I was reminding myself.. "I'm not supposed to comment..no no no"
But then Bang on your notes always gets on my nerves.
Falling flat? eh?
Come near me I so wanna punch you😡
You are not supposed to decide it!
Oh yeah am angry.. I'll get back to you let me write about the update first..
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First and foremost.. waiting.. Tell me about it.
I hate waiting.. who won't anyway.
And guess what no one made me wait for long.. or else i thought 3 months back..until one day my friend made me wait for one damn hour in bus stop. I got back to her by making her wait equally. Oh btw it wasn't intentional. Woh bas ho gaya😆
Jokes apart...
But somehow I am yet to bring myself to enjoy this ancillary benefit that my black coat licenses.
This alone shows what Maan is. Trust me there are very little Maans of FFs i came to like but all of your Maans are extremely lovable. And this Maan isn't an exception. I liked him from the beginning. You may think what've he done but i like him based on a simple fact that he puts someone above himself. Nanhi.
It doesn't matter to me if Nanhi is Geet and what relation they shared. I like to read a story as a story rather than biased on the characters.. besides i do have faith on you. Yes you revealed something to me but trust me even if you didn't i would have loved it as much as i do it now..
This reminds me of Sunday. Stifling a groan, I racked my brains trying to comprehend how I put myself in that spot.I asked you in my first comment I'm intrigued about Sunday. And you simply told me everyone looks forward for a sunday and shut me up. But now I know my assumptions were true.. Oh la la!
(Oh BTW this isn't Dirty Picture's Oh la la🤢)
Those were the only notions that float with a certainty of white above the murky waters of charcoal doubts.I give you this👏 I know what it takes to do a simple research and you including the representation of colors in this story makes it all more beautiful..
Jealousy.. a strong feeling. Isn't it?
You know I don't find it odd at all as Maan does for him being Jealous and for him getting bothered over something.. But trust me I understand..
sometimes with the first meet we form an impression..we form a bond.. every thing doesn't have LOGIC as one of my family members say.. Ah you have to listen to her.. she always gets logic and you can't say NO to anything she says.. No wonder she studied law.😆
Entry of Sameera! And it is obvious now.. Oh HO Oh Ho!
I'm dancing.. This is what you are. You know how to rise the curiosity in your readers. Yet you say "Writing is not my forte.."
Oh yeah I staked you so much and I do know JADTBY lines by heart and I think i merged two dialogues.. 😆
A flash of citron has me enraptured
Nothing else registers, nothing else matters
I am a BIGGG fan of your writing..but your poems are something I adore a lottt!
Eventhough i bet everyone got a mini-heart attack with the end, I am up for it. Bring it on!
Now am waiting for the next part like anything..more than that I'm ready for the comments.
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Coming to your note..
I somehow feel this story is falling flat. I was planning to make this a 7-8 part SS but now I have my doubts. Because the story ends where everything is revealed. And revelation is all that everyone is seeking.
Sorry for not replying for everyone btw. I have relatives coming over in evening. I did not have much time. Thank you for all the appreciation. For everyone who has left a comment, it does means a lot.
Everyone is seeking revealation for one reason.. to see Geet.. more than that the importance Maan gives for another female makes us, Maaneetians (as we call ourselves) protective..
But seriously Jazz why change your opinion..
consider Me.. I would crib for an update.. from you but still if you say you can't update i understand.. there's nothing wrong in WANTING and the readers naturally want the suspense to end ut the story won't progress if we do that. Isn't it?
The story is perfect with the pace.. and I would be you not to change your initial plans.. We readers have a right to crib.. But you are not supposed to draw conclusions from it. Understand?
Wait why am i giving a lecture?
Ugh i feel like a lecturer..PS: You said you missed my comments. Didn't you?
Ab bhugto!😡
Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago
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