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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

if that parking girl is Geet than not really... shruti...!!!!!! why do i just have a fell that parking girl may be ... NT...!? please prove me wrong...?

yes she could be
i read the prologue again😭 all my hopes shattered... me coming to shoot you😡

I also feel the same NT / geet same person
yeh dev will marry geet as a 2nd wife.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok lets make it like

NT cruel inlaws se tang aa ker leave them changed her name to Geet... and make the name and recognition of her ow, inthis way the family will also belong to Geet and she also will become the parking lot girl
me going will come later to see your reply
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

poor nt... u r right in our society female has to suffer a lot... my only mistake is i m a female... hehehehhe...dev pammi arjun anni jaise gandey log har taraf millege...

come back soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor soul..her family s such a stupid one..
b4 getting her married dey dint enquire about dem...
she s bearing all ds for her family!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2(B)

At KM

Their marriage has been fixed, Manpreet was very happy, today was her birthday and she had called Maan to celebrate in isolation, Maan was on time

M: happy birthday Manpreet (kissed in her cheek)

MP: thank you Maan

M: here is your cake, let's cut it

She cuts the cake and feed shim he was amused by seeing the glow on her face

M: hey Manpreet you looking very different

MP: like

M: you are glowing, some extra makeup

MP (hits his arm): stupid this the glow of your love

M: my love

MP: yes, tell me Maan you love me?

M: define love?

MP: what?

M: is it like you hear chimes when you look at her, is it like everything freezes around you when she is here, is it like wanting to feel her in your arms, is it like you die for her one look

MP (irritated): MAAN

M: sorry, but actually as I have known you since we were in diapers, I really don't remember if I experienced all that

MP: (making baby face): I will not talk to you

M: Manpreet, what will I do if you will not talk to me, I am so use to listening to your nonstop chatter that if you stop talking my ear drums will explode wanting to hear your voicw

MP: MAAN you are impossible

M: look at me, it's the fact that I don't know I love you or not, but the truth is I am use to you being around me and I don't know when you became a part of my life, so if this is love then I love you, but be sure I care for you

MP: that's enough for me (thinking I know Maan you don't love me, but I also know that there is no other girl in your life, so am sure soon you will fall for me as I have fallen for you)

2004

They were married in style, their wedding reception was royal, and there were thousands of people invited. And by the time it was over everyone was exhausted.

On the wedding night,

Manpreet was sitting on the center of the bed waiting was Maan like they do in movies, he came in after much of the fighting over the gift with his cousins, he locked the door behind and sat there in front of her, he slowly unveiled her and she smiled at him, but

But she noticed that he was no more his Maan, she had known him so closely that he has to think and she will know, she instantly knew what was it, but still she asked

MP: Maan, who is she?

He gave her a startled look and dipped his head in her lap, she cradled him and patted his head

MP: Maan, who is she?

M: IDK

MP: you met her at our reception

M: yes

MP: you don't know her

M: no

MP: we will find her

M: no use

MP: why? Because of me

M: pagli, I know you will never come in my way but the problem is

MP (holding her breath): the problem is?

M (laughed): she is married

MP: what??

M: yes

MP: still you kissed her

M (startled): how do you know?

MP: I know you better then you know yourself

M: I am sorry Manpreet

MP: you better be

Maan and Manpreet were a happy couple, their families were very decent and graceful, soon Manpreet gave birth to a sweet angle Pari.

2007

Pari was now 2 yrs old and they have shifted to Delhi, they keep in touch with Yash who alongwith Myra have completed his degree, Yash wants to come back but Myra insists that they stay at Michigan and settle there, she does not want to come now as Maan has married Yash's sister, deep inside Manpreet also wished that Myra never comes back.

Manpreet was happy with Maan, he cared for her, his life was transparent he hid nothing from her, but still she felt the presence of that unknown girl between them, that fleeting kiss and touch have left a deep impact on his heart, and her resolution that she will make Maan fall for her is now broken, she has given up hope, now she has learnt to be satisfied with what she was getting.

Part 3 (A) see link below

hope you like this part 2(B),
as this story will proceed in two settings, 2(A) was at NT's side setting & part 2(B) is about Maan
this is about Maan's new life

remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me


please read it
and tell me how you find it


please long comments needed PLEASE

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part 3(A) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49335776
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

if that parking girl is Geet than not really... shruti...!!!!!! why do i just have a fell that parking girl may be ... NT...!? please prove me wrong...?

yes she could be
i read the prologue again😭 all my hopes shattered... me coming to shoot you😡



have patience
wait may be in part 3 or may be in part 4 Geet willcome
an the girl Maan kissed is Geet
DON"T WORRY dear😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment for Part 2(A)

Mohinder n Brij are really nice...atleast they helped nt with her studies...
just bcoz of daarjee's stupid decision, Nt's life has ruined...
m feeling really bad for her 😭wat dev is doin, he'l regret 1 day... behl's n sabarwal's r damn mean😡
m happy atleast there is someone for nt in that so called sasural's of her... atleast agni n arohi r there by her side n devender as well...

Comment for Part 2(B)

IDK why?... but i'm seriously not able to comment... may be bcoz this is abt me, n i have to comment on my own character... n d co-incidence is similar incident has happened with me earlier, 2 yrs back...
actually wat u described, how mp reacted after knowing that maan have feelings for sum1 else, the way she reacted na ke we will find her...
u know wat, there was a guy in my college, was a vry gud frnd of mine, whom i used to like, first year mein... n suddenly a girl came into his life, he dint tell me, coz he thought ke i'll feel bad, but wen i came to know, i supported them, n he was like r u really fyn with it, u hv no problems, though it hurted me at first, then i got used to it... my other frnds were like, u r mad... dont be so sati savitri types...
yar there's no point, to be with the person who dont love u... rather u shud be happy in his/her happiness

haye shruti, tune toh meri purani yaadein mujhe yaad dila di...😆

great work gurlie...👏

thanks😊
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

i really like maans true confession to mp that he don't love her but care her... and yes meee is right he falls for that married girl...and i m sure her name is geet...

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
like it ...but too many charactors...i want mannet to be met... but i think i have to wait for that...

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