemed very interesting and I decided to give it a shot...Coz I so so Missed your...😛.Ooops..😛You know What...😭

So coming to the title.👏.Seems pretty interesting and had an element of mystery to it.😳..Believe me it immediately reminded me of Robert Frost's poem..Mending Walls..which a line about rabbits being chased by hunters😆 ..But the prologue indeed threw a light on various aspects of this FF...👏

Well I finished reading all the three chapters .and I am just in awe of the way you described the stage scene and the forensic dept scene...

Well as of now Your FF makes me more hooked to it as it is completely new for me..even the characters 😳..Of course I could not relate to the original show..

But your FF seems like a pretty interesting novel for me....

Need I say You are brilliant Shalu...

U already know..How much I lubb you and your stuff..🤗

The dexterity with which you handle the emotions.😭.painting a vivid picture of the various trials and tribulations...of the lead ..is great..Well looking forward to your next updates.😍.I may be not able to comment regularly..😭Coz you know my Crazy work schedules..But just see the LIKE COLUMN...I WOULD ALWAYS BE THERE.🤗.

Lubb you loads...🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Hi Shalu 🤗...Remember me...

Well pehle mujhe maar that I am such a late lateef in coming to know about this super mystery shrouded yet intriguingly interesting FF.Well frankly speaking I have never watched IPKKND.😕.but have seen some promos..The original show did not grab my interest Nor will I ever watch it.😛

owww! you sweet heart!!! you're here JUST for me?? well, I LOVE YOU MORE THAN WICKED! 😳 🤗

But Since My Shalu is writing this FF ..It seemed very interesting and I decided to give it a shot...Coz I so so Missed your...😛.Ooops..😛You know What...😭

mee tooo!!! lovely days those were! 😭

So coming to the title.👏.Seems pretty interesting and had an element of mystery to it.😳..Believe me it immediately reminded me of Robert Frost's poem..Mending Walls..which a line about rabbits being chased by hunters😆 ..But the prologue indeed threw a light on various aspects of this FF...👏

mending walls? never read it! I LOVE ROBERT FROST! "THE ROAD NOT TAKEN!" my fav of course! and even "Fire and Ice!"😳

Well I finished reading all the three chapters .and I am just in awe of the way you described the stage scene and the forensic dept scene...

Well as of now Your FF makes me more hooked to it as it is completely new for me..even the characters 😳..Of course I could not relate to the original show..

well, i can always give you like a brief intro to the characters! you don't need to know the story.. just the characters.. would you want me to do that? 😳 and i'm sooo happyyy you loved my ff! "me all dancy wancy!"😃

But your FF seems like a pretty interesting novel for me....

novel? oh, you kind-hearted soul! you always shower me with the best of compliments! I LOVE YOU PIU MHAARI! and wait, are you bengali? 😲 aami bengali bhoojte parbe! (sorry, i'm not bengali.. i'm odiya!)😆

Need I say You are brilliant Shalu...

thanks love! 😳 that statement just drew me back to cloud nine! 😳

U already know..How much I lubb you and your stuff..🤗

AND I LOB YOU MORE! 😳

The dexterity with which you handle the emotions.😭.painting a vivid picture of the various trials and tribulations...of the lead ..is great..Well looking forward to your next updates.😍.I may be not able to comment regularly..😭Coz you know my Crazy work schedules..But just see the LIKE COLUMN...I WOULD ALWAYS BE THERE.🤗.

and i as the wicked prezzie, solemnly swear that i'll always love you till the end of time, my PIU MHAARI! 😳 🤗

Lubb you loads...🤗

LOB YOU MOREEE! 😳


res. 🤣

piu mhaari! i read ur comment! and now i';m bookmarking this page. tomorrow morning, replying to ur comment would be the first thing i'll do! 😃 right now, i;m tired like crazy. 🥱 okay babe! LOVE YOUUU!!! and i OFCOURSE REMEMBER YOU! what a stupid question to ask! 😳 love ya! 🤗
Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a fun read. I like how you've woven the story nicely with events from the show. You visited China? That sounds like fun. I have some very good Chinese friends and I've promised to visit one day so they can show me around.

Bring on the game...I'll be waiting.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madmaxine

That was a fun read. I like how you've woven the story nicely with events from the show. You visited China? That sounds like fun. I have some very good Chinese friends and I've promised to visit one day so they can show me around.

Bring on the game...I'll be waiting.😊


Merci Madame! 😳
yea! IT WAS SUPERRR FUN!
btw, i shall take some time to update... this week's a bit busy! 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Author's Note:

1. Arnav's sweet behaviour: well, I know that his sweet behaviour would come as a surprise to most of you but the reason is that he is the protagonist and somehow I find myself writing the whole story from my point of view. Yes, I do apologise like crazy! You can ask TheWandmaker aka Zee aka Zara about it! She's got first-hand experience. But the most important reason is that I find myself in such a situation today in life where sometimes I do feel misunderstood. I'll say or do something, but people would take it as something else, but that's what I never mean. Which is why I sometimes feel like people are always looking for reasons to say that I'm not a good person (when I'm REALLY not). Also I'm a bit like Arnav in the sense that I find it hard to forgive people who have wronged me. I don't take out my "bhadaas" out on everyone like he does (okay, not all the time! :P) but I do become very cold and distant towards people who have wronged me and I feel very resentful just like him. But I'd like to defend myself at this point. I don't go around being so cold to people because it's fun or something, you know? It's because when I consider someone as a friend I become a bitch (i.e. very loyal. Now I can't technically become a dog, can I? Okay. Lame.) So that's why I feel hurt thinking about why they can't be so dedicated to me as I am to them. That's why I become so resentful and start ignoring their existence. So, in the story, I guess you'll see me. I take life very seriously. I sometimes become very cynical and criticise every small detail of something/someone which/whom I don't like at the first glance (I'm not referring to appearance. I'm talking about behaviour). But the one aspect of Arnav we'll see that is not me at all will be his faith (or lack thereof) in God. I'm a strong believer (but once upon a time i lost every faith in Him. it was a phase, and now i am out of it!), so maybe you'll see him slip up and call the gods above (that'd be because of me).

2.Khushi's bubbly personality: I'm excessively hyper all the time and my friends think my happiness is infectious. :P So she's my extension as well.

3. Arnav and Khushi together: They're both the Ying and Yang of me. One is darker than the other; but neither can exist without the other. Arnav's my darker side, a side that has faced a lot in life, experienced some of the worst incidents a child can (not very bad, and for that I thank my 30 million gods everyday for it); a child that had to grow up too fast so as to be able to fend off the evil that lurks in the world, especially when the child is alone (no worries, I'm not an orphan, touchwood, and for that I thank my 30 millions gods everyday as well). Khushi's is my brighter side; a side that has seen all the evil contents of Pandora's Box but still manages to carry hope in her heart; in search for every little bit of humanity that is left in this world. So guys, you're getting a good glance at my personality that way. :P

4. It's quite funny how you guys assume that the creep would be Shyam. It's been so strongly embedded in your minds! Well, that shows the power of repetition in the show that he's a creep.

5. And if you want to be PM-ed about the updates, please ADD MOI AS A BUDDY! I send out PMs to everyone on my buddy list.

6. My actual name is Shalini, but you guys can call me Shalu. But only if you love me too much or you're too lazy to type 2 extra letters!

7. i'm sorry, but i wont be able to update until coming weekend! I have loads of presentations to make this week, and uni is killing me! sorry guys! really! 😭

8. ZARA! I LOVE YOU FOR LOVING ARNAV, AKA ME! 😳 😆

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its Ok Dont Worry I Know How Hard College Is. Trust Me. And Thanks For Answering My Questions About Arnav. I Like Him In Your FF. His Is Kind and Sweet. Don't Change His Behavior. And Khushi's Too. Later On. Keep Them Like This. (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOLOLOL! it's your lovely story! WOOO! :D
LOve you arnav! ;)
xxx
Edited by Zeee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear once again awesome treat to read this part was superb hon loved it keep rocking 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Its Ok Dont Worry I Know How Hard College Is. Trust Me. And Thanks For Answering My Questions About Arnav. I Like Him In Your FF. His Is Kind and Sweet. Don't Change His Behavior. And Khushi's Too. Later On. Keep Them Like This. (:


haha! thank you for sympathising! 😳 sigh. it's been a hard week for me. hard cos of too much work. my only complaint is that i haven't had the time to write the chap 4 for you guys! 😭 haha! and thank you for indirectly loving me! 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Zeee

LOLOLOL! it's your lovely story! WOOO! :D

LOve you arnav! ;)
xxx


LOVE YOU BACK! 😆

haha! i feel so utterly sexy! 😛

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey dear once again awesome treat to read this part was superb hon loved it keep rocking 👏


thank you! 😳

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