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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

dear do one thing just write th epart and save it in ur system so that even if network problem continues then also u could have it and past it tomorrow when the network is alright but plz dont make us wait till monday😭😭


i try to do it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 15
Part 16
when sanjay got a call she called maan and informed him and cut as soon sanjay came as she don't want to reveal her identity before him...


after there usual chit chat sanjay told geet about anjana.. who is stephens family friends daughter now staying in stephen's house as paying guest and doing her medicines in famous college in delhi.. where sanjay fell in love at first sight..Where anjana is the reserved type and polite in nature totally opposite to geet very silent and very choosy in her friends..

where geet already know about anjana through meera...and she also know that sanjay is having soft corner on her...

where as now suddenly anjana is going back to her home town now that she wont return back to delhi which made sanjay hurt and he want to propose her before she left the city so that he rushed to delhi from london after hearing the news of anjana leaving the city...

Where he told every thing about anjana to geet and ask geet to help him to propose anjana...geet also as a friend assures him to help him

But geet mind get diverted when she hears a word love... those 4 letter word really got magic it took her to maan she can't stop thinking about him through out the whole conversation after some time and blushed in between she is lost in her own world with her maan...as soon there conversation over she rushed to KM...

Where geet is now eagerly waiting for maan to reach home she also prepared his favourite food and waiting for him to return soon from office..but maan didn't come for a long time she chides him and started to write some thing in the diary and blushed in between while writing she lost in her own world she didn't even find maan in front of her...

She is upset when maan didn't eat the food prepared by her... but she again regain herself when he said that he need to talk to her but fate didn't allow them to talk through sanjay's call

ye sanjay bhi na...Is this time he got to call me? and maan why he slept so soon.. another days he is wake up like own but today see he slept so soon with out talking to me...

she chides sanjay and maan for some time after she finishes her phone conversation with sanjay and slipped in her bed and slept so soon thinking about her maan and dreaming about him...

again the fate didn't let them to meet each other for the next two days..due to her academics where her exams are fast approaching and also she is now playing cupid in between anjana and sanjay...which made her busy ..

Today she is very tired all her academic over and today she is all set free from all works from tomorrow onwards she had her study holidays...she is free from all her works she waiting for maan to come but he didn't come he informed dadi that he is having important meeting tomorrow so he going to stay in office (KC)...

again geet can't able to see maan that day but she think of him...

for the past 2 days she is avoiding maan her mind is asking her the reason then why she is missing him badly now...
#am avoiding maan i can't see his face straightly i can't just be friend with him as earlier i am blushed when ever my eyes meet his i can't even face him...don't know what happen to me now a days i want to see him hear his voice but i can't stand before him for a seconds his eyes (thinking of his eyes)oh my god how much spark in his eyes how much sharp it is i feel his gaze is just going straightly to my heart...
i can't face him so i used to avoid him for the past days but i can't live with out seeing him today he is not there and am not even able to sleep my heart is longing to see his face only once and hear his voice...#

while thinking she dozed off.. next day morning she wake up very late and found that maan didn't come to home yet...

she straightly went to see sanjay today sanjay going to propose anjana according to geet plans...Geet and sanjay arrived the spot before anjana came as usual when ever they met they forget the whole world and enjoy in there talks..

This is the spot where maan sees geet and sanjay talking

where geet felt maan's presence and searched him through out the restaurant but she didn't find him but she found anjana coming towards them.. geet excused her self and went behind the wall and watched them by hiding herself...

when sanjay proposed anjana she imagine that maan proposing her like the way sanjay did and smiled all through her dream is broken when she heard the clap sounds she noticed that anjana accepted his proposal and both seems to be very happy at a sudden jerk she again felt the maan's presence and she turned towards the entrance where she found maan moving out of the glass door she rushed towards him but before that he went and get in to his car.. where she found the bunch of red roses near the entrance and found that it is brought by maan from the security over there...

how come maan came here and roses in his hand which made geet distract from every thing and start to think about maan...where while thinking about maan she entered the KM where she was lost in her own world and walk towards her room where she heard dadi's screaming she came out from her world and run towards dadi's room...

where she found dadi is lying down in the bed in unconscious state.. she immediately called doctor and arranged ambulance she admitted dadi soon in hospital...after that she tried maan again and again but he is out of range and also after some time his mobile switched off...she again called meera who rushed to hospital soon she got the news ...

dadi got the minnor heart attact which is the shocking news again geet got from meera... again meera and geet tried to maan but they not able to contact him...after that they got the information from adi that he went to london...

Precap:Maaneet files divorse...
Part 17


small update today bear with me friends will try to give long update on monday...till monday no update friends...going to prepare for my exams...


sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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thankyou for all your support 🤗




Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
but filed for divorce
so sad dear
dont no what happens when he knows the truth dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

ossum dear

but filed for divorce
so sad dear
dont no what happens when he knows the truth dear


thank you dear
this part has more mistakes due to my net work problem...
thanks for bearing all those mistakes..
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Posted: 13 years ago
aesomeupdate
but precap is scary
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part dear...bt short one...

Loved it... I think maan had mistaken realationship btw geet&sanjay... Bt hw come maan is in tat sport tat to with roses...

Ahh precap is scary y they were files 4r divoces

all the best fr ur xams dear... Do well...

Will be waiting fr next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsweet

Nice part dear...bt short one...

Loved it... I think maan had mistaken realationship btw geet&sanjay... Bt hw come maan is in tat sport tat to with roses...

Ahh precap is scary y they were files 4r divoces

all the best fr ur xams dear... Do well...

Will be waiting fr next update...



Dear its geet's pov of the same scene where maan came with roses to meet geet but he misunderstood anjana as geet and went back...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... but sad they are filing divorse. will be waiting for monday dear for your update... All the very best for your exam. Do well. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

so maan understood and left

and geet is all confused what happened between them
wasnt maan informed that dadi is not well?
and who filed the divorce? maan or geet? or maan said something harsh to her
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Posted: 13 years ago

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