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cuteteddy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anmolsuman

wow first to commentyup u r first one 😳

welcome to the HD forumthanks dear😳
i so loved it but think its a bit shortoh its just prologe thats y i will try to write the first chapter long

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res !!!!!!!
busy now,
but do send me pm i will read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG itz beautiful
plez continue it soon na sis
n add me in ur pm listy (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot everyone for ur lovely comments but m sorry couldn't reply u
so here goes the character sketch 😳
rishi kumar - a 21 year old boy returned to India for returning sumone's
happiness
abhay raichand - rishi's best friend . he also came back wid him .
indira sharma - a rich girl living wid her aunt n cousin
pia sharma - indira's younger cousin n loves indira a lot 😳

sorry guys abhiya ko yahan pe bhi add kar diya but kya krun aadat se majboor hun 😆 OK so its a bit difficult to understand the story by the character sketch so m posting the first chapter now only 😳

chapter 1
she closed her eyes putting the pen down . it was night n the cold breeze of dehradun reminded indira of her childhood , her happy life when everything was just perfect . it had been 11 years her father died . she was a 4 year old kid when her mother died n then she lived wid her father . but one rainy night her father died in an accident . after that she forgot the happiness' meaning . she hardly laughed now . she used to smile wid her sister pia but not that much . after father's death she lived wid her aunt sugandh n cousin pia . they both loved her very much n sugandh treated her like her own daughter . the sound of thunder brought her back to reality n indira opened her eyes . she kept her diary aside n went out of the room . as she closed the door she bumped wid a curly haired girl .
"Ouch di !! achha chhodo i wanna show u sumthing " the pretty girl said wid excitement in her voice .
"pia , kabhi toh aaram se chala kar n what do u want to show now ?" indira asked from her cousin
"aap chalo toh sahi "pia said n grabbed her from her hand n took her to the terrace .


he was sitting on the couch reading a novel . he didn't like much to read these stuffs but it was a scary one so he read it though it wasn't that much scary for him .
"rishi " a voice came . rishi smiled n he knew who it was . it was abhay , his best friend .
abhay banged the door took away the novel from rishi's hand n kept it on the table aside .
"abhay , give me back " rishi toold him
"no way dude !! first u will have to cum wid me " abhay said stubbornly.
rishi couldn't do anything except doing what abhay says . he had no one else except him . he lost his family in a car accident few months ago .
but now he knew what the reality was n tried to be strong .

indira n pia reached on the terrace n pia showed her the beautiful moon smiling to them as if showering the happiness on their face . but indira didn't say anything. though she found the moon beautiful but she forgot to be happy .
pia- kya di , at least ab toh smile karo .
indira smiled on her sister's cute cute talks .
pia- thats like my di , after all my di is the most beautiful girl n smile
suits on her .
indira - chal ab maska lagana band kar aur sone chal
pia- nahi !! i will stay here n u r wid me only
indira- fine !!
they both looked at the moon n smiled.
pia - di u know whenever i feel alone then either m wid u or infront of
this moon . it gives me peace
indira smiled n thought "pia , u don't know what the life holds for a person . it changes its color every now n then . sumtimes it gives us happiness all of a sudden but sumtimes it snatches away everything ."
pia - di? where r u lost ?
indira came back from her thoughts
indira - m here only but now lets go to the room n sleep .
pia - fine !!

abhay took rishi to the terrace .
abhay pointed towards the moon
abhay - look rishi !! that moon , it is the sign of happiness .
rishi - it is beautiful but i think now we need to give happiness to
sumone else .
abhay - so u have decided when we r going ?
rishi - yup . we will go by tomorrow or day after that
abhay - OK champ
they both went to their respective rooms . they both lived in the same house as both lost their families n had each other only .

i know this part isn't that much good but from the next part the actual fun begins 😉 n guys please if u want pms then add me as r buddy coz its a bit difficult to send pms individually . i can't send buddy req coz my email adress isn't confirmed yet . hope u understand . n sorry i brought pkyek characters here also but kya karun aadat se majbur hun 😳
hope u guys like this part 😳 please hit the like button n leave ur precious comments n do tell me whether i shall continue or not 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys m really sorry couldn't pm everyone
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...InShi & AbhIya together...both r my favourite couples...awesome...

interesting ff...looking forward to it...

nice introduction...but this was sort of sad part...rishi, abhay, indira all have lost their families & also their happiness...& now together InShi & AbhIya spread happiness in life of each other...

i like the story...waiting for their first meeting...

please update soon...


Edited by ananyashera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
superb update dear! update the next part soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
wow wonderful start hun
so beautiful update
hmmm so rishi and indira both lost their parents...it was so sad. indira has forgt how to lough.:(

Loved piya-indu's bonding
very nice

hey dear can u add our Mayur here
plz if possible then try to add them..
awesome part
loved it totally
do update next part soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update...
luv both abhiya and inshi
watch both show
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
OMG...
first chpt is really gud..
i liked it...,
hmmm waiting for next part...
and ya its ok u bought ABHIYA ...even i like them a bit.,...

thnx,
khushi

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