FF: Ek HazaaronMein ch 21 pg9

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Firstly this ff is for my best friends Nidha(Eowyn),Sur(Sur001),Ramona(KriYa_life) ,Babli (fri42911) love u all muah hope u like it

Just like how all 5 fingers are not the same on ones hand this is a story of 5 sisters who are all very different from each other yet very close but ' for how long will the closeness be..forever or will it change after they get married, or different status,lifestyle or even for a guy lets see in this story.. written by me lalmirch28 this not a group venture but a solo ff where my friends and I are the heroin and heros are 'fav telly hotties

28 yr old Ramona raizada she is eldest sisters of 5 she loves her sister like nothing else in the world she is willing to do anything for her sisters they are her jaan she can never be mad at them and always pampers and protects them from their papa and mama who are in America now but girls are here in India best sister in the world put there happiness before her own but till when always or will it end is a fashion designer she runs the house as her parents are in US for there business responable ,mature (like jeevika from ehmmbh and anjali iss pyar)

Fiza Raizada 26 yrs old she is hot and happening and she knows it. Kinda girl makes one dances to her tunes she is a bitch to the world aka :Beautiful Individual That Creates HELL ' she will tell how it is evevn if you don't like it not afraid of anyone except god ..Dabaang and Bidass but to her family and friends she is the opposite she cant even think of ever hurting them loves to have fun a total party girl that loves to have good time guys are after her but she plays hard to get she cant be won over easily never been impressed by any guy before until she meets Viren is a air hostesses for Kingfisher has a very to the point attitude loves to wear short fun flirty clothes style icon l(ike sonamkapoor) . (kinda like lavaya in iss pyaar but the new lavaya nice one )

Sur Raizada 24yrs old interior Designer she is different from her sisters she is more comfortable in Indian clothess but when its need she knows how to become a glam doll and turn heads beauty is in her blood she too is very pretty' she best fits the defition desi girl'even thought she is sweet caring and kind hearted .. he too has a fun side to her' loves to joke and play pranks on people knows how to let lose and have a good time .. caring very protective all her sisters she is the middle child yet is the mother hen to all very innocent

Nidha Raizada 22yrs old medical intern she is impulsive and spontaneous,totally random doesn't think things over means well her heart is in the right place trys to fix things her way but always ends in more trouble yet her last minute wacky ideas do work sometimes 'total prankster will tell you what she thinks to your face buts not disrespectful she wants to state her opinions has her own rules for life she is just like all her sisters she is caring like her Ramona di , blunt and has a mind of her own and rules like her fiza di who she is very close to more then anyone , mother like and protective like her sur di , innocent like her younger sister babli she is pretty girly yet has tomboy side too

Babli Raizada 20yrs old jelwery designer very spoilt girlsisters have protected her a lot from the real world ' she is till very innoncet'only sees good in people trust people very easily' is the baby of the family always her way not use to hearing no but is a sweetheart total kid at heart never wants to grown up always has anger on her nose without siders funloviing wicked sense of humor just like her nidha di ' doesn't know how the world is very flimly belives there is something as a happily ever after and waiting for her prince charming loves to listen to music and sing

Krishna Singh 32 yr old he is ruthless rich business man arrogant he is a gunda basically thinks he do what he wants whenever to who ever feels he has so much power and money no one can say no to him ' is a real dewana if he loves you then he loves like a true ashiq ..he do anything for he loves ones anything ' and if he hates you he will destroy you ' falls for innocent Ramona at first sight takes his business rivals to the cleaners

Viren kapoor 30 yrs old respectful responsible ,best lawyer in the country is true to is work very professional yet only fights case that are right and true fights for justice , loving, caring sweet guy perfect husband material loves his family to the core humble down to earth hasn't let success go to his head 'very good looking and knows always get his way by his adorable smile without even trying 'hates arrogant girls who think of them self as miss world and own the ground the walk on .. will give it to those type of girls to there face until he meets fiza at first flight 'if he see something that is wrong or unfair he wont think twice to help the wrongly accused or hurt get justice '. Is a cute chocalte boy next door type 'loves to flirt very romantic true gentle man wear his heart on his sleeve . loves to have fun and knows how to have a good time 'very close to his brother viraat 26 yrs old loves to sing and play the guitar he and his bro love jam together ...worrys abt virat wish only best for him but always gets misunderstood by viraat..close but when it comes to career part things go alil sour from viraats side

Viraat 26 yrs old unsuccessful business man been threw major financial loss in his business do to Krishna sighn ' feels like a failure..yet hasn't lost his will to live and enjoy life to the fullest..if you have ever met a sarcastic person before then viraat is the baap of sarcasm he is the most sarcastic person on the planet 'has a wicked sense of humor that keep one laughing non stop great one liners that wil surely bring a smile too anyones face 'loves his family a lot close to his big bro viren..loves to love evry girl he sees but only for past time hasn't had a gf nore then 2weeks doesn't in belive in true love thinks it good only in books n flims 'but that thinking changes onces he has met Nidha who not only he falls for hard but realizes she is his landy luck ..is it love or is he only playing for her luck? Loves to sing and play drums always in mood to rock with his bro 'loves his bro but his bros successfulness he cant stand he is happy for him yet then again wants to show him he is no less misunderstands his brother worry for him as im am better then you attitude which isnt true.

Siddharth Malhotra: 28 yrs old Senior doctor he defines the saying punjab ka Sher , a real sona munda..is a real charmer a total flirt 'known for his sry pick up lines that some how work on girls, flirtaholic infact he doesn't know when he is even flirting he is so use to doing it ' yet he has a innocene in him that touches any girls heart'sweet ,caring and kind hearted .. has ego size of Mt. Everest spoilt brat self centred jerk who loves to worry Nidha di Sur never since there shown down the there first meeting 'takes out his dusmaani of sur out on poor Nidha 'over protective and aggressive guy doesn't have time for love 'loves only his profession.

Armaan Malik 24 yrs old rockstar ambitious, flirt heart breaker , casnova, player.. just few names he is own for other then his voice that makes girls go crazy along with his killer looks' feels girls for pleasure' objects of desire feels he never met a girl who can refuse him un till babli ka thapar hits him ..was it love at first slap or the fire of revenge that makes him want babli even more

Index
CS and chapter1
Chapters 2-5
Chapter 6
Chapter 12,13, 14 (scrool down for ch 13,14 same page)
Chapter 15,16, 17(scroll down on same pg)
Chapter 18
Chapter 19, 20 and new entries (scroll down on same pg)
Chapter 21 pg 9
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fri42911 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am speechless!!!!!!!!!
i don't know where to start.
you've done amazing job with each character sketch.
the description seems perfect for each character.
i don't know how to express my gratitude for getting such honors and love, which i am pretty sure does not deserve.
i am so overwhelmed and honored for getting such praise/respect/great compliment.
i am on 9 cloud for getting such a pleasant gift.
simply loved my CS along with all others and concept.
i've already fell in love w/ this FF.
eagerly waiting for the first part.
loved the sigs.
please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fiza my di,my jaanu, my darling...Love you for this surprise jaana...Arrey wah hottes tho awesome hain hi hum tho aur bhi rocking hain i...I loved all the Cs ...mine is a lot similar to my real self...Fiza my pyaari di thnkx for this gift...Thankyoy for putting me along with my two fav people Sur di and you...and off course thanx for Viraat...by the way all my jeeju's are hot...Viren jeeju is sweet...Sid jeeju aur mein tho shayad humesha ladenge...lol...Angad is cool...Krishna jeej is a bit scary
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Fiza my di and my pyari devrani(not here ;-) ...). . .thanks alot for this sweet surprise jaan. . .loved the CS. ...just one word superb dear. . .haila what a beautiful Character sketch. . . . .now coming to my bade jeezs. . .Krishna jiju its not easy to get our Ramona di and Viren jiju. . .ab Fiza di will nachaofy u on the tips of her fingers. . . .Sid i will wait to see kahan takrati hai hamari gaddi. . .Virat ji nidh se pyar hai to say otherwise your lady luck can even change map of your face. . What will happen when two pranksters will meet . . .Angad ji abhi sirf gaal pe lafa baja hai. . .beware otherwise our choti will play guitar of you. . .waiting to see how these opposite shores will meet. . . .interesting character. . .my CS matches with me alot. . Except designing is not my cup of tea 😆 . . .love ya 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fizaaa.. Oh my God.. Dis is the most beautiful Surprise

a new FF wid all of us.. Oh my God.. Dis is beautiful.. Love yew so much for dis.. Muahh
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The CS of each and every one is simply awesum. And d hotties.. Oh my..
Haila, Me sabse badi behen.. Wow *i can dominate d others.. hehe* my lil sisters are really sweet and naughty also.
Krishna... Dis guy is goin to create trouble hehe.
Viren.. Meri Fiza se bachke rehna.. Dats all I can say.
Virat: Mr. Arrogant.. Hmm dono ki jodi ekdum mast hai
Sid, my Sis aint a weakling. So better watch out
Armaan: Babli ka thappad acha laga.. Haha..

Im going to enjoy dis FF alot
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CH1: BLINDED LOVE

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FEW HOURS BEFORE

"Fiza Di why did you call us here whose place is this anyways" asks nidha.

"Haan di and where is Ramona di she didn't come kya"? Asks Sur

"Sur, Nidha, babli we called you here to talk about Ramona di and her behavior … she has totally changed it's like she can't stand us anymore" says fiza

"Haan I agree with you di she is not the same wait but what do you mean by we us sisters or anyone else"? Says babli

"Haan babli we mean all of us guys come in" says fiza

Viren,Varaat,Sid and Armaan walk in

"Oye tum neem ka pakora why are you here this our family matter" says nidha

"Listen ms. drama baaz what ever im doing im doing for you and your family that @!#$%&* Krishna is making all of our lives hell he ruined me idont want him to touch you our your sisters understood" says viraat

"No need this our family matter and hum kahaan hai di" says babli

"Oho desi blond are you blind this a penthouse open your eyes" says armaan

"Eh malik just stop breathing na it will help us all mind your business and me desi blond you think im stupid starts pinching him" says babli

"Hayeee you just have find excuse to touch my muscles… If I do how will I kiss you huh bolo my babli how can you tell your bunty to stop" says armaan

"And you need excuse kiss Ek thapar wasn't enough huh malik" says babli

"Guys stop babli this a penthouse I gifted your fiza di just a token of my love that's all and nidha viraat is right Krishna is not a man to be messed with" says viren

"Viren is right he threatened me as Dr. to give him a medical injection that tp over dose to a guy a rival so he would be khallas I said no he made sanjeevnai in bankruptcy" says sid

"And I who thought Krishna was my friends is my dushmaan mere dadaji ki land take over kya hai … I hate him" says malik

"We have to stop him asap" says sur

"Haan so lets all work together" says viren

They all agree

"Guys are discussing what to do ill order some food and drinks its late lets eat dinner enough with worrying let eat and relax" says fiza

Haan lets enjoy ill play sum music viren armaan take guitars out

Suddenly noise comes

"What was that" says sur

"Di im scared" says babli

"Why are you scared don't be only when you looki n in the mirror you should" tease armaan

"Sur, chutki,choti yahaan aao" says fiza

"Sid and me will stay here viraat and armaan go see what happened" says viren

Viren holds fizas hand "sab theek hoga its nothing" *eyelock*

Waves hand in front "Ji bhai … bhaiii" says varaat

" jaao na" says viren

"Eh are you ok don't worry main hoon nasays sid" (does the main hoon na hair hand shake like zayed khan)

"Oye your no zayed or SRK" smiles sur

'But im becoming your hero right"? flirts sid

"Haan only in your dreams" says sur

"Viren it was just a cat everything is fine" says armaan

"Cat in a pent house we are on the 7th floor"

says sid

"It has to be Krishna im sure of it" says viraat

"Chalo lets eat" says sur

After a while of masti and discussion

"Its late we better go home di will be waiting" says nidha

"Haan lets go" says sur

"Wait fiza Oh I forgot to tell you something "says Viren

"what" says fiza

"Looking beautiful as always" says viren

"Chal haat" says fiza

They all are looking

"Awww" says babli

"Hey nidha I too forgot to tell you something" says viraat

"Kya hai jaldi bolo" says nidha

"You are" .. says viraat

"Haan kya" says nidha smiling

"You are looking"….says viraat

"Bolo"says nidha looking at him waiting hear

"Ugly as always" says smiles viraat

Armaan sid laugh and high five viraat

"Good one man" says sid

"That was brutal" says armaan laughing

Girls give them the eyes

"Di chalo that viraat na ufff have you looked at your own face you look worse than a monkey" says nidha

"Viraat be nice nidha is just as pretty as her fiza di" says viren winks at her

"Look a true majnu talking" says sid

Everyone leaves

25min later At the raizadas

Ramona is waiting for them talking on the cell to some

"ill talk to you later and thank you"closes cell says Ramona

"hi di" says sur

"khaan thi tum sab" questions Ramona

"di we went to the mall" says fiza

"haan di lots of fun we had" says nidha

"mall tho bags kahaan hai I mean shopping nai kare kya" asks Ramona

"di nothing was there that was nice enough to get" says sur

"really your saying this sur who always has to buy sumthing didn't get anything" says Ramona

"di went to the movies"says babli

"acha choti which one" says Ramona

"di whats with all these questions" says fiza

"I wanted to see how long you all will lie" says Ramona

"What di whats happened" says nidha

"Where you really shopping or all partying at fiza new penthouse" says raomona

All are surprised

"Di its not what it seems like we weren't partying" says fiza

"Is that penthouse yours yes or no and haan not partying right scheming against your di to break me up with someone I've really fallen for huh"says Ramona ?

"Yes its my penthouse di but " says fiza

" But what You have pent house and I don't even know where did you get the money for that" asks ramona

"Di what are you saying its not like that "says sur

"Haan Ramona di we are just worried for you Krishna isn't right for you" says nidha

"Haan and di we were not partying" says babli

"Oh I see you all will lie to my face huh then see this" a video on her cell she shows them its them talking about Krishna and eating dinner while laughing n armaan and viren playing their guitars

"It wasn't the cat it was that dirty rat Krishna" says sur

"Sur is that how you talk that sid must be influencing you' says Ramona

"She didn't say anything wrong it's the truth" says nidha

"Di please calm down your making a mole hill into a mountain" says babli

"No im not choti and you fiza tell me what did you do for viren huh you must have done something for him or else why in return would he give you such a big and expenvise gift" says Ramona

"Is di saying what think she trying say" says nidha

"Oh I hope not this isn't looking good" says sur

"What ..what do you mean di you already said so much just come out with what are you implying" says fiza

"You know exactly what im saying fiza but if you have no shame ill say it you had to have slept with him right …I must say you know how to please your man" says Ramona

"O" says sur

"M" says nidha

"G" says babli

In anger first time fiza slaps Ramona

"Di how could you … how could you think that disgusting… you think I … Che I am not like that di I have vaules our upbringing is not like that …you've really hurt me …that's how you see as he gave the penthouse as agift to say he loves me I told him icant take it but he said soon it will ours shaadi ki baad" yells fiza

Ramona hand on her face

"Well upbringing vaules haan idont know is this how our upbringing is slaping your di" says Ramona

"Di stop it what are you saying its not like that" says sur

Nidha and sur are near fiza consoling her

Babli goes in gets water for her

"tell me so how long has this been going on huh do you really come back when you tell me fron your flights or stop and stay in your penthouse with your love veiren … I just hope your pleasing wont make a masi anytime soon ..we Cant afford that disgrace" says Ramona

"oh damn hell no did she just" says nidha

"yes she did" says babli

"fiza takes the water from babli and throws" on Ramona

"that's it di I cant take this anymore you crossed the line you your don't realize what you said you have deeply hurt me made fell likea s**t when its not even true if outsider said this I wouldn't be hurt but you my di thinks this" says fiza

"yes I do after all you are a airhostess your profession is like this infact who know could be a pilot before viren right god knows "what you do while away I mean if here only you have penthouse in town while having your own house . Viren and you are live in right" says" Ramona

fiza drops the empty glass in her hand it falls and breaks stands shocked couldn't believe her ears

Slaps fiza "how dare throw water on me" says Ramona

"what does di being airhostess have do with anything" says babli

"Of course babli you won't think anything of it since your current profession change na from jewelry designer to new music sensation rockstar babli right you too have change won't be long when you do something like this too babli fame and fortune has changed you too don't think I don't see what ramaaan and you have babli you say you hate him but when this hate will become love you wont even know it" says ramona

fiza picks up her cell

"T this is fiza tell meena she doesn't have to go ill coming on the flight ill fill in for her when does it take off ok cool ill be there in a while" (closes the cell) "di just like this broken glass our relationship is like that now I'm going on the flight when I get back I'm moving into my penthouse" says fiza

"No di please don't di" says babli

Nidha calls some one

"Hello KRISHNA congrats your evil plan has succeed ladoo kahaao" hangs up

"Nidha kya kare thi" says Ramona goes to slap her

Nidha holds her hand in mid air .. "oh no you don't you are so blinded by that good for nothing thug Krishna that you cant see you sisters love ,concern and truth he has %$^&#@ brain washed you damn it you just lost fiza di it wont be soon you might even loses us too" says nidha

"Wow you say im brain washed you are nidha by that unsuccessful useless viraat who is not a good influence on you and his brother Viren acts like a innocent good guy traped our fiza by his wealth". Says Ramona

Sur comes back from the kitchen ith lime and chilies "Di you have lost it kise ki nazaar lag gaye hai" says Sur she takes out the nazaar

Babli laughs

Fiza goes in her room packs her things gets ready "nidha sur babli please have my things packed and ask Viren for a key if needed to move things in I want to have it move in ready" she leaves

"I hope your happy this what you wanted right" says sur

"Sur get in the room now all of you are not stepping out of this house" says Ramona

"Yes I am.. im going to the hospital and haan don't make us cross the line" says nidha grabs her coat

"And im going to my rehearsal I don't want anymore drama I need some relaxing" says babli

"And im going to meet sid" says sur

"No your not" says Ramona

"Yes I am and don't make us do things we don't want to don't force us im warming you" says sur

"Sur is that what sid tells you be rude to your di" says Ramona

"Di hah just because your elder doesn't mean you can door say what every you want" says nidha

"Get in the room now sur" yells ramona

"Fine I will but you will regret it from the my sis angel sister to Hitler you have become" says sur

Babli and nidha leave

Sur goes in room

And sneaks out from the window from

All the guys get call from their beloved lover/enemy (for babli and varaat lol )

All Guys to their girls :"What that Krishna wait I'm coming"

Krishna in his home drinking whisky and smiling

"Plan to get my love Ramona Darling successful now plan 2 viraat armaan,sid and viren barbaadi"says Krishna to himself evil smile

That's it for now hope you all like it do comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!!!!! super update!!!!!!!
penthouse part was so hilarious!!!!
loved the cute fight among all the guys.
i have read each dialogue, god knows how many times.
but sad for raizadas.
did not like the fight they had b/c of Krishna, who created a big missunderstanding among the sisters.
i wonder what is the reason behind all this.
i mean why Krishna has done it.
did not like Fiza slapping her older sister at all, eventhough i know Ramona was totally wrong. she crossed the limits when she accused fiza for something so shameless.
beside the sad and emotional scene, i had enjoyed the hilarious part very much.
i was laughing while reading each line and trying to imagine it.
eagerly waiting for next part!!!
please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ramona di hum aapke saath bachpan se rahthe hain...
Krishna tho aaj hi aaye hain...
Woh humse zyaadha important ho gaya hain aapke liye...
Maana ki Fiza di ne haath uthakar acha nahin kiya...
Lekin aapne bhi tho unke baare ithni bhuri baath kahin hain...
Koi apno par ithna shak kartha hain kya...😭
Emotional update Fiza di...but nonetheless superb...
Loved every bit of it...
Krishna Singh has lost his head in love so has our Di...but hain tho humaari badi Di hi na...aap jaldh hi samajh jaogi...
Haila Sur Sid already pyaar mein hain...and so is Fiza and Viren...kab kaise hua yeh...sabki pehli takraar ke baarein mein jaldhi bathana di...eager to know...
Armaan is funny and so is Viraat...but he is irritating too...lol...
Love you for this one Di...
Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh teri... I got scared 🤣 🤣

Fiza.. tum ne mujhpar haath uthaya.. 🤣 🤣 and even threw water on me.. 🤣 🤣 🤣
Main Krishna ke pyaar mein pagal.. 😔 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Fiza.. this is too gud.. My choti 😆 😆
Haww... Sur.. in love.. ☺️ 🤣 🤣 Nidhs.. my swthrt.. 🤣 🤣

the pent house fight was superb. Im scared..🤣 🤣 what is Krishna upto.. 🤔
Edited by KriYa_life - 13 years ago

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