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Posted: 13 years ago
Darling hum ko update kab mila ga:😍)???
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Originally posted by: tanei

Darling hum ko update kab mila ga:😍)???



Most probably today...
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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dadi got the minnor heart attact which is the shocking news again geet got from meera... again meera and geet tried to maan but they not able to contact him...after that they got the information from adi that he went to london...

Dadi health is going worst day by day its very difficult for geet to manage the situation which is very new to her that too in the absence of maan

She managed to maintain the situation well in the help of meera...But inside of her heart she missing her maan very badly at last finally after a week of struggle now dadi's maas health is improving slightly.. Doctor advised her to take rest and discharged her form the hospital..geet managed every thing very well and brought her home safely to her room holding her shoulder and made her lydown comfortably on the bed. After settled in the bed dadi posed a question about maan .

Geet maan ka kuch patha chala?

Nahi dadi.. adi and meera trying there level best to find out about him.

Maan bhi na.. don't know what he thinking about himself and showing this kind of attitude again... don't know now what is cooking in his mind now'.

Geet questioned with her eyes..

Haan geet beta maan used to go away from the city usually like this before your marriage but after you came that I found more changes in him but again he doing these kind of things which is not bearable for me' don't know how to change him..

When geet about to ask some thing and opened her mouth but before that meera enter the room and shouting

Dadi maan one good news maan will be here with in few hours..

Kya ? both questioned meera..

Haan dadi maa, before few minutes only adi called and inform me thisat last adi contact maan through one of his client and informed him about your health when he came to know about your health immediately assures that he will come in next flight to delhi..

This news makes both geet and dadi happy where as geet seems to be more happy than all others...for meera and daadi it's a usual thing maan used to do so they felt its his normal behavior of him but for geet its very new after she came to mansion maan didn't go away to any business trip like this without informing her..where as geets happiness and joy is clearly visible in her face which she tried to hide but she fails which made meera to tease her when dadi also accompany meera with her teasing sessions..geet runs out of dadi's room and went to her room and locked inside

She straightly goes in front of the mirror and checks her self in the mirror' where she found herself very dull so thought to change her dress she almost tried each and every dress in her wardrobe but yet she didn't find the good one.. so at last turned towards the pink salwar which is lying in the bed and she found it better than all others and changed..

After the dress selection session her focus is now turned towards her bindi..same process which repeat for her to choose her bindi not only for dress and bindi she repeat the same process for all her make up items.. at last with lots of tries and trails she finished her make up successfully

At last she filled her forhead with sindoor till now she didn't this as a process of make up i for dadi's shake but today she filled it for herself for her maan for her hubby she felt very special to fill her forehead with that red sindoor for her maan she is very proud to to fill her forehead in the name of maan...She turned towards maan's photo which is hanging in the wall behind her. She stand still see his picture for a while and after some time she made an angry face and turned side wards and started to speak to that pic as if he is standing in front of her

why you went to business trip with out informing me that too London.. you know how much I missed you all of a sudden dadi maa health also went bad. How much worried you have any idea about it you didn't even thought to call me at least once you don't even want to speak to me only once..For the whole 7 days you didn't remember me at least...Mr. khurana if you think you are Mr.Khurana and showing this much attitude then am also Mrs.khurana don't' forget thatif you didn't remember me then why should I?

After a while she took the photo frame which is near the dressing table and hugged it tightly very close to her heart and sit in her cot in half lying position resting her back comfortably on pillow and slightly remove the photo frame from her heart where her eyes were filled with tears now and started blabbering again

Why you left me alone maan..Why you didn't inform me about your trip..you didn't even find time to call me at least once why you doing this to me "I LOVE YOU MAAN" I cant live with out you .. With you my happiness and joy binds with my day starts with you and ends with you with out you there is no life for me don't go away from me I want you till my death don't ever left me alone like this don't leave me maan I want you till my dead, don't go away from me maan don't leave me alone ever...

She started to wipe the tears which fells on the photo frame near his cheeks and slightly rubbed his face with her fingers as if its is real and if she rub hardly it will hurt him .. she came out of own land when hears some one knocks her room door before she ask question that voice told her that

Madam ji sab came.

At a jerk she get up from her bed where a sudden smile spread all around her face and she wiped of her tears which is rolling down her cheeks and run near the door to open but before she open some thing strikes her mind so returned back to mirror and checked her self again and correct her dress again she runs to open the door but again some thing strikes her mind and came back to her cot and placed his photo frame again in the table as it where before and adjust the bed spread..as she know maan likes perfection

she opened the door finally and founds the whole mansion is busy and all are moving here and there busily its is the situation prevail in the mansion when ever maan reached ...she came running down the stairs and about to bumps into meera who is coming holding the coffee cup in her hand but geet stops before hitting her

geet slow down slow down.. any ways maan came back after a week if he sees you running like this then he will again run away from here..

geet beats meera slightly on her shoulder playfully..

By the way for whom Is this coffee .

For whom else other than kadoose who is there in mansion drinking this black coffee that too with less sugar

Both laughed at that and started to walk towards dadi's room..

Where maan is sitting beside dadi and holding her hand where his eyes where filled with tears but he is not crying.. his fear is clearly visible in his face and even in his eyes of loosing his dadi

how this and all happen at sudden you know dadi maa how much you made me afraid.. after hearing that I can't stay peacefully.. I should not started to London like this at least I should informed you.what doctor said?

Maan keep on posting his question for which dadi and meera started to answers but geet didn't hear any one's words and didn't see any ones face where her eyes where stuck on maan's face she is lost in her own dream land where her eyes where fixed on maan for a long time she didn't get her eyes away from him until she felt that his eyes where looking straight into hers and at a sudden jerk she wake up from her dream land and found that all the three in the room were looking at her.. when meera asked her some thing but she didn't reply and stands like a statue so she called out her name but she didn't so all looking at her to answer but she remains in her dream land looking at maan with out blinking her eyes where dadi and meera started to smile at her which made geet embarrassed mmediately she went out of the room saying that I will check and come weather lunch is ready or not with a her heads down and her cheeks turned red due to blush

When she came out of the room she hit her forehead with her palms with a blush and goes straightly to kitchen and spend some time there by commanding servants and guiding cooks.after some time meera enter the kitchen to check weather the lunch is prepared and she called

geet.Is lunch ready?

Haan mera its ready..with in few minutes I about to bringing it to dadi maa 's room

No need geet dadi maa is adamant to come out and eat along with us so maan going to bring dadi maa here ..

#This means again am going to meet maan in front of dadi maa and meera no way this time I not going in front of him I lost my self If am near him if I see his face so have to keep distance from him'#

Meera noticed that geet is thinking some thing and she tapped her and asked..

Where you went now.?common geet don't say that again you gone to your dream land with your maan

How do you know that I lost in dream land with maan..Saying this she bit her tongue in embarrassment

Meera smiled at her innocence and said.. geet don't forget that I too in love it happens to me some times so don't need to worry it happens when our loved one is near us..

After again caught by meera geet decided to not go in front of maan or see maan but she is searching for the good time to spend with him alone but unfortunately fate didn't allow her to speak with him in the entire day where he is discussing about dadi maa's health with dadi maa and meera from the morning till evening..After dadi fell as sleep he went to his room where geet is waiting eagerly for him but unfortunately she can't speak in front of him seeing his eyes which is sparkling and keep mum after lying down in bed she cribs herself for some time for not able to speak in front of him and also why he didn't speak her in the entire day. At last she dozed off to sleep

In the morning immediately after she wake up started to search him in the bed but he is not there in fact he is no where in the mansionshe cant ask any one about him as meera already left to Mumbai yesterday as she cant able to extend her leave and dadi also sleeping due to her heavy dose of medicines at last she came to know about maan through the servants that he went to office so soon and also he asked her to get ready

Did you know why sir asked me to get ready?

Don't know madam ji sir bus itna kaha

Ok..Then..

She didn't get any information from him more that but she obeyed maan's orders and get ready blankly with out any clues'when she took her mobile she found 20 missed calls from maan so she called him back but he remains busy so she cut the call and checked her inbox where is the message from maan

Geet I send u driver come with him am waiting for you here'try to come as soon as possible'

Geet is in confused state get in to the car which maan send for her where the driver is already waiting for her outside she get in to the car and started to ask driver about where we going but driver said

Don't know madam ji sab just gave me the address and asked me to bring you there

She came to know that what ever driver said is true when he asked some one in the street about the address where she is lost in her own world thinking about all this suddenly she came out of her thought when she heard some one knocking the glass window of the car.. Driver started to shout at the small little girl who is keeping a bunch of white roses in her hand geet stopped driver and opened the window and pulled the cheeks of that small little girl lovingly and said no need but the girl is compelling her to buy at least one rose geet gave her the money for the whole bunch and said This all roses for you keep it with yourself..But the girl pulled the money from geets hand and pushed the whole bunch of roses in geet's hand and run away from there

She knows very well that maan don't like flowers so she avoid it but suddenly after seeing those roses she changed her mind and remembered the red roses which maan brought on that day..

# so it means he started liking flowers now so why should I throw it may be he likes this one..#

But fate decide some thing else for her

After reaching place driver opened the door for her she felt maan presence there through his perfume smell and also see's his car outside and confirms that he is here and go inside where she found its like some ones office and where one girl come and take her inside as if her arrival is already known to her nd asked her to sit on the couch she started to stare the things around and all of a sudden she found maan presence in the room through his perfume smell..which is very well know to her now.

Maan and a lady came out from opposite room where geet sitting the lady is seems to be in between 45-50 age who is new to geet... Maan introduce geet to her and she greeted her as Mrs.Khurana..But maan forgets to introduce her to geet where maan and the lady started to discuss some thing seriously which is not understand by geet for a moment...at last the lady asked geet seeing her that you both are ready to get divorce right...so its came under mutual concerns there will be no serious problem in this then you both need to sigh this papers and have to wait for few more months to get divorce

Where she started to talking continuously but geet didn't hear any thing other word divorce which stuck in her mind she didn't came out from the shock which she got from that word maan and the lawyer started to discuss some thing for a long time where geet didn't speak or react she is num for some time when maan called her name with out any reaction she just said hmm

is every thing ok for you..?

She didn't know any thing about what he is asking but seeing his face again and again to find out is he really means to get divorce

Maan again called geet

Are you ok?.. With all this terms and conditions check the papers and sign it geet.

She didn't see any thing just signed it where he showed her to sign and hand over the papers to them and came out silently in a confused state.

Maan and geet both get in to the car in which geet came and driver drove the car to home where as geet still mum and didn't speak a word till maan asked driver to stop the car and asked him to brought water bottle..

Geet this call from him made her to turn and look in to his eyes

As you know very well that we both are not interested in this marriage from the beginning and acting like normal couple in front of dadi and others... I know its how much hard for you to do this dadi maa and meera told that you were very much worried when I went to London but I only know that you acted before them... I think it's not fair that what am doing to you... you have rights to choose your own life...You may like some one else and wish to go away from this fake life... I don't want to be selfish...I don't want you to act just for me and for my family... you choose what you want after we got divorce you choose your own life.

Geet still didn't speak any thing till he completes then she asked

It means you didn't like me from the beginning??

Maan get shocked by her question for which he didn't had answers all of a sudden driver entered into the car with water bottle where as both stopped there conversation and didn't speak till they reach home after they reach home geet get down from the car and goes inside the mansion.

Precap: yet to be decide..😳...

Part 18
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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

ohhh he didnt tell her why he is calling her at that place

she should tell him she what she wants from him
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oh nooo... poor maaneet. update soon dear... will they come to know their love towards each other.... 😭
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Originally posted by: lallu06

oh nooo... poor maaneet. update soon dear... will they come to know their love towards each other.... 😭



oh no don't cry dear😛...yeah of course they came to know about there love towards each other..😃...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome dear

loved it.
thanx 4 PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
so now what ll maan say to her?
ll he force with her dear...
hope u ll update soon
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Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

ossum dear

so now what ll maan say to her?
ll he force with her dear...
hope u ll update soon


i try my level best to improve the story..and update the next part..

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