HAPPY DAYS Part 14 on Pg 50...on 25/1

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Anisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

awesome part loved it...😛.

continue soon

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Oye Soni! just finished Reading all d update yaar... nd it was truly Awesome... ur first piece came as a bang yaar... every line every situation was picturised beautifully... u knw wat m loving dis Youth Fiction... its totally refreshing...

it reminds me of my College days yaar... it was so realistic dat i dnt feel like m reading a fiction...

BTW Did Geet has saw Maan's face wen she closed her eyes?😳. pls reveal it soon na m driving nuts in curiosity

nw update d next part soon nd dat too long one... m aiting eagerly for Maaneet's Drive😉

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

awesome part👏

i loved it

continue soon😉

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

@abhi

hi..hwz u???

its been long time since i have chatted wid u..

u knw dear u r alwz first to comment on my update...

thx fr ur lovely comments..

@aniee di

awww..love u sooo much di..

u used some pic in comment first time.😛

n that too fr me...m soo happy..😃

i cant tell u hw i was feeling after reading ur comment..

love u sooo much di...thx fr alwz being there at my side when i need u the most...🤗

@shru di

thx di fr liking it...

i'll surely try 2 update regularly..😉

love ya...

@ping pong

thx dear...

i love ur graphics...😊

@mahi

correct maan ka golden chance..

par kya pata kya ho jaye rasste me.. u never knw..😉

@rabz

hi rabz...

hwz u dear??

thx fr ur lovely comments..

they really mean alot to me..

@seemamary

yr...i'll disclose it very soon..

so just wait fr 1-2 more parts u'll come 2 knw...

@angelic_cute

m glad dear..

that u r liking it..

yup actually their gang reminds me of my own gang in clg..😆

@jas

hi..hwz u??

hw r u xams going on??

sry..😡😡😡😡 dont say sry...

sabar ka phall mitha hota hai..

i'll update soon..

@deepa di

my pleasure di..

hw r u??

hwz harshita??

y every1 saying sry..😡 i knw...u ppl r busy..

no an issue..u can comment when ever u get time..

@akku

awww..akku..u liked my work..thx alot dear...

m glad that coz of me..every1 is reliving their clg life..😉

just 1-2 updates i'll reveal ...have patience...

u r asking me to give long update...😲

i'll try my best sweety coz fr writing long update god should give me patience n time..😆

@Remiya_pillai

hehehe... grand chance for maan..

actually golden chance..

lets see wht happens...😉

@geetsweet

hello dear..

thx fr ur lovely comment..loved it..

thx u all for ur lovely comments dearies...it means a lot to me...

@sonu_29,@serenelove,@anisha_maaneet,@Shruti_Goyal,

@maaneetsangel,@tushti_kiran,@happydays30,@monika1992

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: soniyasharma90

@deepa di
my pleasure di..
hw r u??
hwz harshita??
y every1 saying sry..😡 i knw...u ppl r busy..
no an issue..u can comment when ever u get time..

hey, how r u girl... i & harshita are good dear... how is everything is with you girl... that was a nice, beautiful reply. i loved it...

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: harshdb

hey, how r u girl... i & harshita are good dear... how is everything is with you girl... that was a nice, beautiful reply. i loved it...

me too good di... missing every one like hell...now a days don't get enough time to chat with all of u... hehehe... 😆...thx (no thx)... fr loving my reply..😳... miss u all... sooo... much...🤗

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

awesome ff dear...

loved it ...

cont soon dear ...

waiting for the next part and maaneet moments...😊

Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: payalpari
awesome ff dear...
loved it ...
cont soon dear ...
waiting for the next part and maaneet moments...😊

thx pari...😊

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

PART 10

plz listen to this song while reading it to feel(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HnySaY00YFY)

Mere Bina mein rehne laga hoon
teri hawaon mein behne laga hoon
jaane mein kaise
tera hua hoon
mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoon haan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
toh jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye

bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

the moment he saw her coming his heart skipped a beat...

he was mesmerized with her flawless beauty...for him it seemed like every thing stopped at that moment...it was just him n his angel...he felt like he was just alive...but after she came to his life...he came to know how to live how to love...just her one sight

make him forget all his worries all his tension...his every thought

ends on her now...to be with her became his only goal...

pehle se zyada

main jee raha hu
jabse main tere dil se juda hoon
rahon pe teri mein to chala hoon
tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon
tujhko jo paaya ahan to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham

jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
toh jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham

jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

for him she was some angel descended from heavens and that too only for him...she was dressed in green chuddidar...her skin seemed to be so soft that he got an erg to touch

her...his imaginations were going wilder n wilder as she came closer...

geet was astonished to see maan there... he said he'll take but what maan is doing here?? where he has gone??? she decided to ask maan about others

geet: hmm maan...

maan was so lost in her..he dint even noticed when she came close to him...

geet...aab isse kya ho gaya?

she shaked him holding him from shoulder...

maan..

maan: hmm..what happened geet??? why r u shouting??? m nt deaf??? i can hear u..stop shouting..

geet: r u nuts??? here m calling u from past 2 min...n nw u r telling me that u r nt deaf...

she composed herself n asked.. k... leave it where are others..

maan: actually every1 left as they were getting late...n yash sir said that we will get late..so m here for u...so can we start nw...

geet was hesitant to go with maan but she was left with no other option so she had to go with him only...

maan started his bike...geet seated herself...she never sat on bike before that..she always traveled from car...n top of that she has to go with maan...

maan:chale...turning back towards her

geet:hmmm...chaliye... then she called him again..maan..

maan:hmm...bolo..kya hua geet?? care was so evident in his voice..for the first time geet felt something in her heart after seeing immense love n care in his eyes...

geet:mmm..kuch nhn chaliye...

maan started his bike n both started their journey...both ignorant of the fact where this journey will lead them

geet kept her hand on his shoulder for support...the moment she kept her hand on maan's sholder...maan felt sudden shock...current waves passed through his spine...he increased the speed...

to maintain the balance geet slid her hand on his waist holding him tightly...maan was getting affected by her closeness...he tried his best to distract his mind which was thinking only about geet..today everything seemed so changed...he was confused with his own reaction...

teri nazar me nayi si adaa hai

naya sa nasha bhhi ghula hai
kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo
tere hi baalon me khula hai
teri hadon me meri basar hai
ab tujhe bhi
jana kidhar hai
jahan rahe tu main wo jahan hoon
jise jiye tu main wo sama hoon
teri waja se naya naya hoon
pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga hun..aaa

he wanted to reach as soon as possible...he doubted himself infact he was sure that he won't be able to control himself for longer time...

maan suddenly applies brake and coz of sudden jerk..she pressed more closer to maan..maan felt her softness pressing on his back...n he feels sudden current...her closeness evoked his desire to hold her to kiss her...her sent was driving him insane...

tujhko jo paaya ahan

to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham

jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham

jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

nothing was in maan's favour..neither his own heart nor his mind...even the god thought of playing games wid him..

the weather was getting cold...it seemed that it may rain anytime...

he could feel the heat...that arrised coz of geet...with each and every passing second

it was getting difficult for him to control his desire...

Precap: picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!!!!!😆

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Edited by soniyasharma90 - 13 years ago