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mandira1

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Posted: 13 years ago

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mandira1

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👏awesome...continue soon

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it!!!!!

awesome!!!!!

n then the precap is jst superb!!!!!!

jst can't wait fr it!!!!!

pls cntinue soon!!!!!

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so gud yer. do cntue eagrly wtng 4 ur prt two..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Very Nice start Cant wait to read part 2

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anjs

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesomeee...wish he wud hurry and tell her how he feels 😊

pls do continue...thanks

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mandira1

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi Everyone,

Please do leave you comments so I can improve and maybe also include somethings you suggest 😃

Thanks

Mandira

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littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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this is awesome!!!

continue soon!

thanks a ton for the pm!

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mandira1

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START OF PART 2

He walked towards where LA, Anjali, Nani & Akash Was

Anjali: Chotte tum??

Arnav: Yes Di, I need to tell all of you something

He takes a big gasp

ASR: I cannot go through with the engagement 2moro

Pin Drop silence filled the room creating a very tense atmosphere

ASR(repeats it again): I cannot get engaged tomorrow

LA( Stuttering): What??? How.. ASR ur joking right?? Please u have to be joking..Di..ASR why

ASR: I never joke Lavanya. I cannot deceive you by getting engaged to you as I donot truly love you..

Lavanya: But..but.. u agreed for the engagement urself?? ASR please..is it something I did today that u r angry with?? And y did u bring me back to the Raizada house when I had already packed for London if you did not intend to marry me??

ASR: I don't know how everything happened so fast, or y I even agreed for the engagement..Had It not been for the ladies disrespecting nani during diwali, or ur suicide note you had sent me..I wouldn't have brought you back here and announced our engagement plans..

Anjali: Chotte, what r u saying?? This is a joke right??

ASR: No di..

Lavanya (just realizing what ASR Said)- Wait a sec..ASR what suicide note?? I have not written any such notes??

ASR: Dammit LA, do u always have to make things so hard?? The one you sent me when u wnted to leave for London together with all the plants

LA: ASR, what are u saying?? I havnt sent any such note and why would I send you plants?? You already have so many at home

ASR: What the hell LA, u sent me the note urself and now..Hold on a sec, I think I may still have the note...(checks through his wallet)

Here, Now what do you have to say for yourself and your note?

LA: No ASR, I havnt sent you this..but.. who has then??..And y?? Wait a min, this is Chamkeeli's handwriting

ASR: Khushi's??

LA: Yes its chamkilli's

Anjali: Khushiji?? Ohh look chotte, everyone worked so hard to bring you together and look..Khushiji has done soo much for all of us...How can you not go through with the engagement?? What will all the guests say??

LA: Chamkeeli did all this just for me and she also bought u plants..So u r saying if you hadn't received this note you would not have brought me back here??

ASR: Yes...thats all he could say as his mind was full of KKG's thoughts..How could she afford to buy all those plants for me?? And she did all this so his family and he would be happy..He had to confess to her quickly about how much he cared for her..before it would be too late..

LA being LA said: Well at least you told me now..I always wondered if you really loved me, and thought I was just being silly..but now you've made it clear.. Well, what can I do, I cant change yor mind can I?? But as I know that I really liked you,

I will not walk away from this house with tears..but will walk away knowing you will find someone who will love you and whom you'll love even more..I will walk away happily because it is through this phase in my life that I met such a lovely person Chamkeeli, Khushi who taught me so many values..

Infact she has also brought about a change in you, you ASR

I have noticed how she always knows your taste in things, and how she can change you opinions and influence your thinking..

ASR: All he heard was Chamkili/Khushi from what LA said.. Khushiii he said in a deep voice..di wheres Khushi?? Someone answer me.. Where's Khushi DAMMIT

Anjali: Chotte, y do you want to meet Khushi now?? We're trying to solve this issue..and with your engagement tomorrow.. we need to solve this, please chotte

ASR: Didn't I make it clear that there will b no engagement Di??

everyone shocked at his tone, he had never used this tone with Anjali

ASR: I'm sorry Di, for shouting..But I need to find her Dammit

Anjali: She's by the pool but..chotte wait

Nani: Do you think..no it cannot be..is Arnav Bitwa in Love with Khushi Betiyan??

LA: Naniji, Now that you mention it maybe what you say is correct..I never thought about it but..ASR has changed after Chamkilli came into all our lives..How did I never notice this?? I think I was thinking too much about myself and never really thought about what ASR wanted..Well the least we can all do now is let ASR get what he loves

Anjali & Nani: Lavanyaji app?? ur ready to give away Chotte??

LA: Well di, Naniji, ASR admitted he doesn't love me so what use is there in me staying back and trying?? And if it is true that he loves Khushi then after all that Khushi has done for me dont u think she deserves a good life??

THIS IS JUST a PART OF PART 2!! MORE COMING UP VERY SOON!!

You know the drill, If you liked the part, Please DO COMMENT & u could also hit the like button 😛 & ALSO please suggest what you might like to happen, then I will try include that in the writing! 😃

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COMING UP: ARHI SCENE!!

THANK YOU FOR READING!!!

Edited by mandira1 - 13 years ago