~Destined To Be One~mg ff THREAD 2 NT pg 148 - Page 43

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PART 16

Geet:maine nahi liye dadi ne mujhe diya tha

Maan:par tumne kyu liye

Geet:sir please

Maan:tumne mere maa ke kangan issliye liye taki tum unhe bech(sell)sako hai na

Geet:nahi sir

Maan:phir bolo

Geet:sir mera haat choriye

Maan:jab tak tum mujhe sach nahi bolti main tumhe nahi chorunga

Geet:sir please mera haat dukh raha hai

Maan:sach bolo

He twists her hand more backward and now maan was standing back

Geet:ahhh

Maan:natak band karo

Geet:please sir choriye dard ho raha hai

Maan:nahi sajhi tum

Geet:sir

Maan pushed her and she fell on the floor crying.Her hand was not fully red and it was bleeding due the glass bangles which was broken by maan.She stood up and maan pulled her towards himself with force.She banged onto his chest due to sudden movement.Geet stared at him with tears in her eyes.He caught her hand and started to take out the bangles.Maan was not able to take out the bangles from her hand and geet screamed in pain.

Geet:ahhh

The bangles were very small as compared to her hand

Maan:chillana band karo

Geet:sir dard ho raha hai

Maan:mujhe uss se kya hai

Geet:please

Maan:mere bangles mujhe de

Geet:mera haat choriye

Maan:jab tak yeh kangan nahi nikal leta main yeh nahi dene wala hoon

Geet:sir choriye

Maan:nahi

Geet could not take the pain anymore so she pushed him hard with all her strength.Maan got angry and he came and pulled her by her hair.

Geet:ahhh

Maan:tumhari itni himmat mujhe dakha dene ki

Geet:sir dard ho raha hai

Maan:i don't care samjhi tum

Geet:maine kya bigara hai aapka

Maan:tumne kya bigara hai tumhare kaaran meri zindagi kharab ho gayi hai

Geet:please mujhe chor dijiye

Maan:nahi samjhi tum

Geet:bas bohut ho gaya hai samjhe aap

She came out from his grip and stared at him angry

Geet:aapka jo mann main aayega aap karte jaenge

Maan:geeet

Geet:samajte kya hai aap apne aapko

Maan:chup

Geet:nahi chup rahungi main jitna chup rehti hoon utna hi mera faida uthaya jaata hai

Maan:geeet

Geet:kyu kar rahe hai aap sab mere saath aisa kyu maine kya kiya hai ki sab mujhe dukh dete hai ghar par chachi mujhe maarti hai aur office main sasha maam mujhe hurt karti hai aur jiss din aisa nahi hota hai toh aap mujhe hurt karte hai kyu

Maan was shocked by her talk

Geet:kya chahiye aapko

Maan:mere kangan

Geet:aapko chahiye the toh aap mujhe keh sakte the na

Maan:main bolta aur tum sunn leti

Geet:aapko kangan chahiye na yeh lijiye

She opened the kangan as it was different type and it can be locked.Geet handed the kangan to maan.



Geet:aapko chahiye that oh keh dete mujhe hurt karni kya baat thi

Maan was now feeling guilty

Geet:pata nahi main aisa kya kiya hai ki sab mujhe nafrat karte hai

Maan:geet

Maan came near her to talk to her

Geet:mat aaiye mere paas

Maan:geet

Geet:main aur nahi seh sakti hoon

Maan:meri baat sunno

Geet:agar aap mujh se theek se baat nahi kar sakte hai toh please mujhe hurt mat kijiye

She ran from there crying bitterly and maan was standing there shocked


precap:dadi scolding maan

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Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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good update.. Geet talked back.. waiting for her to become a Sherni..
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Finally geet retorted..
thank god..i thot she s such a cry baby...
luvd it..
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superb and awesome update
precap is awesome
maan deserve it

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