love hua.........

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey mamta,riya,fatmah,sweetu,tink,shaista,candylove
ive started a new post but i'm carrying on where i left off.

jai stared at bani and eijaz smiling(but his inside his
animal was ripping him apart)
jai held out his hand,but bani didn't wanted to(scared what jai might do).she looked at jai and then looked at eijaz,
jai pulled her anyway(really hard)and took her to the dance floor,(forcefully)
instead of holding her hip,he held her on her back and pulled bani towards him(bani could not get out of his cluthes because jai was hlding her TIGHT).
jai held bani's hand and this time squeezed it(poor bani)
(chand chupa badal mein-hum dil de chuke sanam in the background).

next ff coming right up.
jnb fans, hope u enjoyed it!

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irisheyes458 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great! thanks for including me haha!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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j-bani....who do like dancing with better
your husband or ur new boyfriend?(gritting his teeths)
b-mr waliya please!
j-shhhhhhhhh
answer my question!
b-mr waliya,let me go please.(her eyes was nearly teary because of jai's behaviour) jai he was holding bani really tightly that she bani wanted to give a scream in pain.bani pushed jai and walked away with tears in her eyes.
jai stood there completely blank and guilty.jai walked after bani.(poor bani,he hurt her real badly)

next ff coming right up!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good dear...keep it up and come with more ranvir's ff....eagerly waiting to tie knot with him...i wonder how will my wedding would be.....i think i will ask ekta to help me out....and 4 those who r aftre ranvirrrr,this tym i wont spare them,directly m gonna take my janu to another planet....! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol;fatmah,fatmah,fatmah
don't worry i'll make sure ranveer stays yours.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatmah5000

good dear...keep it up and come with more ranvir's ff....eagerly waiting to tie knot with him...i wonder how will my wedding would be.....i think i will ask ekta to help me out....and 4 those who r aftre ranvirrrr,this tym i wont spare them,directly m gonna take my janu to another planet....! 😆

😆

lamo fatamh i think its clearly clear that ranveer is your husband, so you don't need to run off with him to another planet, and i will also help you out with your wedding😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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bani was sitting on the bed wiping her tears off.
jai put his hand on her shoulder,a startled bani got up from the bed and tld jai to stay away from her.
j-look bani,
i'm.....i....
b-mr waliya,don't come next to me!what do you want from me!
please...please just stay away!
j-i never wanted to hurt you...i....
(he gave a big sigh).
jai walked towards bani and took her hand and rested it on his chest(where his heart is)
bani's eyes were moist.she could not understand what jai wanted.
j-i'm sorry bani... i....i just can't stand you with another man.when yu told me that you wanted divorce ,i felt as if my heart was ripped off and buried away.(J 4 JEALOUSY!)
jai was holding bani's hand.(softly)
jai let her hand go and held her cheeks(aaaaaaaw)
b-mr waliya why shouldn't i dance with anyone else,
i didn't like the fact that you were dancing with sweetu,your MY HUSBAND.
jai looked at bani with a shocked face but also happy that she felt the same.
bani's mouth dropped and looked down with embarrassment.
b-um...i mean......actually
jai's anger and tension had faded away,he saw what he was pining for.
LOVE in bani's eyes,
and ONLY for him.
jai gave a kiss on bani's forehead and bani looked up at jai blushing.
jai kissed bani's both cheeks where her tears were flowing
(bani closed her eyes)
(jiya dharak dharak-at the background)
jai looked at bani's innocent,sweet face and smiled,he
went closer to her.
j-i love you(in her ear)
bani opened her eyes and looked at jai,she could not believe this,was she dreaming or is this real?
she had no words to speak,her heart skipped a beat.
b-i...i.....(bani just could not speak,her mouth was dry
and her heart was still beating very fast.
j-(chuckling)don't worry bani,you could take your time,no rush.
promise.
jai gave her a kiss on her fore head once more,
he walked off out of the room leaving bani speechless.

next ff coming up!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏
areh vah!!!! excellent...
cnt help but notice dat my name was mentioned ( not my real name tho...) 😆 😆 😆 ...nice to know dat Mrs. walia (aka Bani) is jelouse of me!!! 😆 ..continue soon...wanna know wat ur gonna come up wif...n am even more curiose bout B and J!!!
sweetu 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow !!! thats soo cool!!! i cant believe you fatmah!!! thats so funny!!! 😆 😆 😆 your getting married to ranveer!!!! 😆 😆 😆 Good luck!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i always wanted ejaz to play a kabab mein haddi but not evil as he is only another hot hunk who can give jai a tough competition so i love ejaz_anita4eve for writing this fan fic its awsome
love
annu

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