FF-maaneet phr muhabbat chapter 2 page 2

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guyzz this is my second ff.my first ff is i love u.this ff is a real story so ill be able to express it more nicely.hope u guyzz like it


GEET: A 14 years old girl.she studies in school in class 8.she is fat golu molu,chishmish and short heighted. She is normal in colour.her hais are short.but she is a little cute.she belong to a rich family.she is a little sensitive.

MAAN:A 15 years old hot handsome boy. He is the best football player in his school.He plays in schools team.he is fair.belongs to a normal family.he looks happy person but only geet now him ho he is from inside.but she didn't tell him.

PINKY:geets best friend.she is slim nice cute.loves geet a lot.she fights from everyone to protect geet.belong to a normal family.she is same age as geet

Mr.raichand:geets dad he is a little strict but love geet a lot and always agree with her in the end.he is a business man

Mrs.raichand:she is geets mom she loves her both kid geet and rajji but she is more towards rajji.

Rajji:geets sister.geet hates her but she loves her from inside they fight alot.

Brij:geet cousin brother lives with her.he is so nice always fun loving.geet never ever listen anything against him.they both love each other as sis and bro

dev:he is maan big bro very serious and angry person.maan and arjun always fights.he is 17

vicky:he is maan younger brother he is cute and loving.is afraid of his big brothers,he is nice and cute.he is 9 years.

Mr.khurrana:he is strict and knows very well how to manage his family.

Mrs.khurrana:love his sons a lot but is a little protective towards yash.

Vikram:maans friend and classmate

Manaat:maan friend and class mate

arjun:maan and geet class mate.maans bestfriend

yash:classmate and close to geet

preeto:geet friend and classmate

nandini:geets friend and classmate

kiran:maans GF.she is nice

lucky:geets friend.and classmate

mehak:maans friend and classmate

kajol:maans friend and classmate

rest of the character will be introduced as the story continue.

I haven't copied this story from anywhere this a fact story and maybe some of the dialogues will be original.this story will go an little slow but not that little that u lose intrest.but I promise u guyzz are gonna like it.

This story is about a girl who lloves a boy a lot but she didn't have the courage to speak because she thinks she is not capable of him.she is fat and having pimples on her face and maan is handsome and if he rejects her she will lose his friendship ans she doesnot want that.she keeps loving him and always trying her best not to hurt him and unintentionally maan always hurt her.lets see does this love sory have a happy ending or not?

CHAPTER 1

Mrs.raichand:geet utho beta tm ko school nhi jana.tm ko pta ha na school khule hua pura aik hafta hogaya ha aur tm ko pta ha na class bhi change ho gai ha.

Geet:good morning mama bs jar hi hun tyaar hone rajji uth gai.

Mrs.raichand:haan wo uth gai hai.geet jaldi karo tmhri waja se late ho rha ha

Geet:ji mama me tyaar hun ap chale me arahe hun.

At 7:30 geet got ready and came down stairs.

Mrs.raichand:jaldi jao tm dono

Geet and rajji:bye mama

Driver drop rajji to her school and took geet to her branch.geet was excited but she didn't knew that entering this time to this new class will change her destiny for ever

Geet entered to her school she was nervous.but she saw pink overthere

Geet:hi pinky kaisi ho?

Pinky:me achi hun tm sunao?

Geet:mein theek

Pinky:geet tjh ko pta ha is bar hum dono aik section mein hein.

Geet got to excied:really omg.aur hamre stah kaun kaun ha?

Pinky:buhat sare bache hein.

Geet was happy finally she was with her best friend.when she eneterd her class she saw a lot of new people.she said hi to everyone and sat with pinky.the class started she notice each and everyone but her eyes stuck on maan.

Geet:pinky us ka kiya naam ha?

Pinky:jo waha betha ha?

Geet:haan

Pinky:wo maan ha.kiran ko janti ho na us ka boyfriend ha.

Geet:hmm.

Rest of the day went while studying.she came back home and continue with her routine.the days countinue like this.maan and geet had a hello hi but they didn't talk so much.sometiomes geet use to observer him in the morning when he use to come to school.

Morning was the same.

Pinky:me theek hun

Nandini,preeto,vikram and lucky join them.

Lucky:geet yr tm to bhool gai hum ko

Geet:nhi yaar bs parhai me busy hoon.

Nandini;aur kiya ho rha ha aj kal

Geet:kc nhi

The bell rang and everyone get back to there classes

Maan:namste

Geet:hi

They sat on there respective seats.meanwhile a teacher came and said to change the class they were shifted to a new class.maan was sitting on back of geet and pinky

Maan kicked geets chair

Geet:kiya masla ha tm ko?

Maan:kch nhi

Geet:to mara kyn?

Maan:awein yaar

Geet didn't reply and started to listen the lecture.maan kicked the chair again.geet turned around

Geet:kiya ha maan?

Maan:kch nhi apna kaam karo

Geet:tm ne mara ha

Maan:haan to

Geet:ab mara na to mjh se bura koi nhi hoga

Next time when maan kicked her she got hold of his leg.maan started to laugh

Maan:tang choro meri

Geet:no mein nhi chor rhi.

They both kept doing this all the day.mehak called maan

Mehak:maan yaar kam ha

Maan:bolo?

Mehak:aik min idher ana

Maan:tang choro yaar jana ha

Geet left his foot and start doing her work.that day was her one of the best day.

She came back to her home and then continued her routine. In the night

Mr.raichnad:how was ur day beta?

Geet:papa it was awesome buhat maza aya

Mr.raichand:chalo achi baat ha its late so jao

Geet:good night papa mr.raichand:good night dad

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CHAPTER 2

mr.raichand:good night

It continued everyday they both use to talk the whole day have fun and then go to there respective home.kiran was a nice girl she was committed with maan from the last 1 year.geet wasn't allowed to take mobile in school but sometimes she was allowed to take it to school.she brought her phone and kept in her pocket.it was third period maan was outside of the class.

Arjun:hi geet kia kar rhi ho?

Geet:nothing dude mobile check karing

Arjun:tm mobile lai ho

Geet:haan

Arjun:maan ke pas tmhra number nhi ha na

Geet:nhi kyn?

Arjun:us ko tang karte hein

Geet:kaisa?

Arjun:mob do apna

Geet gave her mobile to arjun.as soon the class started maan started o recive call from an unknown number.he knew he was someone from class.when he saw everyone in the class he found arjun and geet laughing

Maan:geet ye tmhra number ha na?

Geet:nhi to

Maan:geet jhoot mat bolo ye arjun ho ga

Arjun:shakal dekho us ki

Geet:haan yaar mera num ha

Maan smiled saved her number.it was breaktime and geet didn't knew to whom she must gave her phone.

Maan:kiya hua geet

Geet:mjh ko smjh nhi araha kiyakarun.mobile kis ko dun?

Maan:mjh ko dedo me rakh lunga break ke baad le lena

Geet:thanx maan

Maan:no problem yaar.

After the break geet took her mobile and sat on her seat.they oth were like best ffriends.if one doesn't comes then the second starts to ask there friends.

Maan:hi pinky

Pinky:hi maan

Maan:wo aj geet nhi ai

Pinky:haan yar she s nt well

Maan:kyn kiya hua us ko?

Pinky:pta nhi.aur btao kiran kaisi ha

Maan:mera break up hogaya

Pinky:what?ye kaisa hua?

Maan:bs hoagaya acha mjh ko jana ha

Late night maan wanted to talk to geet.he thought of messaging her
sms chat:

Geet was in her lounge watching tv.her mobile vibrate

Maan:hi

Geet:hi

Maan:ab kaisi tabiyat ha?

Geet:better.tm sunao?

Maan:mein theek hun.

Geet:aur kiran kaisi ha?

Maan:mera break up hogaya

Geet:kyn?kiya hua

Maan:yaar ammi ko pta chal gaya tha.

Geet:kaisa?

Maan:dev ha na us ne bta diya ja kar

Geet:aww tch tch…L

Maan:np yaar

Geet:abhi kiya kar rhe ho

Maan:tm se baatien

Geet:hmm

Maan:tm ko jaldi so jana chaiye

Geet:kyn?

Maan:tmhri tabiyat kharab ha isliye.so jao gud night tc

Geet:good night

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