-Dhundlae aks- MaaneetFF THREAD5 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago
muski i loved dis story too...wasnt aware of dis one though...could u pls add me to ur pm list was der for ur previous ffs...

puchki is so dumb...oh man m i waiting for prachi to turn negative or wht...bichara armaan...he is sweet...hope doesnt show up at karan's party...

y maan is vd prachi???????? i hated his statement if parents say yes den wht??????? he knws prachi den y to do dis...bt dey r teens so cant blame dem...bt ya loved geet...mistimia...whts dat btw...

4 updates...whn wil u update again m worried...ur way of narrating it is so diff...awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet might b bubbly n all...bt very clear headed, transparent, confident gal...i love evrythng abt her...

i hate prachi...nt coz she likes maan...coz she is nt a good frnd, nt a good human too...nt a good gf either...cheater...n wanted to kill her vd my bare hands when she said bad abt geet...she is just disgusting...pls kill her or else use coma mein bhej do till d story ends...pls i just hate her

is baar puchki n mistimia ko milwa do...make him understand dat she is his bhootni, pagli, deewani n mistimia...i knw u will take ur own time in dat...oh god how to wait dat long...
Edited by maanmeet1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
srry hun congrats on d new thread nd superb updates
luved it
every single 1 of dem
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muski I don't wanna hate maan.
Plzzz give me some cute maaneet scenes na.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Muski I don't wanna hate maan.
Plzzz give me some cute maaneet scenes na.






i agree wid u...

plz atleast giv him sum hint dat geet is her mishtimia...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally...u come online...pls update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan & prachi sat at the table.. prachi showed the cake she baked for her frd. It was a simple cake.. no decoration or icing.. it was just plain cake. Maan admired their frdship one side.. & he admired prachi for her simplicity. He expected.. her frd to be...another studious kitabhi kida.. typical bhenji types.. he even imagines a chipku girl with glasses.. & plats.. losely hanging salwar.. any way he didn't have grt hopes.. he was just waiting to finish this bday stuff & see the halat of Karan when Geet doesn't reach there for the party.
Prachi ' there she is prachi excitedly got up...
Maan took the last sip of the coke he was taking & got up.. he saw a girl.. looking exactly like he assumed walking towards their direction.. he shook his head.. & kept the glass down to extend his hand.. as prachi said.. this is my best frd Geet
he was almost abt to spit the whole drink on geets angered .. ferocious face..
he was shocked beyond words.. every past confrontation of theirs played back in slow motion.. worse one rubbing in.. .. especially crashing into her green room.. hugging her.. caressing her bare back..
& last but not the least.. their uncalled for kiss..
he gulped the drink in his mouth.. glaring at her annoyed & foiled. His blood burned in fury.. the girl he never wanted to see is prachi's best friend.. dam it had to be Geet.. How irritating she was already in his life.. he can't even tell prachi to get off this stupid girl.. wo kya sochegi.. he has problems with all her frds.. phelen armaan & now this Geet..
now he thought.. armaan phir bhi teehk tha.. ussen tho phir bhi jhel sakten hain..
he scanned her top to bottom.. she topped.. kis angle se yeh padaku lagthi hain.

Geet couldn't believe her eyes.. he is Maan.. she supposedly thought so grt abt this prachi's BF..
way too much. Probably some time even got attracted to his character.. as prachi described Maan..
All the high hope & expectation came crumbling down.. shattered like mirror ..doomed . She blankly looked at Maan & then prachi. She didn't know how to react especially after seeing the happiness & excitement in prachi's eyes. She couldn't compose herself..
is he playing with her feelings.. na.. he doesn't look like that.. but.. why.. he could select any dam girl why prachi!!
is he taking advantage of her innocence may be..
why prachi.. why her.. why break her heart
wat is he upto.. or may I thinking wrong.. may be he is a decent guy..just that my confrontations with him have been always wrong.. dam prachi is so so happy.. wat am I to tell her.
Maan wanted to pounce at her right away.. but wondered wat will prachi think. He didn't want ruin his frdship with prachi because of this stupid ..idiot girl. He didn't know how will she react.. ..
he imagined her .. pouncing at him.. pulling his hair.. screaming madly.. throwing things from the table.. he snapped out his scary thoughts when he felt her hand softly slide into his..
hello, I am Geet.. followed by a mean squeeze..hurting each others hand that was in hold..
he looked at prachi & then smiled weakly to Geet.
Before he could say anything Geet excused herself to use the washroom.
Maan sat restlessly shocked by her silence. He drank another glass of water.. & excused him self.. he rushed in the same direction as Geet.

Geet went into the wash room & walked restlessly ..
Maan..
yeh hain..
aisen kaisen ho sakta hain.. she couldn't believe it. .. the imaginary image of him in her mind was so strong & perfect.. that even all their past encounters seem to make no sense... r they both same person..
she splashed water on her face .. & took paper towel to wipe her face.. when she looked back up in the mirror.. she saw him glaring at her with those ferocious eyes
wat .she looked at the surrounding & the door
aap pagal ho kya.. yeh girls rest room hain.
his face totally changed.. as he walked towards her
listen to me
mujhe aapki koi baat nahi sun ni.. plz leave
listen he insisted.. when she snapped to leave.. he pinned her to the wall.. listen.. listen clearly he whispered in her ear.. she put up a struggle & was about to shout at him.. he covered her mouth with his hand..
chillawa mut
she stopped & looked straight in his eyes.. furiously.
U better stay out my matters.
She tried to push him away..
thats my best friend ur playing with
he hit his hand very hard on the wall .. that word playing definitely hurt him.. she could make out that..
just stay off my matters he rasped... covering her mouth with his palm.. so that she can't say anything..
she tried to escape. he laughed at the way she tried to fight, but they both knew he was going to have his way again. He pinned her harder.. His hands went into her hair tugging slightly, a yelp escaped her lips as he pulled her closer.. the devilish grin plastered on his face when he watched her eyes flutter. She groaned, as he got his mouth close to her ears... .
she is my good frd.. I don't want u to poison her brain.
She yelped again, suddenly weaker. She had stopped fighting.. seeing those eyes... even though it was spitting fire.. & she wanted to smash his face.. but then the thought of prachi was making her weak.. she didn't want to her to get hurt.
She didn't try to move, or fight him anymore...
they both stood close.. panting.. catching for breath... he slowly removed his palm that covered her mouth.. his fingers.. slowly..moved the wet strands of hair away.. she glared angrier..
He went very slow & let his lips almost brush very tenderly her lips.. mingling their breath. The feel of his hot breath brushing against her skin sent shivers down her spine. She ignored the feel & turned away her face.. he smirked he didn't back up.. his eyes gaped the milky skin of her cheeks turning red.. then his eyes moved to meet her eyes .. she was definitely uncomfortable with him being so close. His lips slowly pressed her cheeks.. making them turn crimson red. Geet was too dumbfounded to even move. She turned into a statue. Her heart was pounding hard, it wasn't like he never kissed her, but rather the thought of wat was in his mind nervoused her..
btw happy birthday ..he placed a small peck again on the same spot.
Leaving her shocked & perplexed.


precap
Maan again irritated with geet
-PREV PART 58 NEXT PART 60-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow me first again now lemme read the part...byee

awsome part dee...lovvvd it...

i was wondering , y dint he recognise her voice ??

when is geet going to meet jr.khurana...waiting eagerly for that moment...😊 continue soon

Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES!!
I think geet has recognized maan's touch as Puchki but it hasnt registered in yet.. 😕
and maan i think he should have recognized it.. 😉
i guess Maan's family will be the key for botth of them to recognized each other as puchki and mistimia.. 😆😊
please get rid of prachi lol..
she really irritates me..
arghh 😡😡
Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago

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