ff to bring that curve on ur face (ch 1 on pg 3)

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he was standing near the window . she looked so sweet , so divine just like an angel . her pic of smiling spreading the happiness around the whole world. "i wish i meet wid u soon , n i promise i'll be cuming back to ur life!!" he promised to himself . "rishi " called a male voice .
"cuming champ "he replied .
he again looked at her pic n his greenish beautiful eyes were waiting to see her .

"i don't know y u left me ? everyone did this wid me . first papa , then u n then my happiness " she told to herself . the diamond like tears were shining in her eyes . but her pretty lips which were once always curved into beautiful smile which suited her wasn't there . she herself didn't know when the time was about to cum when she will smile again .may be soon he will cum n take away the pain which is stored in her heart .
hey guys so i hope u people liked the prolouge 😳
i'll be updating character sketch when u people will fill the first page wid ur very precious comments 😳 if u liked then please hit the like button n do let me know whether i shall continue or not 😳
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Gaby09 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow first to comment
welcome to the HD forum
i so loved it but think its a bit short
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its beautiful start dear.Loved ur concept.Would like to read it further.Do cont. it.
Plz pm me ur update.Take care.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks guys .
anyone else interested ? shall i continue ?
ananyashera thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one dear but too short...please continue soon...waiting...
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the first ff for hitler didi...congrats dear...loved the concept ...pls continue soon...
-Araina- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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added to ff post in media gallery. good luck with this!
..Roopal.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh wow its so amazing😍
so damn beautiful😍
ossam one
great work
i just need such posts to drool more n more😳
heart-touching one
loved it🤗
please update soon
dynamic_doll thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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first HD ff 😃
awesome start!
i loved the concept
plzzz continue this story
nd pm me about the updates 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww... atlast sum1 started HD's 1st ff 😃
nice cOncept...
continue soon...
n dO pm me plz 🤗

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