Bani n Jai Fanfic1

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well since everyone was writin Fanfics about jai n Bani i thought i write one too.

So starts off with Jigs talkin to herself she isnt in the Waila house forget where she went anyways... she heard about Anu gettin married n thinks of going bak since its her only daughter but before this she needs to do soemthing abut Bani.. Roshni can't do anything at the moment so she has to think of something. so she calls some guys n decides to get rid of Bani once n for all. dude is a serial killer. Now Jigs puts Bani's pic in an envolpe and right beside was Jai's n now the phone rang so she quickly puts the picture inside not noticing that bani;s dropped n Jai's is put inside. She tells the servent to go deliver it to the man n the servant goes.

Back at the walia house preperations r goin on since its Anu enganment tonight everyone is busy and then a dude comes (killer) dressed as worker n see Jai. Now Bani's never seen him before so suspects him but relaizing he must be new she ignores it.

Its evenin n the party is goin all good and Jigs makes her entrance n wishes Anu all the best everyone is happy... Ranveer is mad that she came while bani was still in the house. She tells him that she has a plan... so now everything went all good n the guest are leavin Jigs get scared that the killer dude didnt show up so she calls him. Bani is right beside him n he picks up the phone n tells jigs that he will finish the job in matter of mintues. Bani hears n is shocked.

Now she doesnt noe who is target n follows him the killer is talkin to his men sayin to have the car ready as he will shoot Jai n come Bani is really scared n runs to find Jai but cant since most ppl r leavin n he is probably somewhere sayin goodbyes.

Well she finally spots him n so does the killer now there is a race between both n the killer n Bani.... the killer is walkin towards Jai he is a bit closer while Bani is in tears n running to get there before him.... jus then has the killer lifts his gun bani stands there Jai has his bak turned so can't see the killer but he sees Bani n turns to her n the killer has a perfect target n...Bani runs infront of Jai n bang there is a gun shot! Now the killer runs everyone is shocked seein this Jai n Bani stare at each other n Bani falls into Jai's arms cuz she got shot in the back. Now jai has tears while Adit n sahil n everyone esle all yellin to get the killer, N Rona whose in tears callin for the abumlance n doctor!

this is the first time i wrote a fanfic please forgive if i did something wrong but ya i write the rest tom!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh wow!!!

Hope Bani is okay!!


please cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Isha

That was well written and interesting 👏 😊

Would definitely like to know what s gonna happen next

Love KP 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow isha.....tht was great👏no wait......it was awesome.........oh! gosh! wat will happen to bani.........great story.............wow!!!!....plzzz continue soon😳

lisa😉

Edited by KHJL - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 LOVE IT 👏 👏 👏
Nice fan fic.... Please Continue soon... Hope nothing happen to Bani

Muskan 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice fiction 😛 It sounds intresting 👏 hope Bani is safe and sound 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow... 👏 👏 👏 please continue soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice nice 👏 👏 .. its a new thought , i must say u have a gr8 imagination ..
ur fan fic is so interesting , looking forward to reading the second part .. keep on the good work .. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome...lyke ur first part!!!! while i was reading ur ff and got to the part of the serial killer and Bani finding out dat Jai is the target...i hoped dat it would be bani whu would save J by running infront of the gun and getting shot herself....
pls continue soon..wanna know wats gonna happen to Bani...
sweetu
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