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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannuabmslover

OMG OMG OMG!!!!wat an awesome update!!!!!u r truly rocking!!!srsly i m loving all ur updates!!!!Rey nd Kria ek saath college mein aur wo bhi raat ko!!!!wah kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!!!srsly awesome!!!!!nd in d 2nd update it was rocking too!!!!d song sequence!!!!!wow!!!!!!!loved it thoroughly!!!!!m looking forward to ur next update!!!!nd 2mrw!!!!awesome!!!!!plzzz cont!!!!nd thnx for d pm!!!



thank you sooo much!!!! yaaa i wish ek baar D3 mei KRIYAANSH akele collge mei band hojaye nd koi romantic scene hojaye unki beech hayeee😍 it wud b MARVELOUS EXCELLENT AWSUMMM ☺️

next update aaj aftrnn tak hojayegi.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: crazysky

wow am super excited as u wrote tommorrow u will update thnx a lot n todays chap was really awesome n love reys line""tumei kya mei spiderman lagtha hoon??? Dek nhi rahi ho darwaaja band kia hua hai!!!" lol...



lolzz 😆 actually muje koi aur bahana nahi mila coz its ofcourzz he dint wantd 2 get out of the college!!! 😆
hope u all loved the PUNCH LINE 😛" tumei kya mei spiderman lagtha hoon?? 😆" i cud imagine him saying lik tat!! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaaar THT was AWESOME !!!!!!! This part was fild with cuteness . Kria thinking about rey , rey holding her when she falls , Kria hugging him n rey trying 2 make her confess her feelings , awwwsss . This part was MIND BLOWING . Kriyansh r sooo CUTENESS PERSONIFIED , LUV EM
Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
update soon and its awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3:

great part. thanks for the pm. do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
thats not fair itna short update
next time pls long update nd
do continue nd update fast
nd also thnx for pm me
good job👍🏼👍🏼
nd lots of hug for u🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awww...such a sweet update!😳
kya drama hai!
plz update soon..
m curious to see how rey wriggles the info out of kriya...
muahaaha!😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!!
jst cant w8 for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
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PART 4:


Kria was running out the d hall'. Rey follows her and stops her by coming front of her!!!


Rey was fully frustrated!!! Angry irritated by her actions!!!


He held her hands tight from behind nd pinned her against the wall near the hall door' she was getting irritated! She started fighting wid him trying to escape from his closeness ' her hands was indulged in pushing him.. rey's powerfull muscular hands (both) rested on the wall on both sides not allowing her to move..


he thn held her hands wich was pushing him nd pinned it against the wall holding hard by his hands on both sides! She turned her face to the other side'.

Rey came close to her near her ears nd said'.


Rey: "jab tak mein apne baat katham nhi kartha tab '"


Kria: "chodo muje!! Muje gar jana hai!!!"


Rey: "dek nhi rahi ho?? Hum dono yahan bandh hai!! College ka darwaaza kal subah hi kholega!!!"


Kria: "please muje jana hai yahan se chodo muje"


Rey felt bad at her irritation! He was still more in anger!! Kria was not letting him complete atleas his words!!... kria was fighting wid her mind nd her heart!

Her heart was calling out for him! Her heart wanted to listen wat he was trying to say but her mind constantly interrupted bw' her mind was successful in making her believ that she should avoid the moment'!!


Rey: "FINE agar tumei yahan se bahar jaana hi hai thn ur free to go! But jab tak mei apni baat katham nahi kar letha tab tak u cant go!!!"


Rey came more close to her '.


Kria was feeling once again a different sensation in her body at his touch!! Nd dis time she had stopped struggling cozz even she wanted to hear what he was trying to say aftr all! She could not control over the flowing tears in her eyes!


Rey: "tum bahut special ho'! Aur mein tumare aankon mei aasun nahi dek sakta!!"


Kria turned her face towards him at his words nd thn the great LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA' few strips of her was resting near her eyes'. Rey slowly makes behind her ears'.


He was no more holding his hands on hers coz kria too wanted to listen what rey wanted to say.. his words was melting her and she wanted to melt..!!


Rey: "tum muje bahut affect karti ho nd muje pata hai tumei b farak padtha hai'.!!"


There was a complete silent except the breeze wich was bw them!


Kria coming to her senses nd mind was directing and controlling her..


Kria: "nahi!! Muje koi farak nahi padtha! (she was to move away).."


Rey bangs his hand on the wall not allowing her to move away.. kria was a bit scared at his sudden response! She looked him he came more close to her!!


Rey: "BAATCUTTER!! Kisi ki puri baat sunne ki adat nahi hena?? Lekin tumei sunna padega!! Tho tumei koi farak nahi padtha ??"


Kria: "nahi!"


He comes more close holding her hand at wrist.. (her hand was held her dress near the knee tightly coz she could not resist the situation!).. rey came more close to her..!


Rey: "abi bi tumei koi farak nahi pad raha hai!!"


Kria: "nahi!! (holding her breath it was much harder for her to answer as he had made her melt completely!)"


Rey came still close '. he held her waist close to him thru his other free hand' his another hand (wich was holding her wrist) made her hand lye on his shoulders' automatically kria's another hand also rested in his shoulder!!

He really lost his senses as wat he was trying to do'!! (so now REY's one hand was around her waist nd the other on her back'. Below her hair.. nd kria's both hands wer on rey's shoulders..)


Rey: "abi??"


Kria couldnot answer anything..!


Rey came forward.. his hand(wich was in her bac) moved below her ears putting her hair behind.. kria didn't have any objections on his actions.. he slowly rested his lips on her neck..


She felt a current moving on her body' she went back leaning on the wall rey to moved along wid her'


He now slowly brought his another hands moving on her body towards her neck nd then towards her face' her face rested in his both hands he tilted his face a little and kissed hard on her CHEEKS'

her eyes closed out of his sensuation kiss!!! She wanted his next kiss on her lips she was looking forward to it but before he could proceed she opened her eyes!!!

Came back to the situation realised what she was trying to do!! She pushed him hard!! He was left with confusion still he knew he didn't do anything wrong she had responded to his actions!!


When she went, he held her hand from behind.. she was shed into tears!!! If he could try to come close to her once again it was sure she would forget the world nd would lean on him!!!


Rey: "(looking at deiffrent side holding her one hand.. she too was looking away..) I NEED YOU' (turning towards her she is still looking away into the ground..)"


She lifts her face on hearing it nd she could dare to face instead she jus tilted her face to side, her one eye looking at him from side (not fully.. u can imagine the scene how rey kria's doorrie band raha tha in the Diwali spl epi and she was looking at him facing her back...!)


Rey: "I NEED YOU WITH ME FOREVER"


Kria didn't know to react at his words (we all know how dumbly she acts in some situations!)


She wanted to hear more' he again turned to other side.. and continued..


Rey: "mein sirf tumara hoke jeena chahtha hoon!! Mein sirf aur sirf tumei hi chahtha hoon! Kya tum b muje chahthi ho?? (after a pause widout getting her response he jus thought he would say I LOVE YOU to her.. he said-) Kria I.. (turning towards her).."


BUT wer is kria???? She had gone!! Leaving him alone there!! He looked.., could not find her..!! he saw down nd found her running towards the

Fire Exit corridor wiping her tears!!! This time he didn't wanted to stop her!!


Rey was dumbstruck.. he went back leaned on the wall nd sat down' Now he was shed into tears!! He was crying..!! he wasent betrayed neither she accepted him!! He wasent angry anymore instead he was sad!! She didn't give her answers!!


He was confused: "Y THE HELL WAS SHE ACTING LIKE THAT???? I know she feels foe me!! I know she loves me! Tho fir wo kuch bol kyun nhi rhai hai!! Tab b nahi boli jab meine yeh bola ki I like her!!! Kyun usne kuch nahi kaha!! Kahi meine usse samajne mei ya jaan na mei galti tho nahi ki?? Aisa tho nahi hai hena ki wo mere liye koi feel nahi karti??!!"


All thoughts made him feel more sad and get confused..


Kria jus stopped infront of the Fire exit door!!


Kria: "nahi nahi meri aur Rey ke beech kuch nahi ho sakta!!! (convincing herself).. muje apne feelings ko apne andar hi rakna chahiye!!! I should not let him know!!"


Thn slowly her inner voice..: "par kyun?? Kyun kuch nahi ho sakta?? Wo b tumse pyaar karta! He too feels the same as u feel for him!! Tho problem kya hai??"


She jus avoids those thoughts and moves inside fir exit and walks down (crying)'.


Aftr an hour or so'


Rey gets up' wipes his tears!! Slowly walks towards the corridor'..


Stands infront of the fire exit..


Rey: "huh!! Jab baatcutter hi nahi hai toh mei yahan akele reh ke kya karoonga!?..."


He opens the door..! it was dark .. he walks down.. 2 or 3 steps downstairs..


He suddenly stops' there is breenze indicating him of presence of something!! It was not something it was SOMEONE!! Someone close to his heart!! It was kria she stood on the steps (3 or 4 steps front of him)' she was speechless nd motionless!


He realises its her!! He feels her..


Rey in a slow tune to himself: "baatcutter?? Abi b yahi hai??"


Rey: "Kria?? Tum yahan??"


Kria turns towards widout uttering a word she runs towards him!! HUGGING HIM TIGHT!!!


Rey was once again DUMBSTRUCK!! Infact some kind of current flowed over him!!


Rey: "k k kri kria'''..?"


Kria: "Mein tumse alag nahi hona chahthi!! I I need you too rey!! Muje akele mat chodna mei mein tumahare saat rehna chahthi hoonn' always?!"


Rey hearing her words! Those words which he was dying to hear till now!! He heard them..


He hugged her tight making their bodies look like a single one!! He rested his face on her shoulders closing his eyes ' kria still had tears but a big smile curved on her face'


Their passionate love was now complete!! After a long hug wich lasted for more than 10 mins'. he broke the hug'.


Rey: "(holding her face in his hands) kria tum rote hue koobsoorat lagthi ho toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum humesha rothe raho!!"


Kria smiles at him..!


Rey: "tumein rothe hue mein nahi dek sakta! U knw y?? U r very too special for me..!! nd I like you sooo much!!!

(p.s: guyzz plzz dont get disappointed ki indo ne abi tak ek dossre ko I LOVE YOU nahi kaha hai!! Coozz I hav some spl plans for that too !! ek rain seq mein yeh dono ek doosre ko I LOVE YOU kahenge nd that will b most romantic nd my last update on this thread! In the same update swaron will also confess!! Filal I LOVE YOU KEHNE SE BI BADA SURPRISE HAI so look down for next scene)"


Kria: "mein aaj ki raat ko humesha yaad rakoongi..!"


Rey: "mei bi.. (smiling..)"


Rey has some plan in his mind..


Rey: "kria will will you dance with me??" lending his hand forward'


In the rehersal hall' there is a dark spotlight environment'.


The following song strts playing'


The MOST HOTTEST CRAZIEST ROMANTIC dance of kriyaansh with full passion'


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=WOFuv3CXAkY[/YOUTUBE]

Plzz play the above song nd imagine kriyaansh hot dance.. since it's a hot number and there is no flash backs' plzz read the description of each others feeling thn look below, im saying wat will happen nxt at end of the song'.


Rey was taking all advantage of touching her.. making his crazy moves of his fingers on her body.. seducing her to the extreme' they start the dance with Eye Lock.. thn bringing her close to him nd thn taking some gracious moves.. at all their lifts Rey was seducing her and she could not resist'. Thn on some of their moves he too kissed on her cheeks..

and sometimes he moved his lips over her neck.. hind fingers wer moving thru her wrist nd thn towards her neck resting his lips sometimes their nd giving a hard kiss on her neck..

in one of their lifts rey held on his waist nd her legs around his waist holding support and her arms around his neck'

his hotness made HER kiss on his cheeks' widout doing wich she couldnot stay' she had agreed to the fact that he was a hot hunk nd Her Man forever..! he dropped her slowly down'


They both were sexually attracted towards each other! He dropped her down slowly .. her arms wer still around his necks.. his hands wer lying on her waist' she moved soo back leaning to the big mirror of the hall'. Rey still holding her'. They both didn't hav any senses on what they wer doing..!

he held her close to him! Making her completely touch his body' he leans forward kissing her jus very close to her lips.. thn he moves forward to kiss her..


He leans front waiting for her response'. Kria to wanted to kiss him soo she dint hav any objection..! kria closes her eyes tilts herself giving green signal for rey's actions!! Thn he rests his lips on hers making it more passionate nd beautiful! Their tongues were playing wid each other..!!

kria fingers hand started massaging Rey's stylish smooth hair'. Nd Rey's fingers rested on her back seducing her even more.. after a long tym of their passionate kiss'

they came back from their kiss' their Eye Lock was stil in action! Kria's face resting on his hands.. he looked into her eyes.. they knew they made this beautiful! Even more special! But by continuing further wid their excitement they dint want to give the name MISTAKE' coz for every couple it would passionate and special moment of their life when they mate with each other .. when 2 of them become each other's forevr! In a complete manner! ...

(plzz forgive if any1 feels unfortable regarding words used here!! im trying my best to cover the use of any intense words)

kria was really blushing to the core! Wo sharamaane lagi thi' itni ki wo rey ke aankon mei b nhi dek pa rahi thi'. Soo she was looking down.. rey made her face up'


Rey: "don't be embarrassed! Kria you are my angel! Tumei mei kabhi hurt nahi karoonga trust me!"


Kria: "I trust u! and rey hum dono kabhi alag nahi honge na??"


Rey: "kabhi b nahi!! After all this is d destiny! Hena.."


Kria gives a big innocent smile and hugs him!


Aftr some time Rey was sitting down leaning towards the wall.. kria keeping her head on his shoulders and holding his arm tight and making herself conformatable..


She strts thinking'


Rey lifts her face up towards him..


Rey: "kya hua??"


Kria: "(wanting to say something but she stops..) kuch nahi.."


Rey: "hmm yahi soch rahi hoona ki kahi mei hum dono ke beech ke baatein apne doston ko'??"


Kria: "nahi! Mei wo nahi soch rahi thi! And muje pata hai tum aisa kuch nahi karoge! Aakir isiko trust kehthe hena??"


Both give smile to each other'!


Kria: "actually mein Sharon aur swaron ke baare mein soch rahi thi..!!"


Rey: "ssshhh!! I promise hum unhe ek karke rahenge ok..??"


Kria: "sacchi???"


Rey: "Mucchi!!"


Rey: "kria agar tum chahthi ho to hum yahan se bahar jaa sakte hai'."


Kria: "bahar? Nahi muje tumare saath rehna hai! Muje nahi jana (speaking like a kid!! Tats kria's style)..!"


Rey: "aur tumhari mom???"


Kria: "mom?? Wo toh kal subah ayegi!! Tab tak.."


Rey: "tab tak mei tumei gar chod donnga!!"


On the other side-

Sharon was in her car' driving home.. she was out of focus!! Coz her full mind and heart called out only one name SWAYAM!!!


Her car stopped near a street were one side had a jungle on the other side there wer houses broken' DETAIL mein kaho tho ek sunsaan jagah!! Na kisi ka gar hai na koi insaan dikayi de raha tha.. bas car jahan kadi thi uske paas ek BENCH thi (actually it was like a small park near jungle soo ppl come on a walk or on a long drive..)..


Now there wer some weird noice pooping out of jungle' Sharon was scared! She started calling out her frenzz but no range' she had no choice she evn called up swayam!


Fortunately he received..


Sw: "Sharon tum muje?? Kya baat hai jaldi bolo mere paas waqt nahi hai!!"


Sh: "accha ab meri baat sunne ke liye tumare paas waqt nahi hai?? Waise tumse baat karne muje b interest nahi hai!! Mei isliye tumei call kis kyun ki mei yahan .. (she hears weird voices again' he frustrated rough tone changes to sweet and pleading tune) swayam mei yahan akeli mere car kaharab swayam mei yahan jungle ke paas swayam plz pla help me muje bahut darr lag rha hai!!"


Sw: "(he was shocked and worried for her) Sharon Sharon relax tum batao muje kaha ho tum!!?"


Sh: "yeh koi jungle hai aur doosri taraf kuch purani gar hai!! Swayam muje nahi pata ki mei kaha agayi hoon!! Plzz jaldi aao muje bahut zyada dar lag rah hai!!"


Sw: "accha tho tum waha drive karke chali gayi aur pata b nahi chala ki kaha ja rahi ho!!?? Great!!"


Sh: "swayam muje daantna band karo aur jaldi se aao!!"


Sw: "u think mei tumara servant hoon?? Tum jo kahogi mei wo karonga???"


Sh: "huh??? Tum mujse badla le rahe ho?? Na rey na rinni simmi ka fone lag rha hai!! Vicky ka fone b off araha tha isliye meine tumei call!! Kia ! but ab lagtha hai tumei call karke badi galti kar li!!"


Sw: "exactly!!"


Sh: "u u go go to hell!!!"


She cuts the fone gets more worried and strts crying!! She tries open the car but it wasnot opening!! She tried hard but all her efforts was in vain!! She bags the car wid her leg! (obviously gets hurt!!) thn there is a sudden sounds of some ppl walking around following wich more weird noices!


She gets more worried she sits near her car' wen she opened her eyes she sees that few(7 ppl) of GUNDAS had encircled her!!! Their horrible looks!! She was scared to core but still managed to give tuff expression!...


She slowly escaped and started running but they came forward to her! She was trapped' one of the gunda tried put his hand on her'! She covered her face.. out of fear! But thie fellow could move his hand further!! Someone was holding him!! Nd its none other than SWAYAM!! (ab yeh fight karega???)


To know wat happens next stay tuned for my next update!! Next update this teusday'


Precap: rey leaving kria home' rey nd kriya climbing thru pipe!! .. rey hiding in kria's house.. swaron stuck in an old torn out house' Sharon sleeping on swayam's chest' ... plzzz gimme ur reviews! nd next epi on teusday but if time permits i mite update it 2mrw itself..~~

i hope u loved this 😃

Edited by nams_love_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4:


lovely part. thanks for the long update and pm..

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