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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


thank God I did not mess up with your character
to tell you the truth initially I was killing Manpreet (in the story) of child birth, but then it would have sounded like KKHH,
and one day when you pmed that you are back and I started reading my dairy as to what I have planned...
my planning failed...
I did not have in me to Kill you I mean Manpreet...
after all her only mistake is that she loves Maan
then why kill her
now I plan to find a guy for her who loves her as Maan loves that strange girl
do tell me which characters you like
1) Dr. Armaan
2) Captain Rajveer Singh
3) Dev Pandit (Choti Bahu Fame)
4) or any other which you like
I will write as per your suggestion



i really dont know any of the character... i hv never seen any other serial than geet... i only love 2 ppl from the industry...maan n salman... make it salman khan if possible😉😆... rest upto u...

n i wud suggest, manpreet ko alag rehne do with her daughter, as a nishani of maan... n make her a independent lady n make her play cupid b/w maan n geet... then after that meri life mein salman😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok i m a silent reader of ur ff. Honestly speaking i hav not read all ur ff (didnt got time n chance) only two i read n followed i.e. Ups & Downs,Sunshine.
This ff is 3rd one but i m so confused i m not getting anything about this ff. There r many questions in my mind regarding d ff n its character but if i will ask u will also get confused so its better can u explain in short watever is d story till this 2 parts. Plz plz plz plz plz plz
Edited by SOLACEofEYES - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVE THE WAY YOU ARE WRITING THE STORY
BOTH THE LIVES ARE SHOWN SIMULTANEOUSLY
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Posted: 13 years ago
you already wrote 5 parts including prologue, where is GEET Maan and Manpreet have a Kid Dev rapped his own Wife Myra is such a selfish girl Manpreet knows everything about Maan



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
luvd how honest is maan abt his feelings to mp
so they got married but mp realized she can nvr take place of dat unknwn girl in maans heart
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 3(A)

Though she has learned to live there keeping herself unattached to her husband, to be precise she hated him, in the initial year how he ruined all her dreams he deserved it, from last few days she have noted a change in his behavior, he was trying to come close to her, and this did not scare her but filled her with hatred, one such night he bragged into her room and demanded her to sleep with him and she refused, he became angry and tried to force her, she was no more a 18 yr old girl, she was now 21 yr old woman who was aware of her right, she slapped him hard and pushed him out of the room.

This incident made him feel humiliated, next night he again forced himself in her room, he had a wh**e with him, both he and that stupid woman tied her to the bedpost and in front of her with all lights on, played with each other's bodies, and did what is done in private, and alarmingly NT felt nothing but disgust, she on seeing them crossing the limits of decency closed her eyes and this made Dev more angry he stared making passionate noises and with her closed eyes she had a feeling that she was watching some po*n movie, she felt like pucking. When he was not able to have the desired effect on NT he left with that girl in frustration.

NT was still tied to the bed post when Agni passed her room, he saw her and came in and untied her, he had seen his Mama Dev come out of the room with a girl, now he was a 16 yr old boy who understood many things, one look at the surrounding gave him a rough idea of what would have happened here, he took NT to Aarohi's room and both him and his 12 yr old sister helped her to sleep.

Later Agni told what he has seen to his Nana, Devender, the old man was ashamed of his son, and in the morning he called the lawyer and transferred all the property, which was still in his name, to NT's name.

After few months the old man died and all through his remaining days he daily apologized to NT for ruining her life. After the death the will was read and the Behl's were shocked to know that the property was in NT's name. When the will was read Mohinder and Brij were present, as soon as the will was read Dev dragged NT and tried to beat her, but Brij held his hand and hugged his sister.

Later NT told everything to her brother and father, Mohinder felt very guilty for what has happened with his daughter, he consulted the lawyer and it was decided that NT will take divorce and NT suggested that as she is not interested in money she will transfer everything in Agni and Aarohi's name.

So it was decided but Pammi brainwashed NT and innocent NT agreed that till Agni is not 21 Arjun will handle the financial matters, and Pammi also will have 20% share in the property

Jan 2009,

Today she was free she no more was Naintara Behl, she was NT only, she refused to go with Mohinder to HSPur, Brij brought her a flat in Mumbai and deposited a handsome amount in her account, for few days NT lived there but Mumbai was like a bad dream for her so she decided to go to some other place, and finally in Feb 2009 she left Mumbai and went to Delhi.

Once she reached Delhi she stepped out of the train and took a cab that dropped her to Yamuna bridge, she wanted some time to think about what she wants, as soon as the cab left she put aside her suitcase and stood resting her hands on the bridge rails

She was deep in thought, she suddenly heard a sound of an approaching vehicle, she looked at the direction and she found a car coming towards her, she shrugged and went back to look at the river, the car halted near her and a man came out and called her name, he was Arjun

A: NT

NT: you, what are you doing here?

A: I were searching for you

NT: why?

A: you left Mumbai, that is good, and you did not tell anyone where you are that is even better

NT: what do you mean?

A: it means that no one will miss you

NT: pardon

A: you have created many problems in our lives, I don't know what you gave that old man that he gave you all the property and you witch you transferred it to the kids name, and made us beggars

NT: Arjun mind your language

A: now we are going to challenge that will in court and we do not want you to come in between so it would be better if you are missing for ever

NT: what will you do?

A: I will not do anything, he will do

And she saw another man coming out of the car, Arjun wore his sunglasses and sat in the car, the car reversed and that man pointed a gun in NT's direction, Arjun signaled him and he shot NT

NT was shot due to her body weight the railing broke and she fell in the river

Arjun smiled evilly and said: now even her body will be eaten by the crocodiles, poor NT she was a nice woman

Then he called on his cell: mission accomplished, culprit dead , and laughed out loud

Part 3 (B) see link below

hope you like this part 3(A), though it was tragic
as this story will proceed in two settings, 3(A) is at NT's side setting & part 3(B) will be about Maan
this is about NT, do you think she died? poor girl her life ended in such circumstances, when she was suffering she was alive and now that she was free they killed her, let her soul rest in peace

remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me

please read it
and tell me how you find it

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part 3(B) page 31.23rdNOV.2011
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
upd. was fab.
eagerly waiting for d next part...
do pm me too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so u r back with the update ... hmmm good
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is NT really dead? Oh God how cruel can they b.
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Posted: 13 years ago
......Oh no!!! what a disgusting ,shameful ,mentally sick person this Dev is...😡poor NT...😭... and Arjun & co trying to kill her😲😡... so now everybody knows that NT is dead🤢...so it looks like existence of the name NT has been wiped out...and the new name geet is going to make an entry...

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