Radev FF PYAAR KI BARSAT Part 14B,pg16 on 5th april.a short update

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hi frnds...this is my 1st attempt...i'm frm S.India n my hindi is lil weak...so plzz support me...

<font color="#990000">PART 1</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Good morning beta..."dadima's loving voicefloated into his sleepy ears...He isn't still in a mood to open his eyes...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Dev beta udo...aaj tumhara zindagi ka khaas din hain,bhool gaya hain kya!!!!"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">This pricked his ear like a needle and he suddenly opend his eyes...His pained eyes pained dadi maa too...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Dadimaa how can I !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Dev,yeh tum kya keh rehe ho????tumhen apna poora zindagi baaki reh gaya hain,tumhen bhi aage badnaa chaahiye beta"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Main jaanta hoon dadima,but I can't"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Tumhen uss ladki ko bhoolna hoga"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"woh mujhse kabhi nahi hoga daadi maa...jab tak yeh dev zinda hain,meri radhika bhi meri har saanson mein rehegi"...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Dev got up from the bed and moved to the window..Dadimaa too followed him in a hurry...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Daadima slowly cupped his gloomy face and turned him towards her...Daadima saw the tars in his eyes...</font>


<font color="#0000ff">"Beta,radhika is a closed chapter in your life,ab usse yaadkar tumhen kya faayada hoga?????"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Dadimaa,yeh aap keh rahi hain!!!!!!!!!!!!aap toh sab kuch jaanti hain na"

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<font color="#0000ff">"yeh sab zindagi ka khel hain beta,otherwise how can she leave you!!!!!!!!!"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Daadima,aapp ko pata hain na, woh sirf ek galatfaimi tha,varna woh mujhe kabhi bhi door nahi jaayegi...aur mujhe uski galatfaimi door karne ki mauka bhi nahi milaa"</font>


<font color="#0000ff">"Dev,beta, woh sab chod aur mere saath aa...sab neeche tumhare intezaar kar rehe hain..."</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Mujhe kisi se nahi milna...aur aap ko mujhe iss duvida ko solve karne mein madad bhi karna hoga"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"aaj ka din tumhaare zindagi ka sabse khaas din hain beta...aur aaj tumhen iss tarah udaas nahi rehna chaahiye"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Main iss din ko nahi maanta,aur naa aaj ki program ko,jisse aap shaadi keh rehe hain...mer zindagi mein sirf meri radhika hain,aur hamesha rehegi...aur mein iss shadi mein shaamil bhi nahi hoga"...Dev muttered with an angry face n came back to sit in his bed...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Dev!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh tumhare babuji ka ichaa hain,tum kaise isse inkaar kar sakte ho????????"</font>

<font color="#0000ff">"Sab kuch mujhe pooche bina do din mein fix kiya hain na, toh mein iisse kyun accept karoon!!!!!! aap ko mere aur radhika ke baare mein sab kuch pata tha na, phir bhi aap ne iss shaadi ko rokne mein kuch nahi kiya!!!!!!!!" dev shouted in his angry voice...</font>



<font color="#0000ff">"Tumhen apne baabuji kistubbornness pata hain na, agar ussne kuch decide kiya,woh koi nahi badal sakta,main majboor tha beta,aur upar se thu aur radhika ab saath nahin hain,toh mein kyaa karoon beta...agar tumhaari shaadi ek hafte ki andar nahi hogi toh woh das saal ke baad hi hoga,issliye humko sab kuch jaldi karna pada...yeh mat bhoolna ki tum agla rajpurohit hain aur tumhare abhishek iss saal mein hi hoge,ek patni ke bina woh sambav nahi hain beta...isliye tumhen raadika ko bhoolkar barka ko apnana hoga,tum jaante ho barka aur uski parivar iss riste ko khushi khushi apnaaya...woh ek achi ladki hain beta,aur hamesha tumhen khush rekhenge"</font>


<font color="#0000ff">"Barka varka...mujhe kuch nahi sunna...woh mer liye koi bhi nahi hain...aur naa hi main usse shaadi karoonga...mera aur radhika ka rista dil se juda hain,hum ab tan se paas nahi hain,lekin hum hamesha mann se ek hain,aur hamesha rehenge...uske jagah mein kis aur ke baare mein sochna bhi mere liye paap hain...daadimaa aap ko aaj ki yeh shaadi ko rokna hoga..main apna zindagi ke saath nahi khel sakta...radhika meri zindagi hain,mera sab kuch hain...daadima main vaada karta hoon mein iss hafte ke adar meri radhika ko doond loonga aur usse shaadi bhi karoonga...aap bas aaj ke yeh shaadi ko rokiye aur sabko inform kijiiye..."</font>

[DIV]<font color="#0000ff">"Tum yeh kya keh reha hain beta,sab mehman aa chuke hain,woh bhi ek din mein!!!!!!!!!! sirf hamare saath dene ke iye.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good so far, really want to know what was the misunderstanding and How Dev will avoid getting married?. Looking forward to the next installment. When is that going to be?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zam123

Good so far, really want to know what was the misunderstanding and How Dev will avoid getting married?. Looking forward to the next installment. When is that going to be?


wil update within a week...😉
thanX 4 supporting😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome,so she left him and dev isnt giving up on his love!!lovely! Oh my,dont let him marry that woman,save the poor man!knt wait 4 more :)
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liked it pls add me 2 pm list pls pm me when u update next part
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its really interesting waiting for next part👏please add me to ur pm list😃can u please update dialogues in english .thanku so much👏
Edited by ak4423766463 - 13 years ago
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are we going to see some flashbacks about the misunderstanding ?great start
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well done Ancie very nice update ur hindi dialoguses so good waiting 4 next update
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Great start. Dev is not going to give up his Radhika? Waiting to see how Dev stops his wedding with Barkha. Hope he finds his Radhika soon & gets married to her.
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PART 2

Leaving a shattered Dev behind Mr.Purohit rushed out of the room angrily by shutting the door in a loud noise...Daadi maa made Dev to sit in the bed and tried to console him, even though she knew that it is an impossible task...she too cried with her grandson...

"Dev,i wish I could do somwthing to you...but how can I beta!!!!!!! Bhagvaan jo bhi karta hain hamaare bhalai ke liye karta hain...may be Kanah bhi yeh chaahte hain ki barka tumhaare jeevansaati bene...hum Kanah ki marzi ko kaise inkaar kar sakte hain beta!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Main aur radhika Kanah ki kripa se hi mila...kyunki Kanah jaante hain ki hum donon hamesha ek doosare ke saath denge...mujhe poora yakeen hain radhika sirf mere liye bani hain...Kanah send us to this world only to be with each other...if i won't get my radhika main mar jaaoonga..." Dev said with tears...

"Agar kanah ki icha nahi the toh humen barka ki rista kaise mil sakte beta...you have to accept this relation soon,because your wish will never come true...you must ready quick and come down,sab dulha ke intezaar kar rehe hain...ad you have to do some pujas in the morning itself" Dadi maa said coldly as she was sure that she is helpless...

"Jaldi aaja...main neeche tumhare intezaar karoongi" saying this Dadimaa rushed out of the room leaving a heart broken dev...










Wiping her tears daadima reached downstairs...Seeing her coming from Dev's room Padma,Dev"s mother fastened her steps to her...Maheswari Dev's taaiji aso follwed her...

" Maaji,kya hua?? Where is Dev?Is he still sleeping?All are asking for him...Is he still angry with this shaadi?Do you realize the importance of this marriage?Main kya karoon maaji...woh toh abhi bhi uss ladki ki yaadon mein hain...Why can't he accept barka!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have seen her n spoke with her,she is a very nice girl...If barka comes to this house I am sure it will be a grace to us..."

"Padma tum kyon uss Barka ke itne taarif kar rahi ho jisse tumhen sirf do din ki pahchaa ho!!!!! I know my Dev well,he will never do anything against his house..."

"Do i need to go up and cal him again?agar woh neeche nahi aaye toh sab kya sochenge!!!!!!"

"He will come soon...Give him some time to get fresh and also to refresh his mind..."

"agar dev ke dad poochenge toh main kya kahoon maaji?? agar usse gussa aaya,toh!!!!!!!!!!!"


"Padma don't take this much tension...our Dev will accept this marriage soon...give him some time..."







"Chachi,don't worry,mom is right...main dev ke paas jaaonga,and i will get him here..."heard Rohan's voice who is Maheswari's son and dev's best friend ...

"ha,Rohan beta,ab tum bhi karo kuch koshish..." padma said in her sad voice...

"Rohan, tum dev ke paas jaao beta..."said daadima


"Daadima aap aur chachi guests ke paas jaao...I will be with Dev and bring him soon... " Rohan said this and made his steps to dev's room...

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Edited by ancie - 13 years ago

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