AR FF:-The Life Of A boxer

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI, I' M A SILENT READER.I WANT TO WRITE SOME STORY. I KNOW I M NOT A GOOD WRITER.. I' M TRYING TO WRITE A SHORT STORY. IF U GET FREE TIME THEN READ IT AND COMMENT ME. I HOPE U LIKE MY SHORT FF.



THE LIFE OF A BOXER
The Life of a Boxer



"I want you to work it for me like this
Oh yeah, show me what you got show me
When I M Here-------------------
Go head now here!
Race saanson ki, Race Chahat ki, Race Dhadkan ki, My Heart is Racing on---
Nasha Tera----------Nasha-------Nashila Nashila hai
Allah Duhai Hai Betabi Chayyi Hai
Muskil Judai Hai, Haan Tere Pyaar Mein"...


"Common, Common, you will win this match."
"Com-m-on!! common!!..."This sort of voice are coming from audience.Finally the boxer won the match.

The commentor now finally decleared the winner.The winner of the match is "AMMY".Our very known" AMMY;"THE GREAT ARMAAN MALLICK."

The audience are disscussing about it,"We can not believe how he won the match after too much injury!!.

One of the audience said,"We are seeing him from last eight years he hurts himself everyday like this."He is destroying himself.When we see him we fill that he hurt himself.he wants to destroy himself totally."

The Life of a Boxer


The man who is "THE MAN OF THE MATCH" is also a Doctor In Sanjeevani.He is a SENIOR DOCTOR & ALSO A FAMOUS HEART SURGEON/CARDIOLOGIST.He win this match to save his working place.IT(SANJEEVANI) undergoes some fincial problem.So he win the match bcz or by this way he get sufficient money to save his sanjeevani.

He gives the money THE DEAN OF SANJEEVANI DR:ABHIMANYU MODI & starts his bike to go home ,which is his fav place cause,there he remembers his love without any disturbance... .

when he reached home,He got a quick shower.Refresh himself and came outside wearing his nightdress...

now he sits on the bed with a big size of coffee mug in his hand which is full of someone's favourite cappuccino.he took the pic of his love which he always keep the table along the bed...and said lovingly,"I won this match for u.you love kids very much.So to Save them who is suffering between life & death in sanjeevani ,i will do everything which is possible for me .if SANJEEVANI saves then the kids got new life.

...After u went from my life.Sanjeevani is the only one place which helps me to survive.I respect Sanjeevani very much...

i love sanjiwani,cause it gave me u...my life!! my love!! ...whether u love me or not...it's does any matter for me...but i love u...


hey friends,if u liked it ,then i will post other parts.,...plz.give an inspiring comment...
love...
Ammy

Index
part 1- page 1
part 2-page 1
part 3-page 2
last part-page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear...First of all toh Congratulations of your FF...Love the starting...Armaan is in so much pain...Feeling bad for him...Do update soon...Really want to read more...Thanks for the PM...Take care

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear...First of all toh Congratulations of your FF...Love the starting...Armaan is in so much pain...Feeling bad for him...Do update soon...Really want to read more...Thanks for the PM...Take care


Thanx 4 ur comment...Geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations of your FF...👏

Liked the starting..😊

update soon...

and one more thing u sent wrong link, send the correct link...

Edited by Rapunzzel - 13 years ago
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The Life of A boxer

Part:-2

Now the story
The Life of a Boxer
after finishing his coffee,he went to sleep making riddhima's pic close to his heart.but sweet memories of riddhima,memories of his past life was making him unable to sleep.how he forgot those golden days!.when always riddhima was with him! he could not forget how he teased riddhima,and she made fake angry with him...how riddhima always cared him,scolded about his foolish behaviour and he always tried to hide those acts from riddhima...actually arman thought he did very brave deed..like bike racing...but riddhima always worried for him...and she didnot like these,specially bike racing is an idiotic thing for her. she always used to say him.."arman, please leave this childish act...abhi tumhara MBBS ka final year hai,so padhai mein dhyan do. feer PG mein kahin chace nahi milenge"

arman: " padho tum,mai toh after final year foriegn chala jaunga,tum log jaisa is india mein para thode hi rahunga...


flash back

aryan : "hey ,ammy,tu feer se bike race mein participate kar raha hai? you know how it dangerous!...agar tum hurt ho gaye toh study par bahut asar parega...ye humara final year hai yaar! bash 7-8 din baad final exam hai aur tere jaisa brillient student...princi ko toh pura bharosa hai,tu university mein 'top' aayega...

arman : "dekh aryan...first to mai apne personal life mein kisi ka bhi interference pasand nahi karta...aur dusri baat,mujhe koi farak nahi parta,top hua ya nahi,mai to mbbs ke baad UK chala jaunga...

aryan :" hum sab ko chorkar?..kya yaar!

arman (sighly) : 'yahi to life hai yaar,jab hum thode bade hote hain to mom-dad bhi to hume chod dete hain,hostel mein bhej dete hain...

aryan kept his hand to console him:" so sorry yaar! mai janta hun,tu apne papa-mom se isi baat par naraj hai,but hume toh chorkar mat ja...

arman : "nahi yaar...mai chala jaunga...aur yahan india mein hai bhi kya,jo yahan rahun...
aryan : "yahan ,teri riddhima hai...i know ,you love her...
arman(with dreaming voice): "wahi toh ek hai,jiske liye duniya itni hasin lagti hai...haan aryan,riddhima ko pata na chale ,mai bike racing par ja raha hun...

aryan : "ok,mai nahi bataunga...

...

riddhima searched arman everywhere but didnot find...
riddhima (mumbled) : "pata nahi,ish larke ka kya hoga..exam sir par hai aur wo kahin masti kar raha hoga...aane do,aisi daantungi,samajhta kya hai apne aap ko...

muskan : "hey,riddhzi,apne aap mein kya bole ja rahi hai?...
riddhima : "ab pagalon ke saath rahungi to pagal hi banugi na...tumhe pata hai kya arman kahan gaya hai?...
muskan ; "haan,sabko pata hai...wo bike racing par gaya hai...tu nahi jayegi?...
riddhima (surprisingly) :"usne mujhse promise kiya tha,ab bike racing kabhi nahi karega...
muskan (laughed) : "arey,ye ladke aise hi hote hain,tu bhi na,kispar believe kar baithi...
riddhima(angrily) : "ok,usse kah dena,mai ab kabhi usse baat nahi karungi...

...
bike racing was going on...when muskan reached there 2 rounds were completed...arman was close to win the race...

arman ( seeing muski,screamed from his bike) :" hey muski,itni late keun?... mai tumse baat nahi karunga...i was waiting for you sweety,you love my bike racing na...

muskan screamed too; 'hey,ammy...sorry yaar! but ab to tu apni khair mana,riddhima ko pata chal gaya hai,ab wo tujhse kabhi bhi baat nahi karegi..

arman was shocked to hear this!!.."riddhima usse baat nahi karegi!! Life mein wo sab kuch chod sakta hai..but riddhima usse ruth jaye to uski jindagi hi chali jayegi! Ab wo riddhima se kya kahega! Usne to usse promise kiya tha na,ki bike racing nahi karega!..

arman lost in his thought'and his bike hit with a big stone and its made a horrible accident and arman became unconcious!!..


''''''''''.
When arman opened his eyes,he saw that he was in hospital's bed'..aryan was sitting near him'

Aryan : " tu kaisa hai ab?..mana karne par bhi manta nahi na'
Arman was quiet ''
Aryan took his hand in his own :" arman,tu thik hai na?..aur ye accident kaise ho gaya?...
Arman : "aryan,riddhima aayi thi kya?..
Aryan : " nahi,usne kah diya ki ab tujhse koi relation nahi rakhegi'
Arman : "aisa mat bol'mai usey mana lunga'.
Aryan : "uski chinta chod'aur usne thik hi kiya hai'pata hai, tere body mein itne fractures aaye hain ki tu 2-3 month se pahle bed se uth nahi payega aur abhi 5 days baad humara exam start hai'

Arman : " mujhe exam ki tension nahi aryan'
Aryan with a bit anger: "toh para rah bed par'.pata nahi apne life se keun khel raha hai?..
Dr.sashank came'"hello,boys!
Aryan stand up at once:" ji sir'
Dr.sashank came to arman and caught his wrist to check up..' to arman ji, kaise hain aap?
Arman : "ji ,fine..
Dr.sashank : "hmmm'fine..mai aapka attending doctor hun,I know aap kitne fine hain'is saal ke university exam to gayi aapki'kya milta hai aap sabko apni life spoil karke?...'aur aap jaise topper ko?...ok,plz take rest'.

Dr.sashank left ''
Arman : "inhe mere baarey mein kaise pata ?
Aryan : " he is riddhima's father '..ye hospital unki hi hai,sanjiwani'.
Arman was shocked'"kya!!!!!..

'''''''''''.

Flash back end
The Life of a Boxer

Arman caressed riddhima's pic and said'"2 month baad jab mai hospital se wapus aaya toh maine socha tumhe mana lunga'maine socha ki tum shyad exam mein busy thi,isliye mujhse nahi mili'but jab muski ne tumhari letter mujhe di ki tum ab mujhse friendship nahi rakhna chahti aur next month tumhari wedding thi,to mere hosh ud gaye!'tum toh sirf meri friend hi nahi thi,tum to mera pyar thi,meri sab kuch thi'..

mai ghanto rota raha ,feer maine decide kiya ki tumhe aise hi nahi kho sakta'aur mai dr.sashank se milne gaya'unhe bataya ki mai tumhe pyar karta hun'but unhone sirf ek baat kahi.."jo khud apni life spoil karta hai,wo kya meri beti ki responsibility lega!'I am sorry arman. Mera hone wala son in law 'dr.siddhant modi' bahut hi responsible hai,I know wah meri beti ko bahut khush rakhega"'.

Aur tum meri life se chali gayi riddhima'.lekin mere dill se nahi'mai aaj bhi tumhe utna hi pyar karta hun,chahe tum meri ho ya nahi aur aaj mai 'sanjiwani' ka ek senior doctor hun'mai ab tumhare papa ke expectation ko pura karne ki koshish karta hun'ek responsible doctor bankar,jiski kami ke kaaran hi maine tumhe khoya tha'..'..

thanks a lot friend...
Edited by rosyammy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey link still didn't work lekin I just went to ur posts and found it :)

This seems do amazing! Like seriously interesting! Cont ber soon pleasee
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Hey Dear...Just read the second part...Loved it...The flashback is treat to read...So Armaan always love to do Bike-racing but Ridzy didn't like it...Poor Armaan Feeling bad for him...Last paragraph just touched my heart...hope Armaan soon Find his Love...Waiting for more so do continue soon... Take care

Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ammy is tht u jisne DMG blog pe punam di ko yeh story post karne ke liye dithi ?
plz tell

luv,
neha [shona]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ammy is tht u jisne DMG blog pe punam di ko yeh story post karne ke liye dithi ?
plz tell

luv,
neha [shona

Yeah...But why?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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feel so sorry for armaan.. u still haven't said if it is ar or arsh ff?? pls tell

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