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Posted: 13 years ago
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Definitely know the drill 😆 Awesome OS, wonderful update! Keep going, love! 😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice ...😊
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update soon. Loved both the chapters.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃

loved it👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cont P2. I've tried something a bit different frm my usual updates, there is a poem within the update. Let me know how you find it!!
The room is spinning
I can't breathe.
How do I tell you
about this need?...


Khushi khushii his voice boomed till he saw her by the pool. . He could see her tear stained face with more tears forming from her eyes and. .and thats it. . He couldn't see her in any more pain. . He made up his mind that he would confess now. At this very moment. .
Asr:khushiii ...
Strong and burning
and so deep inside.
Way down past everything
that I try to hide.

broken frm the silent painful spell,
khushi:i'm just leaving... As it is aapko kya farak padta he whether i'm here or not so. . Anyways after 2moro i will never come in ur way.
Asr: shh khushi. . Dont say that
You get past the memories;
the aches and the pain.
The times I was left hurting
swearing never again!

khushi(a bit surprised at how calm he was)i'm goin b4 your mood changes again. .

Asr: khushi wait. . I need to tell u something
My emotions are raging.
I'm losing control...

khushi: well i dont want to hear anything as hamko aapki kisi baat se koi farak nahi padta. .n she starts walking away
Fighting to hold on
yet wanting to fall...

asr: khushii and pulls her hand towards him and pins her to the nearest wall, this time making sure that his hands are holding her firmly but not hurting her. . If tumko farak nahi padta then y did u send the suicide note on behalf of la, y did u send the plants, y were there tears in ur eyes when la hugged me, y y were u crying when i announced my engagement?
Begging and pleading.
I am not beyond..

Khushi:the note, plants . . How . How did u know about that . . Was it the jeweller . . He devi maiya . . How
asr:jeweller? Y would the jeweller tell me? Then he remembered dat how else would khushi buy the plants. . Khushi wat did u sell to get the plants?

Khushi: um it doesn't matter. . Anyways now u n lavanyaji r happy together. .

Asr:still with a firm grip on her hands managed to pull of her ring. . Tell me khushi or ur ring goes in the pool. .

Khushi: no pls dont throw the ring. . Buaji will kill me. . Pls i sold my gold kangan. .
Asr:what? Omg because of me u sold ur bangle?
To reach out for you;
and never regret,
the loving and longing.
Khushi: yes la loves u very much . .

Asr: well, i dont love her and she knows that now, today, i made it clear. .

Khushi:what? But the engagement 2moro. . Pls dont do this pls . . Lavanya ji . .

Asr:lavanya has accepted this and is ready to move on . N plus when i'm already half engaged how can i engage again?

Khushi: what u engaged someone else?

Asr:yes , y is it very shocking khushi? When both of us know u got engaged half to me outside the temple, during the aarti, the bandage on ur correct finger. . And plus ur not really engaged to shyamperson as my bandage was on ur finger untill a few days back IF I MAY ADD I Noticed so he did not put the ring on the correct finger so ur are actually mine. . And today i am ready to say it out loud, khushi kumari gupta , I LOVE U! Now let me ask you, do you love me too? Dont say la or give me a farak padta excuse this time as its not going to work . . Do you have the same feelings for me as i have for u? Khushii pls tell me today
Feeling vulnerable and open
my hearts in my hands.
Will you except me
and all of my plans?

This love that I have
and hold here in my heart.
For a man so perfect,
it was love from the start

khushi: omg i'm not actually engaged to shyamji, buaji's plan failed . . That just struck her head . . She still could not believe hearing his words. . Arnavji did u just say what i heard?
To make it easier and to convince her it was true he finished what what left of the diwali kiss n asked her again, i'm still waiting for n answer

Say that you love me
and that you can see
I have what you've longed for
and your place is with me.


khushi:yes YES YES I LOVE U too. .
I love u, I loveee u
Both of them couldn't believe what they heard the other say
asr:well they'l still b an engagement 2moro then

khushi:what? U still haven't told la? He devi maiya . .

Asr:what r u talking about khushi , our engagement, ours . ,
just as the confession was goin on anjali & and the rest witnessed it by the pool and la seemed to have already recovered an only left with a slight pain but was happy for khushi . .

Asr then took the pleasure of throwing the ring into the pool and then looked deeply into khushi's eyes n one hell of an eye lock . . Not knowing the whole family was watching, anjali started giggling & both were

Embarrassed because the whole family knew about their love.

Lavanya: so the engagements still on right?

Asr:la, i thought i told u we can never b one

la:asr dont b silly , not my engagement . . Urs n chamkeelis . .

Khushi:lavanyaji . . She couldn't say anything cos of guilt n she knew how hurt la must b
la :khushi u dont need to explain anything . Things like love just happen . One day i'll too find my prince . .n plus u're like my sister They both hugged each other dearly. .

You know the drill, if you like the part pls comment &hit like & if u would like pm's add me as a buddy.
Enough of this OS or would u like some more? Do let me know!!
I might be starting an FF soon, If you would like to read that then pls comment and let me know!
Edited by mandira1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Not sure how to pm from phone as wrote update frm phone as computer crashed. Will pm as soon as computer is sorted. Mandira
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊

Edited by mandira1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!!!!! gr8!!!!!!!!! kash ye sab serial ho jaldi se🤓!!!
thaku!!!!!!!
and i just see my comment post on page 12
i read part 3 also...👏👏👏
superb!!!!!!!! wow love d way arhi confess😳😳😳!!!!!!!
hey want to ask aru written other ffs r os on arhi???????
hey like d poem...👏👏👏😊😊😊!!!!!!!!!
fab..actully m gr8 fan of work now... bcozz poem touched my heart!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by qutiegiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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⭐️wow it was cute i loved the update 👏thanks to u for bringing arnav notice about the bandage and ring at the wrong finger i loved this confession⭐️
also mandira thanks for ur pm even after ur computer crash u r lovable dear❤️ plzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: qutiegiya

wow!!!!!!! gr8!!!!!!!!! kash ye sab serial ho jaldi se🤓!!!

thaku!!!!!!!
and i just see my comment post on page 12
i read part 3 also...👏👏👏
superb!!!!!!!! wow love d way arhi confess😳😳😳!!!!!!!
hey want to ask aru written other ffs r os on arhi???????

thank you 😃
no havn't got any other ff's or os's
Plan to write some more soon 😃

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